i am fixing my storys now, and i am going on to finish it. also reread it because i am changing some things. but I messed up somewhere tell me.
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4 Years Ago
tails POV
4 Years Ago me, Sonic, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, and EGGMAN were sent to another world with the power of chaos there, we met Chris, Chuck, Ella, and many others. Sonic, after saving the people of Station Square many times he became a hero to many.
One of the many times EGGMAN unleashed a monster named Chaos, it got all the Chaos Emeralds, and distroyed the city. Fortunately Sonic turned super and put a stop Chaos.
Soon after a being named Shadow, started stealing the Chaos Emeralds. Because of the fact that Shadow looked like Sonic, Sonic got arrested and me and the others had to get him out. Then after gathering all the Chaos Emeralds Doctor Gerald started to make the ark collide with earth. Sonic and Shadow then worked together to save the world, Shadow was not found after.
Soon after we all went back to our world. Sonic was late by a week and saved me before i was killed by EGGMAN's missile.
One month later, we met Cosmo who became more then a friend for me, and Chris came to our world this looked the same but it was 6 Years for him. Then something that was part of the Meterix, stole our planet egg. Cosmo told us that she came here to get sonic to save the planet eggs. This became our new adventure. Turned out Shadow was still alive, and after a misunderstanding with Cosmo he helped us beat dark oath, but we lost Cosmo...
Then Chris returned to his world, a year later we managed to get back to Chris's when chris came to our world, the way time went by changed. So one year for us is two years for other words Chris was 20 and was married. We went on new adventures in his world because EGGMAN was here too. After one year we returned. only to find our our world has changed! once again the way time went by changed. after the 1 year on chrisses planet it was 4 years in ours. luckily, many of our friends and family were with us. There were city's and schools now. It was most likely changed like this because of people seeing Chris's world. we did not need to go to school and live in the city, but Cream's mom wanted her to have many opportunity's. since Cream went many of us desided to go too.
I went there for 2 years so far. they put us in grades based on age. so i was in 7th grade at this point. Sonic only had one year so hes out now, Knuckles was home schooled so he could stay near the master Emerald. But like sonic, he is now out of school. Amy has 2-3 years left based on how good she does, and finally, Cream is in 6th. she was smart enough to have them let her skip a grade. They wanted me to go to high school, but i did not think it was a good idea because I am only 12.
Today.....