These characters don't belong to me! Don't bring them to my house anymore; Hitsugaya froze my cat last night!!
Read this intro and tell me what you think: yes or no? Just want to see if I can hit a good one this time.
"Hey, Captain?" said Matsumoto over a tall stack of papers.
"What now, Matsumoto?" Asked Captain Hitsugaya unenthusiastically.
"I was just wondering…what was it like? You know, when you were a subordinate?" Hitsugaya looked at her; no one has ever asked him to recount his days before he became a captain before. And now of all times, now when he'd been a captain for over three hundred years! Yea, Matsumoto was defiantly reaching for an excuse not to do paperwork now.
"Matsumoto, just finish your work." He said. Directing his attention back to his own stack of papers.
"But Captain, I really do want to know." She said honestly. "I don't like to do paperwork, but this is something I've been wondering for a while now; what kind of subordinate were you? Were you an honorable fighter? When did you achieve your bankai? And how did you become a captain?" As she finished rambling off her most urgent questions Captain Hitsugaya stopped what he was working on and focused his attention to her. She seems to be really interested in knowing. He thought. He was prepared to tell her should she have asked him during their first few years as co-workers, but she'd never asked so he just shoved it to the back of his mind. Now that she'd asked, he wasn't sure if he could tell her. This knowledge could ruin how she thinks of him forever. "Oh, come on Captain, tell me!" Begged Matsumoto.
So what do you think? Should she tell him? Or should I scrap this idea? I think it'd be good, but…you know…if your not interested…