Ok so I've done this before in the past and I never got any feedback from it, so I'm hoping this time I will.
Any ideas i post here I want some feedback on, I plan to post ideas for new stories that I'm too lazy to write, Ideas for current stories that I am writing {I'm doing a rewrite on The Next Chapter}, and just random ideas I've thought up .
This is an idea for a story that I've never gotten around to writing so if people like it i could try write it. OR if somebody wants they can adopt it, just please ask me first.
Do you know what its like spending eternity with people you are related to you and being ignored by them. Do you know what its like to love them only for them to turn their backs on you... I do, i've know this feeling for the many many years I've lived.
I am Aquarius, i am one of the twelve zodiac celestial spirits. And for as long as i can remember i have been hated and ignored and unloved. This is my story, its not a story with a happy ending.
We celestial spirits can make contracts with mages and can be summoned through our gate key. But my Family threw mine away, they locked it away in some far away and impossible to find place. And i dont even know why, what have i done to deserve this treatment. Ive showed them nothing but love and kindness, ive treated all of my contracts with respect. Ive always followed the rules, and yet im being punished. Punished for no reason that i know of.
People always make wishes upon the stars but who to we stars make wishes to? Who is there for me to make a wish to? Everyone ive ever loved as spat my feelings back at me. I cant even end my misery, I'm Fucking immortal. I will live for ever, ive already lived for over a million years. And over those years my Family has showed me nothing but hate
BUT
But, there might be a way for me to escape this all. I think that if i use as much magic as i can, i could force open my gate and travel to the human realm. Maybe then i could forget about this life and make a new one, maybe just maybe i could love someone and they could love me back. Its worth it, its worth any price.
There is more to this, basically Aquarius isn't accepted in The celestial spirit realm. She doesn't meet Layla, so she doesn't become Lucy's spirit. My plan is for her to send herself to Earthland, when she gets there and she doesn't fit in. Not many people treat her nicely, she travels around a lot . In a certain town she walks along the bridge and just stares into the river and looks at her reflection. Behind her she could see the stars in the sky and she starts crying until someone sees her and that person is the only person to be nice to her. Its the first person to give her hope for her future.