authors not: hey everyone this is a new fanfic i have been thinking about. so please review and tell me how you think

the museum was packed with people form couples talking about how pretty the art work is to the art class writing 500 page essays on how the stroke used on the colour blue in the right hand corner means that the person in the left having sex with a girl secretly wants to die to even the family with the two kids complaing that this is boring and how the want to play the resent call of service game but in the middle who the whole museum stood a girl. she was wearing a red skirt and a black to with a long black hair let lose, she gave a smile because all these different people had no idea of what right underneath there very feet. she walked to a piece of art that a door on in titled the door to madness. she sat down on a bench in front of it and pulled out laptop. a few seconds later a man in a t shirt that said order is chaos and dark blue shorts sat next to her, she gave him a look and said to him

"well it looks like the sky is in control"

the man walked up to the painting and pressed his finger on the door handle of the painting as he did that the bench that the girl was sitting on began to lower through a hole in the floor which had just appeared. the girl sat on the bench waiting until the bench had stoped and she came face to face with man who was around 50 but look good for his age and with a scar that went from one side of his face to the other. the man shook the girls hand and said

"Maria it is an honour to meet you i am genral Anderson" Maria smiled and said "so you are the reason why i am not in federal jail after hacking most of the worlds governments at once and threatened to release all there dirty little secrets" Anderson looked at her and said

"yes we could use you here in control, hey at control we make sure the world stays in order with out it knowing that we even exist. we are a multinational organisation meaning that we get funding from all governments however we do not belong to any of them, now lets introduce you to James" Maria looked at Anderson in shock " wait are you tell me that he is real" Anderson simply smiled and said "yes he is and right now " he looked at his watch "he will be playing video games" Maria looked disappointed "wait arare you telling me that a man how has killed over 200 men ; has killed a shark with his bare hands and also disabled a nuke plays GTA" Anderson gave her a look and begain to walk which she followed and he said " no he plays sonic, he is very picky". they walked up to a wooden door which was werid becuase the rest of the base was metal and there was a sign on it which read "if you don't have food GET OUT" Anderson looked at Maria" it is ok that sign means nothing" he opened the to see a man just come out of the shower with no clothes on "Anderson looked at his watch "damn i never changed my watch from when i went to france and James please put on clothes" James gave a smile and said" but sir the male body is nothing to be ashamed of" Anderson just walked away and when he left James said to Maria "sorry about him he is one of those army guys" he did a mocking salute "YES SIR ,NO SIR , YOU ARE CORRECT SIR YOU CAN'T HAVE FUN WITH A STICK THAT FAR UP YOUR ASS SIR" he went back to his normal stance " but he is alright anyway my name is James and you must be Maria our new teammate " he went to shack her hand but at that moment a bullet hit the floor between them and they both looked to see the Italian bombshell , the sniper called roberta.