Well, um...Hello. This will be my first time writing a story. Sorry if it's really sucks. Well feel free to bash but not too harsh, hey I'm still a beginner right?
This is my first Kingdome Hearts fanfic so be easy on me, okay.
"That's enough Sora!" Riku snatch a large plate with a large cake from his goofy friend.
"Aww...Riku come on one more please…" he said flashing his infamous sad puppy eye.
"No still no Sora. And don't even think that puppy eye will work. Only idiotic people will fall for that (which is usually him)".rising his hand with above his head to prevent Sora from taking it.
"Aww...Riku what are you my mother?" he whine still holding Riku's shirt in attempting to get the cake.
"Well, let see the last time I let you eat two whole dinning cake although I'm only allowing you to eat a slice of it. And make to answer to the angry chef." Riku angry vine pop on his head.
"But until now I don't get any of stomachache or toothache. Now please...oh...Please Riku. Only a pleaaaaaaaaase…." he begs with his full mode power of puppy eye love.
Riku was stunned and sigh with defeat. "All right…" he put down the cake.
"Yay!", when Sora wants to take the cake Riku pull it back.
"Only one slice do you got Me.", Sora nodded. Riku put the plate on the table and cut a slice of cake to Sora.
"Wait a sec I'll go get the door.", then Riku left. When Sora wanted to reach another bite.
"Ah...No way you gonna get another one. No touching until I come back", said Riku peeking his friend on the edge of the door.
"Haa…Taking care of Sora is much worse than taking care of a baby." he sigh. Flipping some letter that he got.
"Electrical bill...Woah Sora should less play that video game. Letter from I wonder what he want to babble about", again he sigh.
"Hey Sora. There's letter from Lo…AH!" Riku cried when seeing the round large plump cake have been devour to crumb.
"SORA!! I TOLD YOU TO EAT ONLY ONE SLICE! NOT WHOLE OF IT!!!" Riku cried like the earth will be cracked to half.
Sora was innocently munching on the last piece of cake. "But your cake is too delicious Riku!" he chirp.
"I swear you will get a toothache if you eat more of the cake." the older teen sigh.
"No way will the tooth worm get ...Comp.", Sora munches the last piece.
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"Sora? What's wrong", said Riku noticing his friend sudden silence. Then Sora cried for pain.
"See what I told ya about. Now follow me to the dentist", he said with a wicked face.
"No! Anywhere but not there! I'm bagging you. I'll beg you with my dignity"." he cried dramatically.
Riku was snickering. "Sorry Sora this will hurt me than it will hurt you Sora"
"NOOOOOOOO!"
So how about it I still don't have my own Beta Reader but I'll try my best next time!
