Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or Mahou Sensei Negima.
A/N: Alright people, here it is, my first attempt at writing a fic. Now, just like any other author, I promote and accept constructive criticism. However, I also know that I can't control what people choose to leave as a review, so all I ask is if you're going to flame me, at least make it creative. Thank You (^_^)
P.S.: I would like to thank Sunwraith and Wolf3391 for giving me permission to use some of their ideas for my story. If anyone has not read their stories, I highly suggest you read them first. Both are highly entertaining. Now on with the show!
-Mahora's Maelstrom-
Chapter 1
"JUST DO IT BAA-CHAN!" yelled a blonde teenager to a woman who looked no older than 30. "I need those eyes, its the only way I can face him with any chance of winning!" The woman in question, a stunning blonde with bust that could make most woman green with envy, was Senju Tsunade, Godaime Hokage of Konohagakure. She simply replied to the teenage blonde by saying, "Listen here brat, I don't have to DO anything! The only reason I trusted you in letting you off that island-", "turtle" interrupted the male blonde. "NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO BE INTERRUPTING ME!" shouted Tsunade with some anger in her voice. "I supported you in letting you off that damned turtle!...and joining this war because of the power you house. You were able to finally achieve true control over it, that should be enough to stop Madara. Even the Yondaime believed it to be enough." There was a moment of silence before she continued saying, "Naruto, you don't need more power, you have plenty already." The now identified Naruto had a serious look on his face as he said, "Baa-chan, if anyone knows the most of what the Yondaime wanted, its me. He told me what he wanted, he entrusted me with-" Now it was the woman's turn to interrupt as she blurted out, "He told you! He's been dead for 17 years now, how could he tell you anything?" "Because I spoke with him!" shouted Naruto, a little irritated at being interrupted, forgetting his own interruption just moments earlier.
"How did you-", "It was during Pain's attack." said Naruto in a dejected voice, using Nagato's alias to avoid confusion. "I was in the seal, after Hinata got injured, and I was feeling sorry for myself for not having enough power to protect her. All logic went out the window and I was about to pull off the seal when he just showed up out of nowhere and stopped me." Seeing the look of confusion on her face, he continued, "He explained to me that he left some of his chakra behind in the seal for just that situation; for if I ever tried to pull off the seal." Seeing the look of shame on Naruto's face, Tsunade quickly changed the subject by saying, "See! There's your proof, he told you himself tha-", "He left me with what he thought was enough power at the time! But he did not forsee Madara gaining the Rinnegan. Had it just been the Sharingan, I might have stood a chance, even with Sasuke backing him; but now the power scale has tipped, and what I have is not enough." Tsunade rubbed her temples, feeling a massive headache coming on. She had left her position at the Joint Shinobi Army Headquarters early in hopes of relaxing a little. Had she known Naruto would be waiting for her at her tent, she might have reconsidered. She had walked in half an hour earlier to find him waiting for her with a look of determination on his face and the body of the Sanbi Jinchuuriki. When asked why he was there, he went on to explain that he needed the eyes the dead man currently possessed; one Rinnegan, and the other a Sharingan. She had proceeded to tell him it was impossible, that the only reason those corpses could use them was because they were just that, corpses. They had the luxury of not feeling the pain nor the chakra drain from possessing dojutsus that only a true member of the bloodline could posses. They continued to argue until they landed in the situation they were currently in.
