Hello! I'm Isaac of Vale, and this is my first published fic. I really don't have much to say, except that since I'm a new author, I really need to know what you guys think. When you're finished, please leave a review and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is welcome, but if it sucks, tell me why. Enjoy!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Golden Sun. If I did, I wouldn't have to write fanfiction.
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The Party From Hell: Chapter 1
A.N.: (denotes muttering or whispering), denotes narration
The story opens in Vale's town plaza, at about 4:00 PM. Isaac and Mia were recently engaged and so have gone looking for the right plot of land on which to build their new home. Isaac and Mia are not supposed to be back for a few days, so the other Adepts are left with nothing to do. Garet, Jenna, Felix, Picard, Ivan, and Sheba are all sitting in the town plaza, bored stupid. An ordinary, boring day, right? Not for long, anyway.
Garet: I'm bored...
Ivan: We all know that you're bored, Garet. After all, you've only said it about 500 times!
Garet: Maybe, but what you said still doesn't make a difference, 'cause I'm still bored! Besides, you know I always speak my mind.
Felix: ::raises eyebrow:: ...He has a mind?
Garet: Um, yeah...at least...I think I do...::scratches head::
Jenna: Huh?? What do you mean 'I think I do'?
Picard: I agree with Jenna. Could you please elaborate a bit?
Garet: Elabo-what? Don't use such big words, they confuse me.
All except Garet: Sigh... -_-;
Sheba: Garet, I think what Picard means to say is that he wants you to explain why you 'think' you have a mind.
Garet: I dunno, it's hard to tell while it's burrowing the tacos.
Felix: o_O Uhh, yeah...(Brainless idiot...)
Jenna: ::sighs:: Yes, but he's my idiot. So, now that Garet has shown himself once again to be a moron, what should we do so that we won't be bored anymore?
Garet: We were bored?
Everyone but Garet falls over
Ivan: You idiot, Garet! You've been telling us how bored you were for the past few hours! You seriously don't remember?
Garet: ::smiles obliviously:: Nope!
Felix: ::sighs:: Typical. So, what do you wanna do today?
Garet: Ooh, ooh I know! Pick me!
Felix: Fine. Garet, what do you want to do?
Garet: Eat cheese!
Felix: No, we did that yesterday.
Sheba: Play games at night?
Felix: No, no. That's been done. We can't have any plagiarism in this fic.
Ivan: Aww, but I miss my board!
Felix: Too bad. Now shut up about that board before we get sued! Any more ideas?
Garet: ::hopefully:: Eat cheese?
Felix: Shut up, Garet. Well?
::nobody answers::
Felix: Fine, I've got an idea. We'll throw a party at Isaac's place.
Picard: But wouldn't that make him mad?
Felix: ::smiles deviously:: Nahh...
Ivan: Sweet!
Jenna: What kind of party? Will there be fireworks?
Felix: Sure, but you gotta bring your own.
Sheba: What about booze?
Felix: ::grins:: Maybe...
Sheba: Can I have some?
Felix: ::still grinning:: Nope!
Sheba: Aww! Please?
Felix: No.
Sheba: Pretty please?
Felix: ::frowning now:: No.
Sheba: Pretty please with sugar on top?
Felix: ::vein pops out:: NO!!
Sheba: Dammit, fine then!
Felix: Okay then, Ivan, once the party starts, you'll need to keep Sheba away from the punch.
Ivan: You mean I get to be with Sheba? Thank you, God! ::convulsing in ecstasy::
Felix: Good Lord, what have I done?
Jenna: You have shown us all that Ivan is a spaz.
Felix: Indeed. Any way, this is what we need to do: Jenna, you take care of the fireworks.
Jenna: Gotcha.
Felix: Garet, Erm...just be yourself.
Garet: ::scratches himself:: (Grunt)
Felix: Sheba, you stay away from the punch.
Sheba: ::scowls:: Meanie!
Felix: Ivan...uhh, Ivan?
Ivan: ::still convulsing::
Sheba: Give him a minute, he'll be all right.
Felix: Okey-dokey then. Hey Picard, what's the matter? You look worried.
Picard: I have a bad, bad feeling about this... It's not gonna end well at all.
Felix: Oh, you're just upset 'cause you don't have a job to do. I know! You can be the chaperone!
