As many of you may or may not know, I had an older, much more immature, version of this story. I am re-writing all of my stories and I decided to start with this one. I hope to make it a bit more interesting, and hopefully you'll all enjoy it a bit more than the last one. It wasn't very popular. .
-Silver
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Our story starts one night years ago….
"Sweetheart, are you alright?" A tall,
young looking blonde man asked his wife.
"I'm fine, dear, it's
just, I'm pregnant again. So, we have to go through the morning
sickness and all again," A shorter, beautiful woman
replied.
"That's fantastic! Do you need anything?" He
asked.
"No, I'm fine. Go back to your work," She smiled.
"If you're sure, I'll go. Till dinner," With that he headed down the stairs after a quick kiss.
"It would be more fantastic if she was yours…" The woman whispered with a hint of sadness.
"Ryou, Mommy has something very important to tell
you," The woman told a young boy later that night as she tucked him
in.
"What is it, Mommy?" Ryou asked.
"You're going to
have a little sister soon, Ryou. Do you promise Mommy that you'll
take good care of her?"
"Yes! Wow! A sister. I wonder if
she'll be like that girl from down the street that's always
following me everywhere…" Ryou contemplated with a scowl on his
face.
"Oh goodness, who knows! We'll find out soon, won't
we?"
"Yes, yes we will, Mommy."
A few months later in a small hospital outside of Tokyo…
"Ryou, would you like
to see your little sister now?"
"Is she ugly?"
"No,
she's beautiful," His father replied.
"Then…I suppose,"
Ryou said and followed his father into one of the rooms.
His
mother sat in a hospital bed cradling a small bundle. Ryou leaned
over and looked at the bundle, his father had not been joking. Ryou
had seen babies before; most of them were fat and gurgling, not his
sister. His sister lay in his mother's arms quiet as a sleeping
dove, fair as a white rose, eyes as blue as his own. Ryou smiled and
nodded, "She's nothing like the little girl from down the
street."
Years passed, Ryou and his sister, Maeve, grew to
be young children. Ryou started school and spent much of his time
teaching his little sister how to read and write like he could. One
day, Ryou was looking for another book to use for reading practice
when he heard voices coming from his father's study. He heard his
mother say, "No, I won't let you! Why would you want to test your
theories on our CHILDREN?!"
"Dear, it's the best way. We
can't very well test it on animals and unless you want me dragging
strangers into our house and not being able to monitor them properly
like I need to, then what am I supposed to do?"
"You're
supposed to test it on me, or yourself, or Keiichiro, but never on
our children."
"Darling, it's the best way. They might still
grow out of the affects of the serums. Please, just let me try
it."
"Are you sure it's safe?"
"Positive, nothing
will happen to them."
"Start with Maeve then, she isn't
going to school, it is much easier to observe her for signs of
problems."
"Thank you dearest."
"Don't thank me
yet."
Soon enough, Maeve was taken down to the lab every
morning and did not come back up until her brother returned from
school. She thought it was absolutely terrible, getting all the shots
and tests done. She did not have fun at all, even though her Daddy
had suggested it to her saying it would be "fun and exciting,
something none of her friends would ever have a chance to do." Sure
enough, one day she'd had enough and she said so. "Daddy, why do
I have to get all these shots and things?"
"To get you ready
for a very important job."
"What job?" Maeve asked, tilting
her head to one side.
"Helping to keep the Earth a better
place," Her father replied as he prepared another needle.
"Oh…"
Maeve replied playing with the end of her braid.
"Now, this shot
is going to be a little different from the others. You're going to
feel a little tingling and then you're going to see some things.
Now, don't be frightened, Maeve, I'll be here the whole
time."
"Okay, Daddy," Maeve said and her father injected the
serum into her arm, the first animal DNA to be injected into a human.
Maeve began to feel
woozy. "Daddy, I feel weird," Maeve complained as she passed out.
Maeve materialized in a bright place and looked around. Suddenly,
she heard a noise from behind her. A large white cat with black spots
approached her. She smiled and called to it, "Here, kitty-cat. I
won't hurt you kitty," as it stopped in front of her.
Maeve
touched its nose and her body glowed as the cat seemed to leap into
her body. She blinked a few times to see if she would wake up, but
she did not. Instead, another animal came towards her, this one was a
bird, and it screeched loudly and landed on her shoulder. Once again,
as soon as contact was made, the animal blended into her skin, but
unlike the last time, she woke up to see her father when she
blinked.
"Daddy that was the
weirdest dream…" Maeve stated as her father smiled.
"It
worked then," was his only reply.
"What worked?"
"The
injection of animal DNA into your system, you are only 90 percent
human now. You are also part bird and part cat," Her father said as
he fished something out of his pocket.
"What's a percent?"
Maeve said as she stumbled over the word.
"Nothing you should
worry about, now, take this necklace. When something tries to hurt
you, simply push the pink heart and shout out 'Mew Maeve
Metamorphosis' and you will be able to protect yourself," Mr.
Shirogane replied and handed Maeve a small golden pendant on a gold
chain.
"Okay, Daddy!" Maeve exclaimed and jumped off his lap
and ran up the stairs to find her Mommy and show her the new necklace
that her Daddy had given her.
"Mommy! Mommy, where are
you?" Maeve shouted and looked around for her mother. When she
failed to find her mother she sat on the bottom of the staircase in
the entrance to their home and waited for Ryou to come home. She did
not have to wait long.
"Maeve! Are you ready to read a new
story? I borrowed a book called Redwall from the library
today," Ryou said and put his backpack down by the door.
"Yay!
Ryou, look! Look what Daddy gave me today!" Maeve exclaimed as she
held up her pendant.
"What does it do?" Ryou asked and pressed
the pink heart.
