Ello, this is my first story, so honestly I don't know if anyone will see this. Well, I'm actually just trying to get better at grammar and my book writing. If you enjoy please tell me and if you don't please tell me how I can make my story more interesting or more detailed
SURGEON SIMULATOR . . . .
"Seems legit." Alex commented, getting ready to play the so-called rage game. It took a lot to get Alex angered, so this couldn't be that bad. His friend, Luke, was video taping him as he played. "So, what are you playing Alex-bo-ballex?" Alex rolled his eyes at Luke's sing-song voice. "Surgeon Simulator Mr. Luke skywalker." Alex shot back, his mouth twitching into a small smile but he pushed it down so it would be more affective.
"Your mean." Luke retorted, grabbing a chair behind himself and scotching to Alex.
"Yupp, now, which one should I do? Brain...heart...screw hearts. Brains." Alex decided.
"Hay, I thought you asked me?" "No, your to slow."
Luke laughed, watching as Alex moved the game's hand to the hammer. "Why did you pick that?" Luke asked, he would have picked the laser.
"Because I'm smarter than y-" Alex was interrupted by Luke's constant laughing as the video game's hand grabbed onto the hammer and twisted back words; causing the hammer to fly.
". . ." Alex stared at the screen, his face slowly turning into a cry-like state as he made fake noises of tears.
"W-W-Why?" He whined, flipping his blonde hair back over to his left and going back to his normal calm face. "Uhhnn... wait, is he bleeding?" Alex looked to the monitor "Oh hell. How do you fix that..." Alex looked around the place, seeing a needle he went to grab it; sending other things flying.
"Alex! Carful you'll need that later."
"I don't need anything!" Alex shouted, rushing the hand all over the place so that everything went flying into all sorts of directions; until the hammer he was using went crashing into the ribs and nto the lungs; causing the patient to die and the words:
"1 minuet and 35 seconds for you to brutally murder the patient..."
"Good job Alex...You screw everything up."
Alex just stared at the screen. "Well...that was interesting."