There were quite a few positive responses to my OTHER poem-ey one-shot, so here's another one I wrote like... a long time ago about some guy I like. Or whatever. This one ALSO fits Fabina. I still stink, I just wanted to put it up. I didn't change it one bit. But I don't like this one as much as my other one... Tonight I'm putting up my other chapter on New Girl, and possibly another one shot. But again, I couldn't resit myself...
Disclaimer: I still own nothing. I still wish I did. But I don't...
You breathe,
Take in the surroundings.
Your eyes dart around the room.
He's right there,
Right there.
It's intense:
Watching him smile at his work,
Frown,
His eyebrows burrowing somewere inbetween eachother.
It's cute.
It's intense:
Knowing,
All you will ever be-
But don't think about it.
You try not to see,
Hide the fascination.
But you look down,
Just as he looks up...
It's intense.
Ick. I hate it. I like the other one better. It's MUCH better than this one. I want to know what you guys think about it though... So... REVIEW. Tell me what I did atrociously. Because I can't pinpoint it...