Characters- -Eriol Tomoyo Tamehaime Heiyuma Maiyura Kurenshi
Others
Scene Changes- -**Scene**
Dialog- -"Dialog"
Author's Note- -Notes
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Disclaimer- -I don't own ANY of the CardCaptor Sakura characters =( which kinda suckz.yeahz.it does don't it? You know what? I HATE CLAMP for not setting Tomoyo with Eriol. They're PERFECT for each other!! They are!!! Why does he have to be with Kaho? Kaho is ok and all but Clow was her previous love.Eriol is just a reincarnation of Clow.he should have his OWN love rightz? Why does Tomoyo have to suffer alone? Why cant CLAMP let her be happy? Jeez! They should go together!! They have so much in common! They both like teasing Sakura and Syaoran and they both so DARK!! ^_^ sigh.wellz.what's done is done I guess.thatz what fanfictions are for rightz? If you're displease with something make up your OWN! ^_^ The story's plot is based on this one movie I saw I thought was really good. Everything on here belongs to it's rightful owner unless stated otherwise.
Summary- -Eriol is raised up in a well-known family.Tomoyo lives up in the mountain nearly all her life.Tamehaime wants to be with her one and only but Destiny won't allow her to.Heiyuma was Tamehaima's true love.Kurenshi was a former lover of Tamehaime but things changed for the worse.Maiyura hated Eriol ever since a young girl.2 life stories combined in one.
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|| Chapter 01:Conflicts ||
**In The Night**
Footsteps of horses running in the distance.coming closer and closer by the minute. On a black stallion, rode a young man in his teen years along with a girl, also in her teen years fleeting from a pack of angry mob.
"Stop!" yelled out a voice.
"Let go of our mistress!" yelled another.
The young man suddenly stopped the stallion and got off.the girl standing several feet behind him. The teen held up his hands, palm facing the town people and a light of energy slowly emerges from his palms, sending a heavy blow to the mob, leaving all of them terribly injured, crawling on the floor for dear mercy. The two young teens got on the stallion once again and rode off into the night.
**In A Deserted Cave**
Inside a dark cave.sat the two lovers cuddling closely with the flames from the fire hitting against their faces.
"Tamehaime." said the young man hesitantly.
"Yes Heiyuma?" the young female replied with hope upon her shimmering eyes.
"Tamehaime.are you sure you want to do this? You sure you want to risk the love and respect of your family just to be with me.?" Heiyuma asked unsure of himself.
"I've never been more surer in my whole life Heiyuma.I love you.no matter the distance.I will always look for you." Tamehaime responded tearing up.
"Please don't cry Tamehaime.it hurts me seeing those precious tears drop from your beautiful eyes." Heiyuma said while gently wiping the tears from Tamehaime's eyes.
The two shared a passionate kiss and it slowly turn into desire for one another.
"Tamehaime!" yelled a voice from the cave's entrance.
"Father?!" Tamehaime exclaimed while quickly putting on her clothes.
"How dare you sneak out in the middle of the night and be sleeping with this man?" he r father retorted angrily.
"."Tamehaime didn't know exactly how to respond to her father without disrespecting him greatly.
"You brought great disgrace upon your family Tamehaime. What are you thinking running away like this?" the elder man asked harshly.
"Father.I don't want to marry Kurenshi, I love Heiyuma with all my heart. If the only way to be with him is to disgrace my family then I shall do just so," Tamehaime answered strongly.
"Tamehaime, you WILL marry Kurenshi. He's served me well and also he had saved me on the battlefield. Kurenshi seem to have an interest in you.I want to repay him for what he done for me even if it's marrying my daughter off," the man curtly replied.
"Tamehaime! Please.please listen to your father.you're upsetting him," the mother said softly trying to calm her husband.
"If you won't marry Kurenshi, then I will die right here in front of you!" said the father as he took out his sword and aimed it at himself.
"FATHER!!!!" Tamehaime ran towards her father and stopped the sword in time before its cold blade touched his skin.
"Tamehaime.please! Listen to your father and come home.if he shall die.I will follow in his footsteps," the mother spoke.
"Heiyuma.I'm so sorry.I cant let my parents give up their lives because of me. Please forgive me.I.I'm going back home." Tamehaime said with tears in her eyes as she began walking away from her one true love.
"But Tamehaime!" Heiyuma protested grabbing her right arm.
"Please Heiyuma! I can't.please let go." Tamehaime pleaded pulling free her arm and walked out of the cave with her parents.
**On The Battlefield**
"Sir would you like me to send a messenger home and tell Mistress Tamehaime that you will be returning soon?" asked a no significant boy.
