Please keep in mind that this is my first fan fiction and I'm not really sure if this is good or not, so could you please leave a review and try to use constructive criticism so I can see where to improve and if I need to edit some things on the story and like others on the other fan fictions say, I do not, and I mean NOT own Monster Hunter, I only own the characters or the character names for the monsters
Monster Hunter: Of Monsters and Whatever
Chapter 1- The Coming of Age
"YES, FINALLY I GET TO KILL MY FIRST MONSTER!" an overexcited voice said. The overexcited voice belonged to a young hunter-in-training name Sahcai. Today was his 14 birthday, the age where all Hunters start. Sahcai read all about the history of the Hunters and he knew about the standard leather armor he was supposed to wear. As soon as Sahcai left his house, he was greeted by a punch to the face. When Sahcai finally regained his senses, he saw that the fist that hit him belonged to his childhood friend Marsh. "Why in the name of the flipping Lagiacrus would you hit me?" Sahcai said with confused agony. "Because I wanted to hit your dumb face," Marsh said in a monotone voice, "besides, you need to keep your guard up at all times, or how else do you think you will become an efficient hunter?" Dang, Sahcai thought. He does have a point there. But the books didn't say anything about being on guard at all times! "Are you thinking of the book again, Sahcai?" Marsh asked. "No, of course not," Sahcai lied, "I'm just thinking about the swords I'm gonna use when I become a G-Rank Hunter." The G-Rank, the highest rank among the monster hunting community. Every Hunter strives to get to this, but only a few ever make it to the top. "I still think your being way too ambitious for your own good Sahcai." A mysterious voice had said. Oh no, not her Sahcai thought. "What are you doing here, Melanore." He said in a I-really-hate-this-person voice. "Oh I'm just here to start picking on your because it's so fun to see your reaction." She said in a cheery voice. "Well, I don't need you getting in the way of my first hunt because this IS very important to me, and when YOU'RE around, YOU always mess things up for ME." He said, fuming on the inside. "Ya know, have you ever thought that we act like stereotypical characters from a fan fiction?" Melanore asked. That's not good; I can't tell if she's breaking the fourth wall or if she's just trying to get on my nerves, Sahcai thought. "Well, if that's the case Melanore, why don't we ask the author to think of a unique and different personality for the three of us?" Marsh asked with a voice that could shake even the bravest of the Crimson Fatalis species. "Sheesh, do you have to be so mean all the time Marsh?" Melanore asked, hurt. "Maybe if you stopped breaking the fourth wall and actually thought of a useful character trait for yourself, then maybe then I won't be so mean to you anymore." Marsh said coldly. "Ya know what, let's just end the story so abrup–"
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