First fan fiction! Do be kind please. I may not have this right,but I'll figure this out soon:3

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ALICE: 14, brown hair and purple eyes

OZ: 15, blond hair and green eyes

GIL:19, black hair and gold eyes

BRAKE:29, white hair and one red eye

SHARON:26,honey hair and pinkish eyes

There was only one thing my body felt...pain. The sound of screaming was echoing in my ears. The smell of blood lingered the air. I was looking in to the eyes of my twin sister...Alyss.

Her snow white hair was stained red. She was holding her stomach.

I know me and my sister where different from other twins. We felt each other's pain,thought,and soul. My dad called us the "Twins of the abyss."

My eyes closed and my ears ringed. Soon I could hear the sudden sounds of beeping.

"Beep...Beep...Beep." I opened my eyes to see the face of my best friend Sharon.

She had puffy red eyes like she was crying. Finally she broke the sad silence.

"ALICE!" She yelled while taking my limp hand."Thank God your alive!"

She got up and began pushing a big red button on the left side of my bed.

At that moment Oz, Gil, and a doctor came in and ran strait for me.

I looked up at Oz who had blond hair and green eyes. He looked like he had just finished crying. I knew Oz loved me and cared more about me then himself which made me mad,but now was not the time. "Oz...wh-what happened?" I managed to choke out "Alice. Your sister...Alyss...sh-she didn't make it." Oz said in a sad tone. What? My sister died? why am I not dead? shoudn't I die too? Its only fair...even though I love every body here...I had to be with Alyss...right? So what am I waiting for? Should I pull the plug or live with out my beloved sister...

~Short chapter! Sorry but this is just a beginner's chapter. I'll be making more so stay with me please:3. Remember to review! I'd like to see what you think.