"No boy, let it be a surprise," Kurenshi said smiling to himself. He took out a drawing from his pocket and looked at his beloved wife smiling so elegantly.
= Flashback =
Kurenshi walked out of his house, his wife walking along his side gracefully. He held her hands one last time and smiles a reassuring smile and walked towards his awaiting horse. He got on the horse and looked one last time at his most beautiful wife and rode off with his men off into the distance. Tamehaime gave him a weak wave goodbye before he parted.
= End Flashback =
Riding in the deep blue night, Kurenshi rode hastily home wanting to see his wife once again. Once reaching home, two maids came up and asked,
"Sire, do you wish for us to awaken mistress?" they asked in unison.
"No, that's alright. I'll go wake her up myself," Kurenshi said walking towards Tamehaime's room.
Inside, he quietly crept up towards her bed and slowly lifted up the covers and saw an empty bed. He thought suspiciously on his wife's whereabouts.
**At The Cave**
"Heiyuma." Tamehaime sighed blissfully.
"Yes Tamehaime?" replied Heiyuma soothingly.
"We can't keep this up. What if Kurenshi found out about us?" she asked fearfully.
"I would stand up to him, my dear. I almost lost you once, I'm not risking that again," Heiyuma replied boldly.
"Tamehaime! My wife! Heiyuma! My brother!" Kurenshi's voice echoed throughout the cave.
"Gasp! Kurenshi! What are you doing here? I thought you were still on the battlefield?" Tamehaime asked.
"I returned early, thinking it would be nice to see my newly wedded wife waiting for me at home. Instead, I find her having an affair with my closest friend, almost like a brother to me!" Kurenshi raising his voice.
"Dear brother. Tamehaime and I both love each other dearly and no matter what I'm not letting you separate us," Heiyuma said calmly.
"Dear brother! You still consider me a brother when you go having an affair with my wife!?!?" Kurenshi yelled.
"Draw your sword dear brother, for I will not let you disgrace me in such a way," Kurenshi continued.
"I do wish not to fight you, all I want is to be with my one true love," Heiyuma responded gently taking Tamehaime's hands in his.
"Draw your sword dear brother! If you shall not strike first then I will!" Kurenshi said angrily seeing the affection his wife gave to another man aside himself.
Kurenshi ran towards Heiyuma and missed his shoulder by a mere inch. Heiyuma pulled Tamehaime to the side and stood his ground against his brother. The two fought out while Tamehaime watched in despair, feeling helpless. Kurenshi, within minutes had gotten Heiyuma wounded and blood seeping through his teeth and shoulders. While Heiyuma was down, Kurenshi bought his sword and was about to take out Heiyuma when Tamehaime stopped the impact and got herself injured with a nearly fatal wound.
"Tamehaime!" Heiyuma cried out.
"Heiyuma.I.I will always love you.I will do whatever it takes to find you in the next life.Kurenshi.I'm so sorry.for ruining your life." Tamehaime said in an almost whisper.
"Tamehaime." Heiyuma said starting to tear.
"Tamehaime I will NEVER forgive you for what you did. No matter what life you're in I will find you and make you pay!!" Kurenshi yelled.
Tamehaime slowly lost her last breathe and died in Heiyuma's arm.
"Tamehaime!!" screamed Heiyuma.
Heiyuma then faced Kurenshi and anger struck him.
"You! You will pay dearly for taking her life!!!" yelled Heiyuma hysterically.
Heiyuma said an incantation and Kurenshi slowly evaporated into a thick black smog and floated out, saying he will get revenge. After Kurenshi dissolve out of the cave, Heiyuma saw Tamehaime's spirit lifted out of her deceased body, Heiyuma said an incantation repeatedly until he got full control of her spirit and send it towards her body. As he was doing so, the heavens turned a dark gray, almost black, because they were angry at his actions. He was going against the gods' wills. A lightning chain came through the room and Heiyuma's incantation was interrupted so the spirit was knocked into a bottle jar, which was lying on the ground.
"Tamehaime.I'm going to try again until I succeed. I don't care if I die going against heaven's will!" Heiyuma retorted towards the heavens up above.
That same night, Heiyuma went to see his sword master and asked for his advice on top of a mountain. There, the sky darkened, Heaven couldn't take any more of Heiyuma's abuses to the circle of life so they struck him with lightning and there his body was electrocuted and rotted.
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Wells! That's it for the first chapter! ^_^ Ha I'm bad with making up names huhz? Haha What you think of it? Nothing really happened in the first chapter but there'll be more actions later on in the story. The conversation is pretty corny don't you think so? Haha Anywayz.please review! Flame me if you want. Just review!
