Hey guys, Im back with a new story sort of thing. It will be free-verses, and poetry that I have written. I though I may as well share it. Please review though. It would mean ALOT to me. Thanks for reading.
S-w-e-e-t
i-n-n-o-c-e-n-t
n-a-i-v-e
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She n/e/v/e/r knew the world for the g.o.o.d
She wanted to be h.e.r
B*e*a*u*t*i*f*u*l p/e/r/f/e/c/t h.e.r
She had e|v|e|r|y|t|h|i|n|g
She had h.i.m.
& you wanted so desperately to be h.e.r
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So you dye your hair b^l^o^n^d^e
& you curl it to p/e/r/f/e/c/t/i/o/n
You're still no p/e/r/f/e/c/t p-o-r-c-e-l-a-i-n doll though
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& you l-o-o-k at yourself in the b/r/o/k/e/n m-i-r-r-o-r
You're still not p/e/r/f/e/c/t are you
So you s-k-i-p (meals) {HereAndThere}
{Whats the h.a.r.m}
But it (becomes) more frequent
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& after a m-o-n-t-h you've done i/t
You weigh ninety-five pounds
With b^l^o^n^d^e hair c^u^r^l^e^d to p/e/r/f/e/c/t/i/o/n
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So now you w^a^k^e u^p and you put on (make)u^p
& now you l-o-o-k like h.e.r
And b/e/f/o/r/e you know i/t (you) h_a_v_e h.i.m
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But d.a.r.l.i.n.g thats a l/i/e
& e.v.e.r.y.o.n.e s*a*y*s you're p/e/r/f/e/c/t
(But you just can' it)
& da.r.l.i.n.g everyone wants to be y'o'u
But why would they w^a^n^t t|h|a|t
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You b-a-r-e-l-y eat and you have n-o-o-n-e
(You have you) and {All the other} p-o-r-c-e-l-a-i-n dolls
& you h*a*t*e this
But you wouldn't trade it for u|g|l|i|n|e|s|s
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& now you're d.o.w.n. to eighty-five pounds
But you s:t:i:l:l {aren't} b*e*a*u*t*i*f*u*l p/e/r/f/e/c/t
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& you just can't d^e^a^l a-n-y-m-o-r-e
You need an e|s|c|a|p|e
One cut Two cuts
(Whats the h_a_r_m)
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Its on your t~h~i~g~h~s
Where all the b/r/o/k/e/n t-r-a-g-i-c s.e.c.r.e.t.s h^i^d^e
& you s:t:a:r:t {wearing} your clothes
Just a l.i.t.t.l.e bit l^o^n^g^e^r
& you stop talking to b_a_r_b_i_e dolls
They only (make) you feel w*o*r*s*e
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Three cuts four cuts
The b'l'o'o'd' d/r/i/p/p/i/n/g down in a s-t-e-a-d-y l|i|n|e|
Five cuts six cuts
D*a*r*l*i*n*g s.t.o.p. {now}
(Whats the h_a_r_m)
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But the b'l'o'o'd f-l-o-w-s f_a_s_t_e_r
& h^i^t^s the tile just a l.i.t.t.l.e bit l*o*u*d*e*r
& s/o/m/e/t/h/i/n/g about it sets (you) f~r~e~e
So you cut just a l.i.t.t.l.e bit d*e*e*p*e*r
& (you) {w.a.t.c.h} the b'l'o'o'd h^i^t the tile just a l.i.t.t.l.e bit f*a*s*t*e*r
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You're fi.n.a.l.l.y f*i*n*d*i*n*g the (g.o.o.d {in the} b.a.d)
Seven cuts eight cuts
You're f.i.n.a.l.l.y f/o/r/g/e/t/t/i/n/g
Nine cuts ten cuts
The b'l'o'o'd f-l-o-w-s f_a_s_t_e_r
(Whats the h_a_r_m)
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Eleven cuts twelve cuts
(Whats the h_a_r_m)
She n/e/v/e/r knew the w.o.r.l.d for the g.o.o.d
N/e/v/e/r q*u*i*t*e g.o.o.d e^n^o^u^g^h for {them}
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(You're) f.i.n.a.l.l.y f~r~e~e
(You're) f.i.n.a.l.l.y d^e^a^d
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S-w-e-e-t
i-n-n-o-c-e-n-t
n-a-i-v-e
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B*e*a*u*t*y & p/e/r/f/e/c/t/i/o/n
(She) c'o'u'l'd'n't s^t^a^n^d {her} o.w.n r-e-f-l-e-c-t-i-o-n
How'd y'all like it? Its kind of depressing, but I LOVED writing it. Now of course this could be about any pairing, but from some of the details you could probably guess who this was about. Review. Please?