A/N; ok, I've been waiting to get this story up for three long days. But I finally got it. This is my first fanfic so please no flames. Im going to try to make this as demented as possible, and yes I know its like saw. I got the idea from the soundtrack. There will be swearing and maybe nudity in later chapters, depends on how im deciding to kill them. This is not for little kids or immature people. This might suck though cause I have a tendancy to rush and go through things very quickly. I'll try my hardest not to though. Ok im rambling so lets get to the story. R/R please!!!

Chapter 1: the taking

Alvin was in 6th period watching the clock tick away. Five more goddamn minutes left, he thought. He listened to his physics teacher ramble on about atoms and isotopes.

RING-RING

Alvin immidiatly jumped off his desk and ran to the door. As he walked through the halls he noticed people were quieter than usual. Everybody was avoinding eye contact with him and they looked sad and disappointed. He walked up to his friend Kevin who glanced at him before saying anything.

"hey" he said in a small voice barely audiable.

"why is everyone so sad? We won the soccer game last night, people should be celebrating." Alvin asked with curiosity in his voice.

"you havn't heard?" he asked disbelievingly

"no. what happened?"

"dude, someone took Theodore and Eleanor." He said.

Right then when Alvin heard that he froze. he couldn't comprehend the thought of them being kidnapped. The thought of it made him cringe. Who could have taken them? Everybody loves those two. He thought. "you better not be pulling my leg Kevin" he growled.

"I wouldn't do that. I wouldn't joke about something that serious dude"

Avlin had the sudden urge to find the chipettes and his brother, he needed to know if they are ok. He bolted through the corridor and out the main doors. He ran to the flag pole they all wait at for each other. He saw three chipmunks. Three sad chipmunks. His heart filled with dread as he realized that it was true. They were takin.

Without realizing it he ran into Brittany's arm and started crying. He cried his little heart out. She rubbed his back and dug her face into his shoulder sobbing too. Jeanette and simon did the same. People walked by not laughing, but tearing up. Everybody knew what happened.

They sat there crying until they heard daves voice. "guys lets go, we need to go the police station"

They stoped crying, well tried to, and got into daves car. Not a word was said on the way there, to many thoughts were going through their heads.

As they arrived at the police station dave hesitated to get out. He still couldn't believe someone took his son.

They all got out with heavy hearts. Jeanette was still softly crying, Simon noticed and put his arm around her waist to comfort her. She still cried, it only got worse. Simon, Brittany and Alvin started crying too. Dave picked them up and walked inside. When they got in dave set them on a chair and talked to a lady at the front desk.

"I cant believe it" Brittany said wile taking a breath

"nobody can" Alvin cried.

They sat there crying for 45 minutes until dave came back.

"alright, I filled the report, they are on the lookout, but with no information on the person who took them it will be hard" dave said with despair.

The four chipmunks got up and followed dave into the car and left

Later that night 1:37 a.m.

Alvin was in his room fast asleep. When they got home from the police station miss miller took the girls home and the boys went to their rooms. Simon cried himself to sleep thinking about theodor. But as he slept the chipettes were being taken by a man, an evil man, who thought he was doing good progress. And he was.

Alvin woke up to a soft noise, but he thought nothing of it. He closed his eyes and laid back down. He was drifting off to sleep when he heard a thud, and what he thought was his name. he sat up fully awake and turned his lamp on. He got up and walked to his door. He slowly opened it and looked out. "simon?" he asked quietly. He noticed his brothers door was closed and the light was on.

He slowly walked to his door, but a few feet away he saw a shadow of a man under the door. Alvin immidiatly froze. he knew what was happening. Simon was being taken too. He stood there for a minute processing what was happening. He crept to the door and pushed it open. He noticed the lamp was on the floor, and there was no simon. Alvin suddenly fell to the floor, he fainted.

He woke up in daves arms. His memory was fuzzy. He noticed dave was crying. Alvin looked at him with curiosity in his eyes. "whats wrong?" he asked his crying father

Dave dried his eyes and cleared his thoat. His voice was shaky but Alvin could understand him. "y-your th-the only one l-left"

At that moment it Alvin remembered everything…

A/N; sorry, this chapter is slow, future chapters will be better. It will get scarier too .And I want to know if I can improve, and I will if I get feedback. So I wont write any more until I get at least ten reviews. and i know i went kinda fast, but i want to get to the idea out there. Please review!