"Daddy says I can protect myself if I press that
heart and say 'Mew Maeve Metamorphosis'!" Maeve explained and
was suddenly engulfed by a bright white light.
"RYOU!"
"MAEVE!
DAD! What's happening to Maeve?!" Ryou shouted.
Their father
came dashing up from the basement. "Did you touch the
pendant?"
"Yes, why?" Ryou asked.
"It's activated her
new animal DNA that I'm using to create a protector force for the
world, Mews," Their father replied as Maeve stepped out of the
light. Her hair had turned white with a thick stripe of brown, her
eyes had turned golden-brown, and she had a pair of white rounded
ears with black fur lining the inside of the ears. A white strapless
dress with black half-moons had appeared on her body along with brown
wrist wraps, black boots that reached half-way up her shin, a white
tail with the same half-moon shapes and a black tip, along with a
pair of brown wings.
"It's perfect, flawless. She has received
the DNA and has successfully transformed into her Mew state with no
side affects. It works, it really works," Mr. Shirogane
muttered.
"Dad, what does this mean?" Ryou asked.
"It
means that the world will survive no matter what problems are ahead,"
He replied.
"Dear…what's all the noise? OH MY GOODNESS!"
Mrs. Shirogane said as she descended the stairs. She had heard the
commotion and had come to make sure that the children were alright
and she had found her daughter transformed into a half-beast
creature.
"Don't worry, Darling, everything has gone smoothly,
she's flawlessly transformed. Be the witnesses to the first Mew,"
He proclaimed.
"Oh, don't worry, the first shall be the
most beautiful of them all, because their won't be any more," A
voice cackled.
"Who are you?!" Mr. Shirogane shouted into the
air as he moved in front of Ryou, Maeve, and their mother.
"Oh,
who I am doesn't matter, because soon, you won't be alive to
remember," The voice cackled once more and finally a tall, dark
haired figure appeared before him. He was like nothing that Mr.
Shirogane or Ryou or Maeve had ever seen before. He was tall, pale,
had large pointy ears, and long dark hair. His eyes pierced through
yours with a single glance from their menacing blood red irises, his
lips curled back to reveal glimmering, white, sharp as a knife,
canines. Teeth of an animal. He glowered down at Maeve.
"So,
Mew, Protector of the Earth, can you beat me? Save your family? Live
to see another sunrise?" He asked as Maeve peeked around her
father's side.
"You can't hurt me! I'm a Mew!" She
shouted.
"Oh, well, we'll see about that," He replied and
charged towards them. Mr. Shirogane pushed the children back just in
time for them to avoid the bloody fate that he met. The stranger's
sword plunged straight through his middle, sticking out the front
like an ugly finger. Maeve gasped and her eyes grew wide.
"Does
that hurt?" The stranger asked with a strangely kind look on his
face, though it melted quickly as he pulled the sword out of their
father and he slumped to the floor, dead. The stranger turned on
their mother.
"You, you will pay for his attempt to SAVE you
ALL!" And charged once more. She, too, met her fate and slumped to
the floor, the front of her dress dark and bloody. Now the stranger
turned towards Maeve and Ryou.
"Are you prepared to meet the
same end? Or are you going to fight me, Mew?"
"How dare you
challenge a young kid like my sister?" Ryou shouted, "why don't
you fight someone your own size!"
"Oh, what, like you?" The
man grinned as Ryou turned pale as a ghost.
"Don't touch him!"
Maeve shouted as she turned her own sword on the stranger. The
stranger glared down at her.
"What, do you expect that your puny
little sword can stand up to mine?" He should have been right. His
huge steel-bladed, dark onyx hilted sword looked as though it could
slice through Maeve's like butter, but her small, silver-bladed,
clear-hilted, with a small pink heart surrounded by brown wings and a
single black moon on the end, was stronger than it seemed.
"Yes,
yes I do," She replied and raised it in front of her,
"BLIZZARD!"
The man was blown away and slammed into a wall,
ice crystals sticking to his skin and burning him.
"WHY YOU
LITTLE! I'll show YOU, MEW!" And with that he set their house up
in flames.
Ryou grabbed his sister and ran for the door, they
had barely made it out and to the sidewalk when their house exploded
in flame. Ryou turned to his sister, in his hands he held all the
notes his father had kept in his pocket. Maeve opened her palms to
reveal more she had stolen earlier out of curiosity.
"With
these, we can create more Mews, like you, to protect others from
fates like ours," Ryou said.
"You do that… I don't want to
have anything to do with Mews, ever," Maeve said and pulled her
pendant off with a jerk, breaking the chain and turning her back into
herself.
"Maeve, you don't have a choice, do you?" Ryou
exclaimed.
"Yes, yes I do, and I choose to never have anything
to do with it again," Maeve replied and hung her head with a
sigh.
"Fine, then you can go live in the Temple," Ryou replied
and turned his back on her.
"Ry Ry, why are you doing this to
me?" Maeve cried.
"Because, I don't have time to be bothered
with little children. The monks with take care of you and train you
and teach you what you nee to know. Now leave me alone!" Ryou cried
out and ran off down the street leaving Maeve to stand in front of
their burning home, tears streaming down her
face.
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Okay, so this definitely is a LOT different from my first version. I'm going to leave it up till all the chapters are written for this version. Since it's the summer, and I don't have much else to do, hopefully it'll be done about mid-July. So, review and tell me what you think. =D
-Silver
Note: Ryou is seven and Maeve is five when their house is attacked. Maeve has the DNA of a Snow Leopard and Eurasian Peregrine Falcon. I did my research this time. Both the Snow Leopard and the Eurasian Peregrine Falcon are ON the endangered species list, and more importantly, they are endangered in ASIA, the continent this takes place on.