"Well," replied Naruto, "if that was the case, then why did he just implant them in the Jinchuuriki. He could of given them to a few more of the corpses to make this war that much more difficult. If my theory is correct, then its because Madara could NOT implant them in anyone else; meaning I should be able to use them as well. Come on Baa-chan, what's the worst that could happen?" "What's the worst that could happen? WHAT'S THE WORST THAT COULD HAPPEN? YOU COULD DIE BRAT!" "That's a risk I'm willing to take." There was a moment of silence. Tsunade couldn't believe her ears, here was the one person she considered her own flesh and blood, willing to die for a CHANCE at a bit more power. Her face turned red as she yelled, "WELL I'M NOT! SINCE WHEN DID YOU BECOME LIKE THE UCHIHA, WILLING TO DO ANYTHING FOR POWER, EVEN TAKING THE EYES FROM A CORPSE?" She waited for his answer, a sense of loathe overcame her at comparing him to the traitor. But she needed him to see how he was acting. Power hungry. What he said next though, made her see she was completely wrong about why he wanted this power. "Is that what you think?" he said, staring at his feet, refusing to meet her eyes. "You believe after all I suffered because of Sasuke I would not know if I was being power hungry?" He finally looked at her, and she could see the disappointment in his eyes. "Baa-chan, I thought you knew me better than that. I'm not doing this because I want to, not because I simply want more power either. I'm GOING to do this because I NEED to! I want to win this war! I want the people of the world to know peace like Ero-Sennin wished! I want to protect my precious people! And if there is a chance of me dieing, well then so be it! At the very least my death will of gotten rid of the Kyuubi, and in turn, stalled this war for at least a hundred years; this will leave all of you with enough time to warn and prepare future generations for the war that would come. But, if I don't die, if I survive, if I gain those eyes, I will have a better CHANCE AT ENDING THIS WAR ONCE AND FOR ALL!" Naruto said shouting towards the end trying to get his point across. He took a deep breath and looked towards Tsunade saying, "Either way, at least it will stop this war, whether it be for good or just for a little while. The only difference will be whether I'm alive or not.
Tsunade for her part was shocked, she knew Naruto could be stubborn, but this was something else entirely. He was not simply being hard headed, he was not just trying to get a rise out of her; he honestly believed he was doing the right thing. And she knew she would not be able to dissuade him from this decision; so she did the only thing she could, albeit reluctantly, "Fine, I'll do it." Naruto couldn't believe what he just heard, he thought it would take more to convince her, but was happy it didn't since they were at war and every second was precious. He was about to gloat, but luckily for him, decided against it; he knew it was neither the place nor the time. Instead, he thanked her. "Thanks Baa-chan, and don't worry about it, I promise I'll live, or my name isn't Uzumaki Naruto dattebayo!" Hearing his little outburst caused Tsunade to chuckle, he really did know how to lighten the mood. "Fine brat, I'll hold you to that. And don't think I'll just let you die either, I'll be sure to revive you and make you spend a month at the hospital." she said, causing Naruto to sweat drop, but he gave one of his fox like grins and said, "If it will get you to transplant those eyes, I'll take it!"
-Mahora's Maelstrom-
The war had raged on, with the Shinobi Alliance losing more than they ever expected. Sure, there were those who had experienced war, and everyone else had heard the war stories, but no one knew it would be this bad.
A day after the appearance of Naruto and Bee, the tides had turned. Madara had gotten what he wanted, Naruto and Bee out in the open. But what he did not expect was what effect their presence would have, not only on the battlefield, but on the army's morale as well. Seeing the people they were trying to protect, out on the battlefield, fighting alongside them, caused many to double their efforts. However, on the second day after their emergence on the battlefield, many had noticed that the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki was missing. Believing he had been captured caused many, especially those who knew him, to ask their General, the Raikage, for his location. What those people did not expect was to have their leader tell them not to worry, that he was safe and away from danger. Those who were close to Naruto, such as Kakashi, Sakura, Hinata, and the rest of the rookie 9, went directly to their Hokage to ask about his whereabouts. But much to their dismay, she said she could not tell them. Some felt disappointed, but mostly all felt angered; angered that their Hokage would not trust them with that piece of information. When confronted, she said she did not have the luxury of saying where he was, nor why he was missing. This had the rookie 9 and the Suna siblings(specifically Temari and Kankuro) screaming that if anyone had a right to know where he was, it was them. Tsunade, as she was walking away, stopped mid stride, and sent them all a glare; a glare that they knew would of been replaced with a fist to the face under different circumstances. She said, "Believe it or not, I don't like hiding this from you, but the fact of the matter is, we're at war; we're at war with an enemy that has the capability of performing a near perfect transformation into our allies. Anyone of you could be an enemy and we'd never know, not without Naruto at least." "BUT WE'RE NOT THE ENEMY!" shouted Sakura. "I never said you were." said Tsunade all too coldly. "I just said there was a possibility, and even if you're not, how would you prove it!" She let the sentence sink in before continuing. "One more thing, you best remember who you're talking to. I'll let it slide this time, but the next time any of you second guess me, or speak to me that way again," she said as she narrowed her eyes at Sakura, causing the pinkette to flinch, "I will have you reprimanded. Now get out of my sight, you're all dismissed." said the Godaime with an air of finality that left no room for discussion. They all nodded and left in a hurry, not wanting to anger the Senju any more than she already was. But they all had the same though, 'Naruto, where are you?'
