Hello people of the fan fiction universe. This is my first story so please have MERCY I am not good with grammar or spelling even with spelling check I am bound to make mistakes.
Flames are welcomed they help me become a better writer but if you could tell me what I did wrong it would be most appreciated. Thank you
I will tell you this now I will finish the story it may take time, but I will. I now how it feels to read a story you like ( if I have any that like my story it will be a miracle )and they never finish it only something close to the apocalypse will stop me. Updates will happen every week ( I hope) if I have time (which I usually do) I will update sooner. Now I want to remind everyone that this is fan FICTION that means it may or may not have similarities to the original manga.
Also I would like to say if anyone sees some similarity to any of their story I thank you then for the inspiration.
This story is M but there will be no lemons ( unless I can get some one to write them for me), but there will be a bit of swearing so just encase
I DON'T OWN NARUTO THERE NOW NOBODY CAN SUE ME.
Now on with the story
READING
DEMON SPEACH
DEMON THOUGHT
HUMAN SPEACH
HUMAN THOUGHT
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
In the dark and empty streets of konoha we find a 6 year old boy with raged clothes walking with a limp on his leg. His name Naruto
"why, why doesn't any one like me? what did do to them? Naruto asked himself."
Naruto was never treated fairly he was hated for something out of his control most people would just ignore him or call him names, he had no friends the caretakers at the orphanage would separate him from the rest of the children telling them he was dangerous. He would get very little to eat, his bed was old and smelled funny, the window in his room was stuck so he could not close it when it was to cold. But today was the worst it was October 10 his birthday he knew from past experiences that people would treat him the worst on this day, usually the Hokage would find some one to keep watch over him encase he was attacked. Though they would do nothing until it really got to far. This time they out write abandoned him. Today he was kicked out out of the orphanage so he did not now were to go, he would go to the hokage tower, but the secretary does not let him see the hokage, she calls anbu the moment she spots him heading towards her.
"Sometimes I wonder if my parents did something terrible and abandoned me here to suffer the consequences."
Naruto would always wonder why did they hate him. He did not know that the fourth hokage had sealed the nine tailed fox in to him. The fourth wanted the people of Konoha to see him as a hero. The third made it a law were you couldn't tell anyone that he was the holder when it became evident that the villagers did not see naruto as a hero instead they thought he was the fox reincarnated.
"I am tired ill figure out what I am going to do tomorrow, maybe I can ask that girl Ayame from the ramen shop to help me think what to do she and her dad always treat me nice."
As Naruto search for a place to sleep in the forest close to the hokage monument, he heard footsteps behind him when turned around he spotted three villagers that by the way they were having trouble standing straight he deduced they were drunk.
"Shit! What do I do now?"
"Well Well Well what do we have here is the little demon out for a little stroll". Villager #1 said with hate clearly in his voice
"look I don't want any trouble, I haven't done anything wrong, I am just looking for a place to sleep". naruto was getting worried now, he knew what was about to happen, they were going to beat him up.
"Did you hear that the monster wans to got sleep" villager#2 responded with a sneer
"well I say we help him sleep for ever". As the last villager said that naruto turned around and ran in to the forests fast as his little legs let him.
It took the villigers a couple of seconds to start pursuing naruto due to the fact they were drunk.
10 minutes later
"Were are you little shit" villager#2 screamed. They had lost him 7 minutes into the chase and spent the last three looking for him.
"He must of used some of his demon power to disappear" villager#3 said
"Hopefully hell get lost and die out here". Village#1 said as he started to walk away into Konoha
"Thank kami they did not find me, I don't think I could of kept running" naruto thought as he came out of the hollow tree he had jumped in.
"Well now what?" naruto let out a sigh as he looked around the unfamiliar part of the forest he never explored before.
Naruto looked up in to the ski for a moment before he started to walk in the opposite direction the villagers walked.
"If I go the same directions they went I could bump into them again and not be able to out run them" were his thoughts as he walked away.
--34 minutes later
"I think a past trough here already. Okay it's official I am lost" Naruto started to panic
"what if I don't get out of this forest." he gulped " would I really die out here like the villager said." Images of the hokage, ayame, and old man ichiraku (sp?) looking sad started to manifest in his mind.
"No I can't think like that I am going to find away out of here." With renewed determination in his eyes he started to walk.
After a few moments of walking he felt a tingling sensation pas through his body.
" I wonder what was that"
Suddenly as he looked left he spotted a house a big house more like a mansion.
" Who lives all the way out here?" he started to think weather or not to knock at the door " if I knock the door and someone that does not like comes out I could be in danger, but what other choice do I have I don't know were here is" his heart started to beat faster and faster as his hand got closer to the door bell. "Well here goes nothing"
Nothing "don't tell me no body lives here. Great just great what do I do now."
"Maybe the door is open." as he grabbed the handle it was still dark so he did not notice the sharp edge in the door knob.
There was loud scream
" Son of a, what type of people lived here, were they crazy to sharpened the door knob" as naruto continued his mental rant about crazy people and sharp objects
the door knob was dripping with blood were naruto had cut his finger suddenly there was a small flash of light and several clicks.
Naruto stopped his mental rant in time to see the door open and the lights inside turned on.
"hello is anybody in hear, I am lost and need to find my way back to the village" naruto started to look around the place looked like nobody has been their for quite some time now the furniture was covered with white sheets. "guess there hasent been people here for some time" as he explored the house eventually came in to what he thinks is the living room where there was a big picture over the fire place of some smiling guy with blond hair holding what looked like a very happy red haired woman who was obviously expecting a baby. " Were my parents happy when they were expecting me" tears were forming in his eyes as the thought past through his mind. "No I haven't cried since I has 4 I won't cry again"he looked to the left of the room and notice that there was several scrolls paper all over the desk. Curiosity getting the best of him naruto went to investigate the bunch of papers. "what is a shiki fuunjin"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Well people did you like it hate, Please leave a review ( gets down on his knees and begs)
Sorry for the small cliffhanger it's just that I wanted to put this story up before I went to sleep ( writing takes a lot of time )
also did not notice how short it is will trie to make it bigger next time.
I have decided to let you chose the parings; (Yes I am so giving ) you may chose any girl you want
tsunade (have a way to make her younger)
anko
hinata ( Naruto won't magically acquire feelings for her over night it will take time)
sakura ( don't like her but I am letting you chose)
tenten ( can someone tell me her last name or make one really cool one)
ino ( don't know a lot about her)
shizune ( need last name)
ayame
kurenai
hanabi ( if she wins they will get together almost at the end of the story)
moegi ( same as hanabi)
hana ( same as ino)
tsunami ( same as tsunade)
princes of snow country ( need her real name )
I know I forgot some so please chose any one you want.
THIS IS NOT A YAOI SO DO NOT PUT ANY GUYS AS YOUR CHOICE.
NOW IF YOU WANT IT TO BE A HAREM PUT 5 OF THE GIRLS YOU WANT
thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule to review