Okay people this is my first story so it might stink a little, but tell me what you think

-Meredith aka PrincessKagome18

Chapter one: The Invite

"Hey Kagome, so do you wanna come?"
"Of course!" Kagome replied quickly.

She was talking to her best friend, Sango, they've known each other for a year, but they act like sisters that know everything about each other. Sango was like Kagome's older sister, she always looked after her.

"And do you know who will be there?" Sango asked Kagome
"Who???" Kagome asked disoriented.
"InuYasha Taisho!" Sango replied.
Kagome gasped, "InuYasha!!!"

InuYasha was Kagome's crush. She was in love with Inu (as she sometimes called him), but the worse part was he didn't know how Kagome felt about him!!

"I'll be over there in ten minutes," Kagome announced.
"Okay, but hurry," Sango warned.

They both said their goodbyes and hung up. Kagome grabbed her one of a kind beach bag her mom made for her. The bag sparkled of sequins and glitter and it resembled the sunset over the ocean. Kagome rushed around looking for the stuff she would need for the beach, which was where Sango's house practically was. Kagome ripped cothing out of her drawers and finally found her cutest aqua bathing suit. She liked it because it flattered her figure and she knew it would attract InuYasha's attention, but hopefully not Miroku's. Miroku was a pervented monk, his hand would always find Sango bottom, but he wouls end up with Sango's handprint on the side of his face. Kagome thought, "What else am I forgetting?" Then it came to her, her sunscreen and her towel. Kagome remembered being so humiliated when she got burned the last time at Sango's when InuYasha was there. Her body was killing her, but she was okay with InuYasha by herside. Kagome quickly ran down stairs hoping her mom wouldn't catch her.

"And just where are you going young lady," Dang!!! She did it again.
"What is with the eyes in the back of the head?" Kagome asked herself
"Umm...I'm just going over to Sango's for a pool party," Kagome replied.
Ms. Higurashi turned around from her stove.
"Okay sweetie," She smiled.
"Oh and mom, don't wait up for me I'll be home after dinner," Kagome said.

Her mother didn't answer, so out the door she ran to Sango's as fast as her legs could bare. She slowed down a bit when she finally made it to Sango's. Kagome panted for air while she looked around. Sango's place was a beach house on AimiAura Lake. Her house was like Barbie's only better. Kagome walked all the way up the hill and knocked on the door with her and Sango's secret code which sounded like the chorus to "Game of Love". Kagome couldn't wait to see everyone and finally Sango opened the door.

"Hey girl, you're just in time," Sango greeted, "Come on in!"

Kagome walked in the house and the house was fully furnished with stainless steel appliences and toped off with top of the line furniture. Kagome was amazed with all the detail put into the house.

"Everyone is outback," Sango confirmed.

Okay people comment and tell me what you think...Should I continue??