Scene Changes- -**Scene**
Dialog- -"Dialog"
Author's Note- -Notes
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Disclaimer- -I don't own ANY of the CardCaptor Sakura characters =( which kinda suckz.yeahz.it does don't it? You know what? I HATE CLAMP for not setting Tomoyo with Eriol. They're PERFECT for each other!! They are!!! Why does he have to be with Kaho? Kaho is ok and all but Clow was her previous love.Eriol is just a reincarnation of Clow.he should have his OWN love rightz? Why does Tomoyo have to suffer alone? Why cant CLAMP let her be happy? Jeez! They should go together!! They have so much in common! They both like teasing Sakura and Syaoran and they both so DARK!! ^_^ sigh.wellz.what's done is done I guess.thatz what fanfictions are for rightz? If you're displease with something make up your OWN! ^_^ The story's plot is based on this one movie I saw I thought was really good. Everything on here belongs to it's rightful owner unless stated otherwise.
Summary- -Eriol is raised up in a well-known family.Tomoyo lives up in the mountain nearly all her life.Tamehaime wants to be with her one and only but Destiny won't allow her to.Heiyuma was Tamehaima's true love.Kurenshi was a former lover of Tamehaime but things changed for the worse.Maiyura hated Eriol ever since a young girl.2 life stories combined in one.
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|| Chapter 01:Conflicts ||
**In The Night**
Footsteps of horses running in the distance.coming closer and closer by the minute. On a black stallion, rode a young man in his teen years along with a girl, also in her teen years fleeting from a pack of angry mob.
"Stop!" yelled out a voice.
"Let go of our mistress!" yelled another.
The young man suddenly stopped the stallion and got off.the girl standing several feet behind him. The teen held up his hands, palm facing the town people and a light of energy slowly emerges from his palms, sending a heavy blow to the mob, leaving all of them terribly injured, crawling on the floor for dear mercy. The two young teens got on the stallion once again and rode off into the night.
**In A Deserted Cave**
Inside a dark cave.sat the two lovers cuddling closely with the flames from the fire hitting against their faces.
"Tamehaime." said the young man hesitantly.
"Yes Heiyuma?" the young female replied with hope upon her shimmering eyes.
"Tamehaime.are you sure you want to do this? You sure you want to risk the love and respect of your family just to be with me.?" Heiyuma asked unsure of himself.
"I've never been more surer in my whole life Heiyuma.I love you.no matter the distance.I will always look for you." Tamehaime responded tearing up.
"Please don't cry Tamehaime.it hurts me seeing those precious tears drop from your beautiful eyes." Heiyuma said while gently wiping the tears from Tamehaime's eyes.
The two shared a passionate kiss and it slowly turn into desire for one another.
"Tamehaime!" yelled a voice from the cave's entrance.
"Father?!" Tamehaime exclaimed while quickly putting on her clothes.
"How dare you sneak out in the middle of the night and be sleeping with this man?" he r father retorted angrily.
"."Tamehaime didn't know exactly how to respond to her father without disrespecting him greatly.
"You brought great disgrace upon your family Tamehaime. What are you thinking running away like this?" the elder man asked harshly.
"Father.I don't want to marry Kurenshi, I love Heiyuma with all my heart. If the only way to be with him is to disgrace my family then I shall do just so," Tamehaime answered strongly.
"Tamehaime, you WILL marry Kurenshi. He's served me well and also he had saved me on the battlefield. Kurenshi seem to have an interest in you.I want to repay him for what he done for me even if it's marrying my daughter off," the man curtly replied.
"Tamehaime! Please.please listen to your father.you're upsetting him," the mother said softly trying to calm her husband.
"If you won't marry Kurenshi, then I will die right here in front of you!" said the father as he took out his sword and aimed it at himself.
"FATHER!!!!" Tamehaime ran towards her father and stopped the sword in time before its cold blade touched his skin.
"Tamehaime.please! Listen to your father and come home.if he shall die.I will follow in his footsteps," the mother spoke.
"Heiyuma.I'm so sorry.I cant let my parents give up their lives because of me. Please forgive me.I.I'm going back home." Tamehaime said with tears in her eyes as she began walking away from her one true love.
"But Tamehaime!" Heiyuma protested grabbing her right arm.
"Please Heiyuma! I can't.please let go." Tamehaime pleaded pulling free her arm and walked out of the cave with her parents.
**On The Battlefield**
"Sir would you like me to send a messenger home and tell Mistress Tamehaime that you will be returning soon?" asked a no significant boy.
