Hey guys thank you all for telling me these things I need to change and work on it made me think that maybe I need to go and change how I write a bit. Make it less rushed and proper grammar and maybe have Cammie be more mad with Zach. But I might have the same plot line but make it longer. Sorry for it being rushed and crappy and all so give me like a week or so and I will make some better chapters and post them sorry so after about 24 hours I am going to delete it so no one can look at my crappy story. Actually just delete the chapters so people can know what I am doing. So sorry for this all please understand.
So I am going to go and edit this story fix it so its a lot better. If when I repost and my grammar is still bad or there is something wrong with my story tell me! I won't be hurt unless you're being completely mean other then that it's cool.
So understand my problem I will be back in about a week with a better story.
Sincerly,
Music Rocks Our World
