Hey guys! So its Moosey here and not too long ago, I got this review on Hetalia University.
Reported:1.) Rome is the capital of Italy, not Venice. How hard is it to do a quick Google search? You don't even have to click on anything, the information is right there!
2.) The reader is a Mary Sue. Everyone loves her, she almost gets r*** by (2P?) England for no reason, she's typically saved by herself and the others, et cetera. all in the first chapter. That SCREAMS Mary Sue. No one wants to read about Mary Sues.
3.) Oh, and look at your last paragraph. It doesn't end, it just cuts off in the middle of a word. That's probably because you copy and pasted portions of the story twice. Seriously; it's not that hard to reread your piece to make sure everything is okay. By the way, DON'T put stupid author notes in the middle of the story. It ruins the flow and makes you look bad, especially since you used chat speak ("Dx") in it. Lastly, you need to italicize foreign phrases. Just because the majority of the people on this site are as ignorant about that as you doesn't mean they're right. Look it up to be sure.
4.) Interactive stories (which means the reader is somehow involved in the story) and second person/you based stories are not allowed on this site. You've been reported. Next time, try reading the rules. Breaking them can result in the deletion of your story and loss of your account.
5.) I'll be looking at your other stories and reporting any other violations I see.
Thank you so much FOR STATING THE OBVIOUS. This wasn't my story thank you oh so very much. My 11 year cousin who thinks she can right slapped this together and hacked my account. After I realized this, I updated a second 'Chapter' apologizing for what happened. So I'd just like to state that this was not my doing and I don't need anyone reporting my writing or hating on it. I like constructive advice not hating.