As the rookies left, the only ones left in Tsunade's presence were Kakashi and Shizune. Shizune was first to speak. "They just wanted answers, they were worried about their friend." Tsunade could hear the worry in her voice, prompting her to say, "I know, but they also had no right asking the way they did, I am their leader. My saying that he is alright should have been enough for them." Just as she was about to walk away, Kakashi decided to get his question in, "Were you serious about what you said, about not wanting information to get out concerning his location; or his reason for absence?" Tsunade thought for a second before responding, "Yes. I deem his reason for absence AND his location important enough to hide, even from people from my own village." With that she left, not wanting to divulge more than she already had. Shizune made her way out finding her teacher's reasoning good enough to stop asking questions. Kakashi on the other hand was in deep thought, 'What could be so important to not only hide Naruto, but also keep us from finding out why he's missing. Especially now, after he just came out of hiding a few days ago.'
It was on the fifth day though that everything changed. Madara was tired of having the alliance not only beat back his army of Zetsu clones, but also weed out the ones who had replaced their comrades and joined their ranks. It was because of this frustration that caused him to take drastic measures. Everyone who was not awake by noon on the fifth day awoke to find a beam of light connecting to the moon. If one were to look close enough, they would notice the moon was slowly moving towards the earth. It wasn't until the battle started anew that people found out the purpose of Madara trying to bring the Juubi into existence early. The alliance was no longer met by Zetsu clones but rather by Kabuto's undead army, and Uchiha Madara himself. At first, many saw this as an opportunity to end the war by killing him. Those from Amegakure had heard of how Konan had greatly injured him, and passed the information along. Many thought the solution was to GREATLY outnumber him and attack continuously until he could no longer go back into his own dimension. They had no idea how wrong they were. That method might of worked on him before, but not anymore; they were unaware that he was drawing on the power of the Juubi. Even though incomplete, it was still more than the army could handle, and they quickly found that out. By the start of the seventh day, Madara and Kabuto's army had decimated more than half of the alliance. Luckily for those on the battlefield, they were told to leave Madara alone. Although confused, they were relieved to be called back. No one wanted to be considered a coward, but they knew they were no match for him; still, they wondered what could have changed to call them back.
It was on this day that Naruto had recovered from the operation of transplanting the Rinnegan and the Sharingan; it had taken longer than expected,considering he was getting accustomed to having not one, but two new dojutsus. But none the less the operation was a success, although those who did not know were non the wiser, seeing as his eyes were still the cerulean blue they always were. As far as they were concerned, he had been injured and was finally fit for duty again, although this did little to ease their minds. Those who had witnessed Madara's power first hand had all lost hope; in their eyes, no one could match his power. No one. So when they were told to let Naruto handle Madara, and to not interfere, many had feared their General had gone mad.
On the eight day Kabuto had been defeated in an ambush. He had not expected for the whole alliance army to zero in on his location. It was because of this, and the fact that he was overestimating his own abilities, that he was finally defeated. Many rejoiced in his death, especially Anko, but many still had their thoughts on their last enemy. It wasn't until they returned to the camp that they felt the force of the two powerhouses duking it out. Many could not believe that the blonde Jinchuuriki was doing so well against Madara. Many wanted to rush out and witness the epic battle, but were told to stay. Some argued they could help the blonde only to receive the same answer as everyone else. "You will only get in his way."
