Plot Holes and Pet-Peeves about The Sparticle Mystery

by wolfbloodaimee

Here is a list of 21 pet peeves and plot-holes written down by me and my sister. This can be used as a prompt for others to attempt to fix these If there are any other plot-holes you have noticed or Pet-peeves you have, send me a PM or Review and we'll add it to the list :)

1. Chapter 1

How did doomsday Dora know 'the children' would go to that exact fairground so place her notice & message, let alone do it Right before there was any chance of the postcode being found by anyone else before the split

What happened to Moona?

What was the whole point of the 'Celtic' Easter egg hunt? Why not give them a postcode like she did before?

Why did Reese destroy the Quantum Nexus? – Didn't she realised that both worlds were still connected?

How do the parents not remember being transported to the children's world as a teenager? (/How is Dora the only one to remember as an adult (How else would she have been so certain about the split?)

How did Ernesto hold his baby past self without a paradox and Reapers destroying everything?

How come everyone has professional-looking monogrammed/custom clothing when there are no professionals to make them?

Photographic Paint job on cars/vans. How is this possible without Adults/Reliable computers

What happened to unborn babies when the worlds split?

Food shortages? Fuel Shortages? Water shortages?

How many children died because they did not have adults to care for them?

Clean clothing. No hot running water, and lack of washing powder should make pure white clothing impossible

Nuclear Reactors – Most would have blown up before the code could be administrated – Huge areas of radiation would travel throughout all countries.

Kings and Queens? – There is no-way one person could rule the whole of a country in its current state (especially one that was bratty and appeared to do little to help anyone)

Call centres…

Insulin production would have stopped. Type 1 Diabetics would be dead or extremely sickly due to lack of insulin.

Medical care would have skyrocketed in price. – Less medication to go around.

Luxury goods would have stopped. (Sugar, Tea, Cotton, ect)

People are not farming/Foraging for food. How are they still living?

If they can hear Holly's babies' heartbeat, it must be at least 10 weeks old. She was not anywhere near Ernesto in this time period. Therefore she cheated on him.

Also, Holly hates kids. Whose idea was this to have her getting it on with someone?

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