ps lots peopl mak a zobie stroy so i decide to go to mas efekt to mak my zombi stroy. aslo i dont now muh abut mas efect but i hop i do it god enogh to mak you lik aslo

pps this stroy tak palce BEFOR the gams to explan the zmobies in the sries that i tink are their.

ppps i aslo lern . thats good

pppps this story is TEEM. no babys becus i dont want to scare anyurn.

ppppps it up to yu if sheperd is boy or a gril becus my frend tels me he can be boath. if you wnat he can eb boy AND GRIL

comanander sheperd was in him ship. he was asleep

'IM TIRED' je says as he se a palnet 'BIGNO'

he fly donw to palnet and get out him gun. he was kind scare becus he had feel their was zmobies about. he could sense they with him sikic pows

sheperd then get out him gun and shot at ar becus he new the zmobies were their. he was bingo! ther waer invible zmobies that wer hiding from siht wit them spekial pows

'howd you fnid us' they said

'UR ZMOBIES CANT TALK!' sheperd sayss and he pnuch it in fase. the zmoi was ded becus sheperd his fits wer hard as gold

but then he get him a big roket gun and shot rokets everywear and the zmobis dieded

'i must find the zombies house' sayed shepherd and he got him a famtower and shots fire evrywher. he did just that and shot fires everywher. some invisible zombis were fir!

'ow wear on fir' they sayed with agro 'i wil punch yu' and shepaad did that and pnuched them inthe face. they redied becus there zmobies and zobies are aready died. 'AAAAAAh' the zmobies schemed becuss the afrad of shepard 'YU WONT SLOP THE MAS EFECT'

'MASS EFFEECT' say sheprad 'I MUST STOP TH MATH EFECT'

and then he cal iin him ship.

'helo were is the mas efect'

'its in the zmobies house'' said the sip

'ok' say shepard

and he get wa

lking becus he wanted to slop the mas efekt

he go the zmobies and konkc

'halo'

'were the zmobies

and then separd bun the hose down. it was nothing now

and he find the mas efekt and braked it. the mas efekt was gon now

'eyes i wined'

'separd bewar of mor zmobies' say the sip

ps i hop you lik see. can you tel i didnt now much abbot the game? plese revew folow and sugest new sires for storys and if you lik chek my otterr storys becus i hav lots.