This is my new and first story and I hope most of you know me so I hope you like this. This is the new version
Dear diary,
They experimented on me again...drugs taking blood and all that. I am reading these Maximum Ride books wow this girl is amazing I got to find her. I'm breaking out tonight so I can go find her or someone else that could or even this Fang bloke he might help me.
Some hours later
I'm now free I don't want to show what I did in case if something happens to me and they find this.
I took off and flew east to Washington D.C and then a few days later head south to New York, the flying was just amazing I could only fly in a small space so I was a bit clumsy at all this flying.
I found some food when I got into D.C stupid man should never have put his food down next to him...whoa just saw this like emo guy go past me maybe its fang, but oh god I hope it is.
"Fang! Is that you?" I called. He turned around and he said,
"Go home kid have some fish and chips go to bed and don't bug me ever again."
"Jerk!" It's amazing that I have not seen any... BOOM. I swing around and see eraser's swarming out of a store. I un-flur my wings and jumps up into the air and starts beating hard. I take off and almost crashes into a lamp post, I swerve out of the way, I look down and see the eraser's coming after me.
"Here little piggy get back down here and it will be nice and quick." One of them called up to me. I see one of them take out a gun and start shooting at me, I dodge out of the way.
"I'm not coming down even if you gave me food and since I'm on the menu I think I better get out of here." I beat hard with my wings and I go about 4 miles before dropping like a stone.
I start flapping my wings as hard as I could but it started hurting bad in my left wing. I look up and see that there is blood coming out of the tip of the wing.
I see a car parked nearby with the door open, and I have only got two choices...take it or die.
I take it and head over to Arizona to if I remember, Max's mom lives there.
Here I come Arizona, here I come.
As I said I updated this so I hope u like that it's a bit better.