Okay i have another story called Elemental Nocturne on the Zelda section so please reveiw. This story is basically about a playerwho gets mixed up insome bad news. Kindof like a .hack complex please reveiw so I can spice up the chapters PLEASE REVIEW.

Disclaimer: I do not own FF11. It belongs to Square Enix besides anything I make up.

Chapter 1: Cayden

"Alright, now that the updates and user registration are done its time for the character." I say as I click on the "create character" button

A screen of races showed up as I looked at the choices. Knowing me I chose a Hume Male because they're well balanced. It gave me a choice of hair styles. I looked through them all and finally chose choice number 1. The Hair was blonde and extended all the way down to the end of my neck in front the hair formed a wide V on the top of my forehead. The size of my character was a medium height. Then the game finally let me choose my class. I browsed the classes and finally decided to make him a warrior. I clicked on the button that said "warrior" and a small window popped up for the Characters name.

"Hmmmmm…" I say as I wonder what to name him

"Oh, I know!"

I type the name "Cayden" on the screen and hit enter. Then a screen appeared for a city to start in. After looking at the profiles I click on "Bastok" since its where all the Hume's are. As the login progress went on I put on my goggles to see the environment. My character showed up on screen and went through and introduction along with a NPC giving me an "Adventurers Pass" and telling me to hand it to a NPC named Reef. When I got control I used my controller to make my character run his hand through his hair. He wasn't anything special: He had Hume clothes along with a sword called: Onion Sword. Personally I thought this name was kind of weird, but hey it's better then nothing. The controls were like instinct to me because my sister drilled me on them for at least an hour a day. I ran (character wise) to the middle square and looked around. When looking around I saw groups talking about what quests to do, what special item they got, or just chatting. Some solo players were just walking by and bought items, equipment or selling things at the auction house. Not knowing where Reef was I asked around talking with people. One person pointed to the left and said just go straight. I got there and talked to him. He told me to trade his Adventurer Coupon for some gil. He gave me 50 gil. I stared at the coins on my hand and muttered to myself.

"How useless is this, I bet I couldn't even buy anything with it."

I turn around and walk forward when I bump into a Hume player. She looks up and says.

"Watch where you're going!"

"Hey it wasn't me who bumped into you, you bumped into me." I argue back

"Hmph"

She walks past me turns around and says.

"You know this game is just like the real world, you cannot just get away with anything you want."

My mouth drops at this comment and so does my character's. I was about to say something but I sucked it up and took a deep breath. I walk away and ask around where some good areas are to train. One person pointed me into the direction of the gate and told me to go through. I walk out and see a barren wasteland with a lot of mountains around. Worms came out of the ground and Giant bees flew around. I pull out my sword and run near a bee. I pressed the attack button and my character slashed the bee in half. I thought this was easy so I walk further into the waste land and saw a brown lizard that was about waste high and I charged at it. I pressed the attack button and my character slashed it. It barley did anything. The lizard turned around and growled at me. It tackled my character and I fell to the ground. It bit my characters arm and my character yelled in pain. Then suddenly the lizard turned around and started to attack another character. This person avoided the attack and slashed it in the back. Then the character yelled.

"What are doing, get up and help me beat this thing!"

I got up and slashed the lizard in the face. It then turned it direction towards me. I dodged its bite and stabbed it in the back. The creature fell down and a blue aura and big words floated above my Character saying "Level up!" in excitement I yelled.

"YESSSS!"

"Good Job, jerk."

I turned around to see the character who said that rude comment. It was the Hume I bumped into.

"Why am I a jerk?" I asked in irritation

"You still didn't apologize."

"Are you still thinking about that?"

"Yeah, now apologize."

"I'm sorry." I say just to get her off of me

"For what?"

"For bumping into you."

"Good, you also need to form a party with me."

"WHAT!"

"Otherwise I won't forgive you."

"Fine, hmph."

"Well since were we going to be in a party I need to know your name, mine is Hyo."