A day later, everyone could feel the two powers begin to die down; many feared the blonde had failed, that the war was lost. But all thosse fears and feelings of hopelessness were crushed the instant the beam of light pulling the moon towards the earth faded. The army could not believe their eyes, many were afraid to admit what it meant for fear of being wrong; but once a random shinobi screamed that the war was over, the whole army erupted into celebration. "Its finally over!" a shinobi yelled. "We can finally live in peace!" a kunoichi shouted. Left and right there were cheers of joy and happiness. Even the normally stoic Shino allowed his emotions to take over and started celebrating. Indeed, it was great to know that peace had come at last. Although not all were celebrating, those that had lost loved ones finally allowed grief to take over. Seeing everything they had worked towards accomplished, they couldn't help but wish they were still here. But even then, a few didn't allow that to keep them down. And so the night was spent celebrating, lovers making love, those with a crush confessing their love, and those that had none, or were just too tired to celebrate in their own intimate way, were drinking the night away. It wasn't until someone had made a toast to their savior that they realized he was not with them. Many, especially those from Konoha, felt stupid for forgetting about their number one hyperactive knucklehead, prankster from hell, ninja. But no one knew, that once they found him, all joy would be gone.
-Mahora's Maelstrom-
The small search party sent out by the Hokage had spent half of the day looking for Naruto. The thought of him being dead had never crossed any of their minds. They just couldn't see that hyperactive walking ball of energy being dead. Shikamaru assumed he was sleeping, Kiba said he was making love to a hottie from a different village(poor bastard didn't wake up until a week later). Sakura had even joked that he had gone off to get a celebratory bowl of ramen for his accomplishments. It was in the middle of this joke, as everyone was laughing, that Hinata screamed. She screamed in such a devastated manner, that all laughter immediately ceased. Everyone followed her line of sight and couldn't help but look away from what they saw. Some began to tear up, while others shouted in agony. There, standing in the middle of the field in a pool of their own blood, almost as if they were a pair of statues, were Naruto and Sasuke. The latter had his arm impaling the former's back, his hand coming out the front holding the blonde's heart. What shocked everyone was the sword in the blondes hand, which many recognized as Sasuke's, impaling the raven haired boy through the stomach coming out his back. Many had realized what happened, seeing their positions. Naruto had obviously dropped his guard around the Uchiha, who had taken the opportunity to kill the blonde. The only silver lining was that the last Uzumaki had the sense of mind to drag the last Uchiha along with him to the afterlife. But even that did little to comfort those there, the fact that the blonde was gone hurt more than any of them could believe. No more would there be any pranks. No more would they see that foxy grin, nor the warm smile that conveyed how happy he was to just be alive. No, Uzumaki Naruto was gone, and they would never get to tell him how thankful they were. Hinata could no longer stand the sight and proceeded to faint in front of Naruto, but for a very different reason from all those times she had before.
Kakashi had never felt so depressed, not when Obito died, not when Rin died, not even when the Yondaime died. No, this death far outweighed those. Why? Because this death was, in a way, of his doing. He was the one that taught Sasuke that jutsu, the jutsu that took away not only his student, but his sensei's son as well. Knowing this, Kakashi was the one that freed Naruto from his traitorous students grasp, and lifted him as if though he were the most precious thing on this earth.
