Hey guys this is my first fanfiction, so I was just wondering if you could review and give me a few pointers about how I can improve my work. I am writing this based on my theories also spare of the moment things. This is Ezria based though it's not your usual one with all the romance and fluff-well maybe just a little. There will be others as main part though. Ok I'm going to stop going on and get to the story...hope you like it!
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of pretty little liars all rights of characters belong to Sara Shepherd.
General POV
It was a Friday afternoon and Aria was on her way to see Ezra at his apartment. She had just finished school after staying behind for extra credit work and was exhausted, but she had promised Ezra that she would see him that day and they hadn't been seeing that much of each other in quite a while after the blew up the TNT to her parents about their scandalous relationship. After a 10 minute walk she reached Ezra's apartment. She knew he had been waiting quite a while when she got to his door because when she reached the door he open it straight away and attacked her with a hug.
"Where were you I've been waiting ages!" he asked almost annoyed. "Sorry I had to do some extra credit work because I'm falling behind in class," she said also with slight annoyance to her voice from his previous tone. Ezra understood this and laid his lips on her ones. She tried to fight the kiss and stay angry at him but after about 20 seconds gave into his soft lips. Their kiss soon built tension, became needy full of pure passion. Ezra pulled her into his studio apartment kicking the door shut. He walked them over to the couch and sat her on his legs. Aria straddled him and bean grinding on him. At this time all they needed was skin to skin contact.
Aria POV:
Things between Ezra and I began to get heated. I started grinding on him whilst buttoning down his shirt. Once that mission was accomplished I started stroking his chest; he really toned up this last year! That's when he started pulling up my shirt and kissing my jaw line, down my chest and stopped right by my breasts. He started sucking and biting as I clawed my nails down his back. This kissing and groping continued for a further 20 minutes and in that time we had not once broke the kiss.
Ezra POV:
"Apology accepted!" was all aria said after our moment. I couldn't help but laugh. Aria laid down resting her head on my lap. I stroked the waves in her hair. "What do you say to going out to dinner tonight?" I asked Aria in hopes of her saying yes; after everyone finding out about us she has been a bit conscious about these sorts of things. "I'm not sure...everyone will be looking at us as though we just killed 1000 people and I know what you're going to say 'well that's their problem not our' but I don't want to be looked at like that. When I go out with you I want to feel like the luckiest person in the world not like shit." This statement agitated me because week after week she uses this same excuse but this time I'm not going to take it we are going out, I mean what was the point in telling people if we aren't going to embrace it! "You know what I don't care. We are going out tonight and nothing especially you're doubts are going to stop that so go home get dressed and I will pick you up at 8 ok" I said this with confidence and hopes that at the end of the night I will still have a girlfriend after my blunt outburst. "Fine!" Aria had given in. Looks like there is a first for everything! "Are you serious?" I just had to confirm I mean the only time I ever won was when we were trying to decide what to have for dinner. "Yes. I will go home and expect to be picked up at 8." She kissed me good bye and roamed her way to the door after putting on her shirt and jeans. Man how did I get so lucky!
Ok guys what did you think? I know right now it seems like the rest but I promise as you get more into it you will see a different side to some of these characters. And if you want to find out secrets you're going to have to review! I
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