This is only my second story, I would love constructive criticism. Please no flames and I do not own night world L.J. Smith does. Please review!
Trey's P.O.V.
A girl with straight brunette hair that fell in waves past her shoulders, was standing in front of me. A big circle of people in black hooded robes, that shielded there faces, stood in a circle around her I stood behind them watching the girl. She was holding a big golden cup with emeralds and rubies lining the rim. There were intricate swirling patterns on the sides. The cup was known as the Cup of Lethe to the Night Worlders. She lifted her head and looked straight at me with those fierce green eyes and mouthed "I love you," as a single tear rolled down her cheek. She lifted the Cup of Lethe to her lips, squeezed her eyes shut, and drank. After a few moments she slowly lowered the Cup and looked again at me, but this time with a confused look and said "Who are you?"
I awoke from my dream, my eyes wet from crying as usual. I've had the same dream every night for a year. The girl is my soulmate, Marian, a year ago she drank from the Cup of Lethe when the Night World Council discovered us. Instead of killing us as they would usually do they made Marian drink from the Cup of Lethe so she would forget everything, everything about me, and about the Night World, but they didn't make me drink from the Cup of Lethe , so I remember everything and she remembers nothing. I haven't see her since that night.
"Trey, get up school will be starting soon and you should probably hunt," shouted my twin sister, Lalie. Lalie and I are fraternal twins and we are also vampires.
Instead of hunting I just walked to the fridge in the kitchen of the apartment we live in and get a cup of blood we keep on hand. Then I walk back to my bedroom and get dressed. I throw on a pair of regular blue jeans and a dark gray t-shirt. Then I head to the bathroom to brush my hair and teeth. I have shaggy light brown hair and dull light brown eyes.
"Did you have the dream again?" asked Lalie walking into the bathroom. Lalie has long curly blond hair, which she has pulled into a pony tail. She has sparkling, big, blue eyes. She is wearing a black and white striped top and light blue, jean shorts.
"I have it every night," I tell her simply.
"Look, Trey. I know it's hard, she was my best friend, no she was like my sister, but you can't spend the rest of your life moping around."
"Sorry Lalie, but I can't move an so fast. I'm glad she is safe and probably happy, but she is my soulmate, I love her. And I'm never going to see her again. And even if I do, she won't remember me."
Marian's P.O.V.
My alarm clock started beeping so I reached over to hit the snooze button, but then I remember I have to be at school early to give someone a tour. So I slowly sit up.
Today is my first day of my senior year at Nathan Hale High School, but it's only my second year at Nathan Hale. I used to go to a different high school, before I moved to Wisconsin, I don't remember where though. I don't remember a lot of things about my first two years at high school.
I put on a white flowing top and some shorts. Then I went to the bathroom to brush my long brunette hair and brush my teeth. I look in the mirror and see a pair of fierce green eyes looking back at me. My eyes are my favorite part of my body. I finish getting ready when my mom opens the door "honey you awake," she says when she sees me already ready to go, "oh."
"I have to get to school early to give a new kid a tour of the school, we have a lot of new kids this year," I explain.
"Okay, and be nice to them Marian, it's hard being the new kid," she tells me. Mom has short light brown hair and wide blue eyes.
"I will mom don't worry."
I run to the garage after putting on my favorite white tennis shoes and hop into my gray Mercedes Benz. The drive to school is short so I don't even bother to turn on the radio. When I get to school Joe is waiting for me. Joe is my boyfriend. He has wild red hair and piercing blue eyes. He is also the football quarterback.
"Good morning Joe, ready to go find out who we are giving a tour to," I greet him cheerfully.
"Yes I am." he replies.
"Okay then let's go" I pull him behind me to the gym.
As soon as I enter the gym I am attacked by my best friend Leslie pulling me into a tight hug. "I missed you Marian!"
"I missed you to," I say returning her hug. Leslie has long black hair and big violet eyes. She is wearing bright pink lipstick and a pink top with white shorts and a simple gold necklace with a black dahlia hanging from it, I never get why she wears that.
"Let's go find out who we are giving tours to!" exclaims Leslie.
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