-Mahora's Maelstrom-
As the crowd was celebrating, Tsunade sat in her tent, awaiting the return of the search party that had gone off to find the Shinobi world's savior. She was debating on how long she should wait to name him the next Hokage when she heard Shizune from outside her tent, "Lady Tsunade, you have visitors." "Send them in, and bring some sake while your at it!" she exclaimed, practically feeling the frown on her assistant's face. "Hai." said Shizune letting a smile grace her lips, "I guess I can do that, go on in" she said the last part facing away from the tent as she walked off to get the sake. Tsunade was surprised to see Gaara and his siblings walk in, but quickly greeted them saying, "Welcome Kazekage-Dono! What a nice surprise, what can I do for you?" Gaara gave a small bow before taking a seat while his brother and sister sat next to him on either side. "Any news of Naruto?" asked Gaara, a hint of worry in his voice. Tsunade shook her head and said, "Not yet, but I expect Kakashi and his group back sometime soon." Gaara nodded, saying his thanks while Kankuro said "Good, I was getting worried. I can't believe we forgot about him in all the commotion. Just hope he isn't depressed, he'll probably force us to buy him ramen for the rest of his life for forgetting. My wallet wouldn't survive." They were all laughing when the sound of the party outside died down; curious, they were about to go outside when the sound of a bottle breaking followed by Shizune screaming, "Nooooo!" made them all freeze. They were only frozen for a moment before they all rushed outside, fearing the worst. Once outside, they saw a hysterical Shizune being held by Kakashi. They looked past them to a table surrounded by a grieving Hinata and Sakura; what they saw next made their hearts sink. There, on the table, lay Naruto, with a hole in his chest where his heart should be. Tsunade stood shell shocked, not believing her eyes. She refused to believe what she was seeing was real. She ran past everyone, shoving those who tried to stop her out of the way. "Wake up you idiot! Stop fooling around!" She grabbed him by the collar, trying shake him awake; refusing to accept that the wound on his chest was real. She was at it for a whole 5 minutes, yelling at him about how she'd never make him Hokage if he didn't stop this stupid prank. No one dared to stop either too traumatized to more, or afraid of her reaction if they got close enough to touch her. It wasn't until Gaara put a hand to her shoulder that she stopped. Looking at him, she saw the tears in his eyes and knew it was real. She sank to her knees and let off an agonizing yell that reached the heart of each and every single kunoichi and shinobi there. Their savior, the man that had brought peace to their world, was dead. That night, no one celebrated, no one so much as ate or drank the entire night; that night was about paying respect to the man that had given everything, even his life, to ensure that peace reigned over all the shinobi villages.
-Mahora's Maelstrom-
As Naruto regained consciousness, he felt...weightless, for lack of a better word. Almost as if though he was floating. He opened his eyes to find out where he was but closed them right away seeing a blinding white. "Damn it its bright!" he complained. He thought for a second before coming to a conclusion, "I guess Baa-chan wasn't kidding when she said she would put me in the hospital" he said letting off a small chuckle. 'But why doesn't it smell like the hospital?' he thought. Almost as if on cue, a female voice said, "You're not in the hospital Naruto." Naruto's eyes flew open recognizing the voice, but cursed at being blinded again. Slowly adjusting to the light, he squinted his eyes looking towards where he heard the voice. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. There, a few feet away from him, were his father and mother...floating? "NANI! Kaa-san! Tou-san! You guys can fly!"yelled Naruto. Kushina and Minato erupted into laughter. He really was just like his mother. "I guess you can say that." said Kushina. "Don't lie to the boy Kushina, is that how you want to start off your first encounter." said a sagely voice Naruto could never forget. Whirling around, he saw the Sandaime Hokage. "Jiji!" shouted Naruto, tears welling up in his eyes. He tried to run, but found that just like his parents, he was floating. That's when it hit him, a frown replacing the smile on his face, " I'm dead, aren't I?" The look on their faces told him all he needed to know. "Of course you are gaki. But don't worry, its not as bad as you think. There are beautiful women everywhere." said an all too familiar voice. Naruto didn't even need to turn around, he just smile again, knowing all too well who was behind him, "Yea, more women to beat you to a pulp when they catch you, not to mention Tou-san, Kaa-san, and me if we catch you peeping on Kaa-san." He could feel his sensei tense up behind him before saying, "Damn it gaki, do you have to ruin a good moment." Naruto laughed as he turned to face his godfather who was feet away from him, "Its good to see you too Ero-Sennin." he said giving the man a hug. He went around getting and giving hugs to his precious people who had left him all too soon. As they were going around recounting stories, a voice suddenly called out, "Its time." Naruto had a confused look on his face but noticed that everyone around him looked depressed. He was about to voice his concern when the most beautiful woman he had ever seen appeared in front of him, and he had seen some beautiful women in his life. She had white hair that looked like silk. Her face was heart shaped with a pair of violet eyes that held experience and knowledge beyond what her appearance portrayed. She had a pair of breast that were not overly big, but fit her body perfectly.
