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"Can I help you" said a women as she looked at the two men that where stood outside her front door. The both men had long black hair to their waists in braids and tan skin. The taller by three inches had scarlet eyes and pointy ear that showed he was a demon. He wore jeans with a black top with black timberlands. The other had cobalt eyes that held an evil happiness. He wore the same as the other but he wore a white top and looked more laid back.

"Is John there" said the demon as he narrowed his eyes at the human women in front of him. The women had brown hair in a pony and brown eyes that held a slight hint of fear in them.

"He's not" she said and went to shut the door. The human one put his foot in the way and her eyes widened as he pushed it open.

"Well then where going to have to come in then" he said and they both walked into the three bedroom house.

"Yes" said John as he drove his black navigator with his daughter in the passenger side.

"Hello John" came a male voice. That wasn't his wife. He watched as his daughter gave him a scared look and he gave her a small smile.

"Where is my wife" he replied and he heard the male chuckle.

"Don't worry your wife is safe, for know that is. You see John your behind on paying me back and I want my money or my friend Bankotsu is going to have a lot of fun with your wife" the male said and John growled. His daughter gasped and looked to her farther.

"How much" he said simply.

"Ten grand and you have an hour to get it" the male replied and John glared at the car in front of him.

"How am I going to get that in an hour" he growled not looking at his daughter.

"Fine Bankotsu" he said and they heard Renna scream.

"Leave my mum alone you bastard" the daughter screamed and everything went silent. The daughter bit her lip and listened.

"How old are you" asked the male and John's eyes widened.

"Stay away from her" he snapped and they heard the male growl.

"Bankotsu" they heard.

"Ill do it" she said and John looked at her.

"No, I will get you your money just leave my family alone" said John who was thinking of ways he could get the money.

"Sorry but I have made up my mind, six thousand and your daughter. You have an hour or I kill your wife and other two daughters" the male said and then hung up.

My dad pulled up to the house and we sat there in silence. I had to do this so he won't hurt my family. "You don't have to do this Olivia" he said as he turned to me. I smiled and shook my head. He frowned and we got out the car. We walked to the door and walked into the living room.

There sat on the couch on either side of my mother were two men. They where younger then I had expected, about eighteen nineteen. One of them was a demon with a very powerful aura; he must be the one who was on the phone. Both men where staring at me.

"Olivia go to your room" said my dad and I nodded. I walked out the room and ran to my room. I sat on my bed and listened to see if I could hear something. I must have fallen asleep as I was woken up by someone pulling me up by my hair. My eyes shot open to see cobalt blue eyes.

"Hi there" said the male who must be Bankotsu. He let me go and stood back. He looked me up and down and smirked. "Well where going to have quite a lot of fun aren't we"

My eyes widened and I went to run for my door but he grabbed my hair and pulled me back to my bed. "Naughty girl, Hiten doesn't like it when you're naughty so when you're with him do as you're told" he said as he straddled my hips and pulled his top over his head. "Now are we a virgin or not"

I glared at him and he laughed. He leaned down to press his lips to mine but I head butted him. I then lifted my knee up and pushed him off me. I ran to the door as he sunk to the floor. I screamed as I hit someone's chest. The one called Hiten stood in front of me glaring at me.

"You okay" he said looking at me but addressing Bankotsu who had just got up. Why couldn't I move, was it out of fear.

"Am fine, fucking bitch" Bankotsu growled and Hiten narrowed his eyes at me. I whimpered and took a step back. What was with me, I wasn't normally like this but his aura was doing something to me.

"You have five minutes to pack the things you want and if you're not ready by then I will take you as you are" he said and I felt a shiver go down my spine. "Hurry it"

I whimpered and nodded. I went over to my wardrobe and started pulling out my clothes. After I had put them in a bag I put all my underwear in it and some personal things. I jumped when a hand was on my arm. "Come on bitch" said Bankotsu as he pushed me out the room. I walked down the stairs where my mum and dad where standing.

I hugged them and smiled. "I will be fine, look after Kelly and Kira" I said and my mother nodded. Bankotsu pulled me out the door and I yelped. He then shoved me in the back of a black Lamborghini. If this was any other time I would have drooled over the car. I pulled my knees up to my chest and fell asleep again.

Ow. I looked up at the sky and Bankotsu as he stood over me. I blinked and relised I had fell out of the car. He pulled me up and I leaned on him. I felt dizzy and couldn't walk straight. "Shit, I think I gave her a concussion" said Bankotsu and I groaned.

"Give her here" said Hiten and I was suddenly picked up. My eyes shot open and I struggled to get out of his arm. "Stop it"

I whimpered and did what he said. I watched as we walked up a staircase and into a room. Hiten dropped me on the bed and threw my bag to the side. He sat behind me and I tensed as I felt his hands go under my top. He unclipped my bra and threw it to the side. I whimpered and heard him growl.

"Shut up am not even touching you" he growled and I bit my lip to shut up. He got up and went to the door. He looked at me over his shoulder "Get some sleep, you have a busy day tomorrow"

With that he shut the door and left me alone. I got up and looked around the room. I had a king sized bed, a chest of draws, a desk with a mirror and a door that led to a big bathroom that had both a bath and shower. I went to my bag and put all my things away. I pulled out a tank top and some bottoms and got changed. I then got into the bed and cried myself to sleep.