Praise me, for the pilot chapter is done! Hope you enjoy this one, because it's my first attempt to actualy _write_ fanfiction in foreign language. Stil, my grammar may suck in many ways, but it should be enough to write about shinobi(some unstealthy ninjas, who are _too human_ for my taste), right? Fine, with basics&stuff done, let's roll!

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto - Masashi Kishimoto does. Life sucks, huh?

Warnings: undecided 'till I receive enough reviews to make normal chapter out of pilot.

Pilot chapter (4dumb: Pilot - basically, example of product, made to analyze public opinion and possible worth of project. So do your best and tell me what should I improve, or what pairings you'd like to read about, or whatever the hell you can think of!)

Key:

"Speech"
'Thoughts/descriptions'

Story start

In the opening somewhere within Fire Country, two people were facing each other. Well, if someone would be so king as to name any of them anything like human. First one, teenager with birthmarks in the form of whiskers, was what people call jinchuriki - 'the power of human sacrifice'. He was glaring daggers at his opponent. While having his face covered with mask, he was still recognisable; Akatsuki coat being the dead giveaway.

"Tobi, this is the last day of your filthy existence! For I, Uzumaki Naruto, will kill you, dattebayo!" screamed sixteen-years-old teenager, running with rasen-shuriken directly to the last member of Akatsuki. Tobi was famed to use time/space jutsu, which exceeded even Minato Namikaze's Flying thunder god, but right now it was useless. Why, you ask? It was due to restriction seals, covering um... well, everything within ten kilometers. Naruto was sure: if Konan hadn't joined Shinobi Alliance, Tobi would never be caught off-guard; if Yamato couldn't intercept control over Hashirama's power within Tobi, he would struggle to run instead of staying still, scowling at Naruto. 'You don't have time to think, it's now or never! Kill this bastard!'- roared Kurama deep in blonde's mindscape.

CHWANK!

Now, without Senju's regeneration, Tobi was doomed, seeing as he missed his right side along with both legs. However, one thing caught Naruto's attention. His opponents face, not hidden behind spiral mask anymore, was what made the world stop for the last Uzumaki.

'He.. He has my face, even birthmarks!'

"I hoped that I*cough* will be the last one" said Tobi, his blue eyes looking at the sky without any care. Spitting blood, he sent a sudden glare to Naruto, who stood shocked. "Listen here, you dumbass!" said older blonde, coating his throat with thick layer of green chakra, "It's your turn now. I don't have time, you know, so i'll send memories directly. It'll hurt, but it's the safest way." His eyes changed to sharingan, sending some silver substance straight to dumbfounded Naruto. After it absorbed inside of his head, Tobi let out a hard sigh.

"Promise that you will*cough* break this cycle.. If it's even possible, that is.."

"Hey, what the hell do you mean? I can't feel any new memories, as well as Kyubi! And why do you look like me? Answer me, dammit!"

"All in due time, brother. Just promise that you will honor my last wish, you owe me at least this much." Somehow, single glance from Tobi made Naruto forget all of his questions. It was full of regret, pain and hope. Before long, the rest of his body was engulfed in fire, which left nothing but ashes. Silence fell on the clearing..

"I will." Naruto said in a serious tone..

WARRRRRP!

..and disappeared the same way.

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PostAN:
So, how was it? Don't hesitate to tell me.
Just to be clear: i will rewrite this chapter as soon, as i'll get you reaction.