Picard: ::sarcastically:: Oh joy...
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DISCLAIMER: I do not own Golden Sun. If I did, I wouldn't have to write fanfiction.
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The Party From Hell: Chapter 1
A.N.: (denotes muttering or whispering), denotes narration
The story opens in Vale's town plaza, at about 4:00 PM. Isaac and Mia were recently engaged and so have gone looking for the right plot of land on which to build their new home. Isaac and Mia are not supposed to be back for a few days, so the other Adepts are left with nothing to do. Garet, Jenna, Felix, Picard, Ivan, and Sheba are all sitting in the town plaza, bored stupid. An ordinary, boring day, right? Not for long, anyway.
Garet: I'm bored...
Ivan: We all know that you're bored, Garet. After all, you've only said it about 500 times!
Garet: Maybe, but what you said still doesn't make a difference, 'cause I'm still bored! Besides, you know I always speak my mind.
Felix: ::raises eyebrow:: ...He has a mind?
Garet: Um, yeah...at least...I think I do...::scratches head::
Jenna: Huh?? What do you mean 'I think I do'?
Picard: I agree with Jenna. Could you please elaborate a bit?
Garet: Elabo-what? Don't use such big words, they confuse me.
All except Garet: Sigh... -_-;
Sheba: Garet, I think what Picard means to say is that he wants you to explain why you 'think' you have a mind.
Garet: I dunno, it's hard to tell while it's burrowing the tacos.
Felix: o_O Uhh, yeah...(Brainless idiot...)
Jenna: ::sighs:: Yes, but he's my idiot. So, now that Garet has shown himself once again to be a moron, what should we do so that we won't be bored anymore?
Garet: We were bored?
Everyone but Garet falls over
Ivan: You idiot, Garet! You've been telling us how bored you were for the past few hours! You seriously don't remember?
Garet: ::smiles obliviously:: Nope!
Felix: ::sighs:: Typical. So, what do you wanna do today?
Garet: Ooh, ooh I know! Pick me!
Felix: Fine. Garet, what do you want to do?
Garet: Eat cheese!
Felix: No, we did that yesterday.
Sheba: Play games at night?
Felix: No, no. That's been done. We can't have any plagiarism in this fic.
Ivan: Aww, but I miss my board!
Felix: Too bad. Now shut up about that board before we get sued! Any more ideas?
Garet: ::hopefully:: Eat cheese?
Felix: Shut up, Garet. Well?
::nobody answers::
Felix: Fine, I've got an idea. We'll throw a party at Isaac's place.
Picard: But wouldn't that make him mad?
Felix: ::smiles deviously:: Nahh...
Ivan: Sweet!
Jenna: What kind of party? Will there be fireworks?
Felix: Sure, but you gotta bring your own.
Sheba: What about booze?
Felix: ::grins:: Maybe...
Sheba: Can I have some?
Felix: ::still grinning:: Nope!
Sheba: Aww! Please?
Felix: No.
Sheba: Pretty please?
Felix: ::frowning now:: No.
Sheba: Pretty please with sugar on top?
Felix: ::vein pops out:: NO!!
Sheba: Dammit, fine then!
Felix: Okay then, Ivan, once the party starts, you'll need to keep Sheba away from the punch.
Ivan: You mean I get to be with Sheba? Thank you, God! ::convulsing in ecstasy::
Felix: Good Lord, what have I done?
Jenna: You have shown us all that Ivan is a spaz.
Felix: Indeed. Any way, this is what we need to do: Jenna, you take care of the fireworks.
Jenna: Gotcha.
Felix: Garet, Erm...just be yourself.
Garet: ::scratches himself:: (Grunt)
Felix: Sheba, you stay away from the punch.
Sheba: ::scowls:: Meanie!
Felix: Ivan...uhh, Ivan?
Ivan: ::still convulsing::
Sheba: Give him a minute, he'll be all right.
Felix: Okey-dokey then. Hey Picard, what's the matter? You look worried.
Picard: I have a bad, bad feeling about this... It's not gonna end well at all.
Felix: Oh, you're just upset 'cause you don't have a job to do. I know! You can be the chaperone!
Picard: ::sarcastically:: Oh joy...
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So, what did you think? Be honest!
See review button?
Review button good...