"Its time for what?" he asked. "For you to get going." she said. Looking around he saw that everyone looked sad, yet oddly happy; especially Jiraiya, almost like he was doing research. Realizing what the woman meant, he asked, "I'm not staying here am I?" She shook her, so he continued, "Am I going back?" Again she shook her. Letting out a sigh, Naruto ran a hand through his hair saying, "Then where am I going? And who are you anyway?" The woman looked at him saying, "I, Naruto, am Kami" Naruto look at her with a completely unreadable expression before he laughed for a little bit before passing out.
He awoke to see everyone sitting around him waiting for him to awaken. "Sorry about that." said Naruto rubbing the back of his head sheepishly. "Its ok, I get that a lot. Now, onto business. Naruto, I'll be sending you to world far different from your own. It is a world filled with magic. Not too different from your chakra, but none the less, different. There will be a lot of things you don't understand, but rest assured I will give you all the necessary information." Naruto interrupted her and asked in an almost depressed voice, "Why send me there and not home? And why this place specifically? Is it some war torn land? Cause if it is, I'd much rather stay here." Kami looked at him with a smile, "Going in order in which they were asked, no, I can't send you home; I'm sending you there because they will need assistance, but not you specifically, they will have their own hero; and last, no, its not war torn. In fact, its far from it." At this point Jiraiya chuckled causing Naruto to raise an eyebrow, but he let it go and said, "Fine, I'll do it. But can I at least say good bye first." Kami nodded and said, "I'll do you one better, I'll allow them to impart anything they want on you."
Nodding his thanks, he turned to his family and said, "Well, it feels like we met just minutes ago and now I'm off again." Everyone laughed at his small joke, but smiled as they said, "Take care of yourself ok sweetie." "No problem Kaa-san, and don't worry, I'll TRY to take care of myself." joked Naruto. "You better, as for what I'm leaving you, call it the best present ever. Its what our clan was known for back in Uzu no Kuni, Fuuinjutsu. And seeing as I'm the one who taught your father, you'll have no complaints right?" she said kissing his forehead. As she did, the spot where she kissed him began to glow. "If anyone deserves it, its you." "Thanks Kaa-san, and don't worry, I'll make sure to use it wisely." Turning to his father he said, "I know your perfect gift for me." Smirking, his father said, "I think I know just what it is, and I'll give you something extra too." Giving him one of his tri-pronged kunai that glowed just like Kushina's kiss, Naruto snapped his eyes open asking in an amused voice, "Really Tou-san? Is this the time to be filling me in on the birds and the bees?" Minato laughed and said, "Better late then never. But trust me son, when you finally do decide to take a partner, you'll be happy to know their anatomy. Also, make sure you hold on to that kunai, it has the seal for the Hiraishin technique already configured for you to use. All you have to do is copy it and place it on other kunai." Taking a step back, he allowed the Sandaime to have his turn. Shaking his hand as it began to glow, the old Sarutobi said, "Naruto, to you I'll impart all of my wisdom, everything I know that made me known as The Professor. Also, everything I know about our village, laws and all, should you decide to build one wherever it is you're going. " At this point, Naruto was almost in tears, having not gotten what he really wanted. "I'll also give you the knowledge to my jutsu. ALL of them. And since you have those eyes, it shouldn't take you long to learn them." Releasing his Jiji's hand, he looked confused before shouting, "WAIT, I GET TO KEEP THE EYES? AWESOME!" Everyone had a good laugh at his antics before Jiraiya approached him, "Seeing as sensei knew all my techniques, all I can give you is the series of books I wrote." He said handing Naruto a scroll. "But you have to promise me to republish them." Feeling Kushina's glare, Jiraiya quickly said, "Gotta go!" before taking and off disappearing into the nothingness with Kushina hot on his tail. Laughing as he followed behind them, Minato said, "Take care my son, and this time, don't forget to live a little." and just like that he was gone. He turned to his Jiji who just smiled and said, "I don't want to see you again till your at least my age." Naruto chuckled and said, "No problem Jiji." before he was gone as well.
