Hi, guys I am Moon Star Heart (MSH or M) for short.
This is my first time writing a story so please review
Summary: Anna was a girl lost within her dreams and who was criticized for being in her own world. She wishes for her dreams to come true but be careful what you wish for. A storm one day comes and washes her away to the world with Prince Zuko, Aang, and the gang. Now she has to make sure everything remains the same though there is a little love on the way.
Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar the Last Airbender or this would not be posted on
I only own my OCs
Anyway on with the story
Unknown POV
The warm sea breeze ran through my hair as I gazed towards the gray stormy clouds that picked up the restless waves. I loved the ocean even on days like this, but my sister Anna dreams about fairy tales particularly about some show so much so that she come here on days like this. She believes that something might happen because of the myths of strange disappearances in the family about this beach. I spot her dirty blond hair from the dock by the boat. The wind begins to blow harder as I call "ANNNAAA."
Anna's pov
I turn my head as I hear my name being called and see my sister Hannah standing on the dunes waving me to come to she came I was thinking about the dreams I have been having lately, they have been happening since my 16th birthday and I'm almost seventeen. These dreams are quite repeating quite like my favorite show Avatar the Last Airbender though Hannah says I shouldn't be watching such a kid show anymore now that I'm older and that I should things like the Walking Dead(MSH:No offence to anyone who loves this show but I'm terrified of zombies- Door opens- Ahhh get away keep away- a zombie starts coming in- ahh where is my AK-47 when I need it -starts throwing random objects- 'Relax M it's just me your brother' - that's even worse keep away ok back to the story while I grab my baseball bat to teach my big bro for trying that.)
I turn to face her entirely as the wind picks up I start trying to get back to shore forcing me back towards the end of the dock and the water. Foot by foot I seem to be pushed back by the wind clinging to the wooden planks as hard as possible trying to get closer to the shore. I scream as I start to lose my grip on the last plank it feels as if there is a giant hand pulling back on my body in the wind. I feel myself be overcome by the water though I strangely felt that I was weightless. Then I felt pulled and gained the weight of burden upon my body as I looked behind me and saw a strange green current leading to a whirlpool covered in the strange green water. Once I saw the pool I tried to swim as hard as I could for what felt like hours but passed only in a matter of seconds. As I was pulled into the strange whirlpool, the last thing I saw was a bright light and a gentle face coming towards me. I strangely felt at peace in a comforting embrace as slender arms came around my waist. That was the last thing I felt before the darkness seemed to surround me.
Hannah's Pov
What just happened? I saw my little sister get pulled into a whirlpool. But what was unbelievable was the giant hand that held onto her in the water pulling her to who knows where. What am I going to tell Mom and Dad? I stare at the place my sister disappeared and my vision starts to blur as the tears start flowing with the possibility that my sister is dead. I run off the dunes back towards the house to tell my family the horrifying news.
A bit short for a story beginning but alright for a first one right especially if I want to write all three books anyways I thought this would be a great way to start please review if you like it.