Plz be easy on me with this one cuz this is my first LWD fanfiction!
Kalli
Dear diary,
Today was the worst day of my life. First Derek hogged the shower so I only had cold water the bathe with. Then at school I found Sam and this Blonde making out near the tree. I went over to him and said, "what are you doing?" all he said was "its not what it looks like." Have I gone blind? Then in second period Derek threw a spitball right in my face. GROSS! At lunch Derek 'accidentally' spilt his lunch in my lap. I had to go to the Principles office to get new clothes but they didn't have my size so they gave me a size bigger. All day I had to keep pulling up my pants. When I got home Marti was playing with my perfume again. She used up all my perfume. Edwin and Lizzie tried to get their hamster out of my room because it got lost. While they were doing that they messed up my whole room. The whole house is a Wreck because of the Venturi's; this is right before my big party. At my party I caught Derek making out with Hannah. I was so pissed at him. He knew he was supposed to out with Sam but instead he stayed here. I saw them go into the house and upstairs. I followed them. I opened Derek's door and they were making out on his bed. I saw Hannah starting to unzip his pants. I knew I shouldn't of stayed there but I wanted to see how long it took them to figure out I was there. They caught me. They went until Hannah's shirt was half way off and Derek's pants were unbuttoned. He started yelling at me. I know this is wrong but I only stayed there for one reason. I wanted Derek. I know it is wrong because he is my stepbrother but I can't help it. He finally took me into my room and sat me down. He asked me why I stayed in there. I really didn't want to tell him. "Umm…" he cut me off by putting his finger on my lips. "Let me restate this; how do you feel about me?" he said. "You tell me first" I responded. "okay" he inched closer to me and gave me a peck on the lips. I kissed him back. Then we heard a knock on the door. It was just Emily. Afterwards we ate cake and opened the presents. That was my day.
Casey
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