Turning to face Kami, she said, "About the fox-" before he cut her off saying, "Take him.", "Let me finish," she said. "Unfortunately, I can't take him. Under normal circumstances I would be able to, but seeing as your father used my brother to seal him in you, my hands are bound." Naruto hung his head before she said, "But I can merge him with you. He would be gone, but you would become a hanyou. And before you start acting up," she said quickly as Naruto was about to start complaining, "know that where you're going, there are plenty of hanyou's." Naruto thought for a second before saying, "Ok."
As he saw Kami raise her arms, she suddenly stopped. He looked at her with confusion and asked, "What's wrong, can't you do it?". "Its not that," she said, "I just came to the conclusion that I should give some sort of gift as well." Naruto's eyes widened considerably at what he just heard, "A-A-Are you serious?". A gift from Kami; that's something that people only ever dreamed of. "BUT..." she said, stopping him before he started ranting about how, awesome, this gift would be, "it will not be something as beneficial as what your family has given you. If anything, its more a reminder of where you're from and what you suffered through." And with that said, Naruto all of a sudden felt a burning sensation in his chest and back. It felt almost as if he was hit by one of Sasuke's Chidori's; when the sensation stopped, Naruto lifted his shirt to check his chest. What he saw gave him mixed feelings: sorrow, pain, regret. What he was looking at was a scar where he felt the burning, the same place where Sasuke had rammed a Chidori through his chest in the Valley of the End. He knew it was from that time, because unlike the second time Sasuke hit him with that attack, the scar was just to the left of his heart, missing it by mere centimeters.
"Why did you give me this scar?" he asked solemnly, thinking about how he got the scar and who gave it to him. "Because that was the turning point in your life." she answered. "It was after he shoved his fist through your chest that you finally fought him seriously; it was after you awoke from that fight that you took your training seriously and left on your training trip; and it was after that trip, that your eyes opened up to the world around you and you finally saw it for what it really was. A cold, cruel world where not everything is black and white." she answered coldly. Naruto took a deep breath and looked her right in the eye, "Fine, I can see why you gave me this scar and how it serves as a reminder. Now, can we please move on to getting the fox out of me." Kami couldn't help but smirk at his determination.
"Fine, lets get to it; and just as a word of warning, this is going to hurt more than receiving that scar." As he closed his eyes, bracing himself for the pain; he was surprised when a few seconds later, he heard Kami say, "Ok, done." "REALLY? That didn't hurt at all." said Naruto wiggling his limbs not feeling any different. "I know," said kami, "but this will." Just then pain overtook him. He could feel his muscles growing and his limbs stretching. Five minutes later the pain stopped. "What the hell was that!" screamed Naruto. "That, Naruto, were your genes kicking in." Naruto stared at her in confusion, not understanding her concise explanation. "What do you mean?" asked Naruto. "Having the fox sealed in you stunted your growth and other aspects of your appearance from fully manifesting. Now with the fox gone, your body went into overdrive applying what should of been there all along. Have a look for yourself." Kami made a full length mirror appear out of thin air. Naruto noticed that he looked taller, just under 6 feet. Also, his hair had grown to his shoulders, all in all he looked more like his father, minus the whiskers. As he was checking his reflection, his clothes suddenly vanished, except for his boxers. He turned to ask Kami what had happened, only to see Kami's fist glowing a bright blue, rocketing towards his face. Before he could react, he was hit, knocking him through time and space, to start a new life in a new world.
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A/N: So their goes my first chapter, hope you all enjoyed it. Now, before you go, please know that I am not a fast typer, nor do my ideas come to me naturally like some other great writers on here *cough Kenchi618 cough*, but I will do my best to update as fast as possible. Thanks for the patience. Also, flamers, again I say; Please. Be. CREATIVE!