Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the war at home...even if i wish i did.

The parts in bold are the little bits where they are thinking, and it shows you them on their own.

Hillary is at Brenda's house. Brenda is getting food from the kitchen whilst Hillary is sitting on the couch with her knees up to her chest.

'So...what am I telling your parents today? Hillary's in the bathroom Mr Gold. Hillary's studying Mrs Gold. She doesn't want to be interrupted.' Brenda immitated herself on the phone to Dave and Vicky. Hillary looked around to her.f

"No. What? Do you think I only come round here so that you can lie for me? Brenda you're my friend and I need to talk to a really good friend who I can tust." Hillary looked up, as though she was thinking.

"On second thought, I'll go see Lauren," Hillary stood up. Brenda rushed to her. "No...I want to listen to you. What's going on?" Brenda asked, clearly wanting gossip. Hillary sat back down.

"Brenda you cant tell anyone..ok?" Hillary looked her friend in the eyes. Brenda realized this was serious and nodded.

"Ok...so...my parents found out I slept with Taye" Hillary confessed. Brenda looked shocked. Her big brown eyes were wide.

"You slept with Taye?"

Hilary nodded silently.

"When?" Brenda asked, with a big grin.

"Erm...about a week before prom," Hillary admitted. Brenda looked confused. "So...why are you telling me now? I mean, you could have told me then, but you didn't...what's different now?" She asked. Hillary looked at Brenda.

"Brenda" she raised her voice slightly. Brenda looked round at Hillary. Hillary rolled her eyes down.

"No!" Brenda souded very shocked. "You can't be? No way!" Hillary just shrugged her shoulders.

"So you don't actually know?" Brenda questioned Hillary. Hillary shook her head as tears formed in her eyes.

"Oh Hill! Come on...look, you can use one of my tests upstairs if you like," Brenda offered. Hillary Laughed.

"Are you that much of a slut that you need to keep tests in your bathroom...not even one test, but tests!" Brenda shrugged her shoulders.

"What can I say? I'm just a slut. You always knew that." she replied.

"So do you want one?" Brenda looked at Hillary. Hillary looked back. She nodded again.

"Geez Girl, Talk!" said Brenda, showing her upstairs. Hillary laughed.

"Sorry, i'm just...nervous...nautious" she replied, putting her hand to her mouth.

"That's disgusting...please don"t throw up infront of me" Brenda opened the bathroom door. "Right..in the medicine cabinet..but you can only use one...i might need the rest" Brenda told her, closing the door.

Hillary locked the door and pressed her back to it. She took a deep sigh and tears began to fall from her eyes.

Ok Hillary, you have to do this. If you can't do it with Brenda then you'll have to do it with your mother, and then what if you're wrong? Eh? Then you"ll be in a whole lot of trouble for nothing!
Hillary thought to herself, taking a test from the cabinet. She gently opened the box and read the instructions. She peed on the stick and rested it on the sink.
What am I going to do if it's positive? When dad found out I had sex with Taye, he couldn't look at me. Now I have to tell him that i'm pregnant! Well...only if the test is positive, but i"m sure it is.
Hillary picked up the test. "Oh God!" she cried out loud. Brenda was listening at the door.

"What's wrong?" she asked, with no expression in her voice. Hillary ignored her and fell backwards to sit an the toilet seat.

"Brenda" Hillary had a croaky voice, about to break into a cry. "Can I have a glass of water please?" she asked, standing up to unlock the door.

"That bad huh?" said Brenda as she got a glass of water from downstairs. Hillary kept the test in her hand and followed Brenda.

"Yeah. It's positive. I can't..I can't do this Brenda. I need my mom. She's done this before. I mean, i'm eighteen, she was even younger. But I know what she's gonna say. She's going to say "Hillary we raised you better than this" and dad..he"s going to be worse. "Get out, I don't know you anymore". Oh my gosh! Brenda, they're gonna throw me out! Then me and my baby will have no one, because, well Taye isn't exactly the daddy type, and your parents already think i'm a bad influence on you! The only place i'll be able to go is...is...the mall!" Hillary cried, emphasising the last two words and holding on to Brenda"s shoulder. Brenda pushed Hillary onto the couch.

"Ok...sort yourself out! You don"t even have to tell them yet! I mean, just work out what you want to do. Wow! I'm actually giving you advice because of a mistake you made during sex! Sorry erm...just..wait. You could drop subtle hints but don't tell them, let them ask you. It'll be easier that way," Brenda said picking up Hillary"s coat. "Now go, take your test with you, and don't come back to me or call me until your parents know!" She pushed Hillary out of the front door.

Ok. So, everyone please please please tell me what you think. I have more for this fic, but i'm not adding it until I get some revies, it is already written, just needs to be added.
I'm kinda into the whole teenage pregnancy stories, not always fanfics, i'm just really interested in the topic. I would really appreciate some ideas, obviously, if you give idea's and I use them, you're name will be mentioned at the end of the chapter(s) that you have helped with. Please please please review, it is so important for me to know what you think of my writing, I have been writing pregnancy stories and fics for 4 years, nearly 5 now, but this is the first one that I have posted properly and that I am going to keep posted. Please don't leave comments about the baby's sex, because I already know what the sex will be. When I reveal the sex, everyone and anyone is welcome to suggest names!
Thank-you so much for reading!
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Any queries, message me and I will send you my e-mail address.
Ashley xD