So this is my first story. It is set after At world's end. Review and rate plz!

Chapter 1: Drunkards on deck

It was quiet. The most fearsome pirate in the Spanish Maine ( Captain Jack Sparrow ) was in his cabin. He was drunk, so every attempt to drink rum ended up with the sweet liquid falling down his face, into his dreadlocks and onto his map. Most of his crew was passed out on deck. Pintel, Raggetti and Mr. Cotton were drunk but were gambling with their loot from the last village they pillaged. Pintel suddenly slammed his hands down on the table and got up to leave. He had just lost all of his loot to Mr. Cotton's parrot, which could only wager a small eye patch! As he trudged/drunkly waddled away, his feet sliding reluctantly across the smooth wood of the deck of the Black Pearl, his toe caught the edge of the table. He fell - almost in slow-motion - and his face hit the deck. But before you could say "Savvy", he was out cold. Raggetti and Mr Cotton's Parrot hooted with laughter until they passed out in two seconds flat.

It was late in the afternoon. Most of the crew was being yelled at by Jack to wake up and "scrub the decks ye Scarborous dogs!". However, a handful of members were there to see two women walking up the ramp and onto deck. The captain's orders ceased and faint murmur was all that could be heard. One was fat and dressed in a grimy chef's uniform. She had no hands, but a pan and a spatula ( which rust covered like a blanket of brown ) had been shoved into her arms to replace them. A grim expression covered her face and with one look she silenced the murmurs. The other women was a skinny and relatively short one, but in her hands were two recurve blades with skulls etched into the metal. The guard was made of gold and the hilt of dark oak. A mosaic pin was embedded in the hilt of each blade and they depicted skulls. She began brandishing them and Mr. Cotton's parrot flew away saying "Abandon ship!" The few crew members that were awake proceeded to run away, following the parrot suite. However Jack shouted at them to get back to work or they'd be marooned. He immediately proceeded to interrogate the surprise visitors...