"No boy, let it be a surprise," Kurenshi said smiling to himself. He took out a drawing from his pocket and looked at his beloved wife smiling so elegantly.
= Flashback =
Kurenshi walked out of his house, his wife walking along his side gracefully. He held her hands one last time and smiles a reassuring smile and walked towards his awaiting horse. He got on the horse and looked one last time at his most beautiful wife and rode off with his men off into the distance. Tamehaime gave him a weak wave goodbye before he parted.
= End Flashback =
Riding in the deep blue night, Kurenshi rode hastily home wanting to see his wife once again. Once reaching home, two maids came up and asked,
"Sire, do you wish for us to awaken mistress?" they asked in unison.
"No, that's alright. I'll go wake her up myself," Kurenshi said walking towards Tamehaime's room.
Inside, he quietly crept up towards her bed and slowly lifted up the covers and saw an empty bed. He thought suspiciously on his wife's whereabouts.
**At The Cave**
"Heiyuma." Tamehaime sighed blissfully.
"Yes Tamehaime?" replied Heiyuma soothingly.
"We can't keep this up. What if Kurenshi found out about us?" she asked fearfully.
"I would stand up to him, my dear. I almost lost you once, I'm not risking that again," Heiyuma replied boldly.
"Tamehaime! My wife! Heiyuma! My brother!" Kurenshi's voice echoed throughout the cave.
"Gasp! Kurenshi! What are you doing here? I thought you were still on the battlefield?" Tamehaime asked.
"I returned early, thinking it would be nice to see my newly wedded wife waiting for me at home. Instead, I find her having an affair with my closest friend, almost like a brother to me!" Kurenshi raising his voice.
"Dear brother. Tamehaime and I both love each other dearly and no matter what I'm not letting you separate us," Heiyuma said calmly.
"Dear brother! You still consider me a brother when you go having an affair with my wife!?!?" Kurenshi yelled.
"Draw your sword dear brother, for I will not let you disgrace me in such a way," Kurenshi continued.
"I do wish not to fight you, all I want is to be with my one true love," Heiyuma responded gently taking Tamehaime's hands in his.
"Draw your sword dear brother! If you shall not strike first then I will!" Kurenshi said angrily seeing the affection his wife gave to another man aside himself.
Kurenshi ran towards Heiyuma and missed his shoulder by a mere inch. Heiyuma pulled Tamehaime to the side and stood his ground against his brother. The two fought out while Tamehaime watched in despair, feeling helpless. Kurenshi, within minutes had gotten Heiyuma wounded and blood seeping through his teeth and shoulders. While Heiyuma was down, Kurenshi bought his sword and was about to take out Heiyuma when Tamehaime stopped the impact and got herself injured with a nearly fatal wound.
"Tamehaime!" Heiyuma cried out.
"Heiyuma.I.I will always love you.I will do whatever it takes to find you in the next life.Kurenshi.I'm so sorry.for ruining your life." Tamehaime said in an almost whisper.
"Tamehaime." Heiyuma said starting to tear.
"Tamehaime I will NEVER forgive you for what you did. No matter what life you're in I will find you and make you pay!!" Kurenshi yelled.
Tamehaime slowly lost her last breathe and died in Heiyuma's arm.
"Tamehaime!!" screamed Heiyuma.
Heiyuma then faced Kurenshi and anger struck him.
"You! You will pay dearly for taking her life!!!" yelled Heiyuma hysterically.
Heiyuma said an incantation and Kurenshi slowly evaporated into a thick black smog and floated out, saying he will get revenge. After Kurenshi dissolve out of the cave, Heiyuma saw Tamehaime's spirit lifted out of her deceased body, Heiyuma said an incantation repeatedly until he got full control of her spirit and send it towards her body. As he was doing so, the heavens turned a dark gray, almost black, because they were angry at his actions. He was going against the gods' wills. A lightning chain came through the room and Heiyuma's incantation was interrupted so the spirit was knocked into a bottle jar, which was lying on the ground.
"Tamehaime.I'm going to try again until I succeed. I don't care if I die going against heaven's will!" Heiyuma retorted towards the heavens up above.
That same night, Heiyuma went to see his sword master and asked for his advice on top of a mountain. There, the sky darkened, Heaven couldn't take any more of Heiyuma's abuses to the circle of life so they struck him with lightning and there his body was electrocuted and rotted.
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Wells! That's it for the first chapter! ^_^ Ha I'm bad with making up names huhz? Haha What you think of it? Nothing really happened in the first chapter but there'll be more actions later on in the story. The conversation is pretty corny don't you think so? Haha Anywayz.please review! Flame me if you want. Just review!