Author's Note
This might be a little harder since I don't have the book to co-op with. I take any suggestion and try to put them in my story. I read every review good or bad. If you have any questions about me personally, then check out my profile it might explain it. On with the story! The whole story is from Tris's POV. If I type then okay otherwise it's Tris.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT ANY CHARACTER THAT WAS MADE BY VERONICA ROTH! In case I forget on the other chapters. Chapter 1: Introduction of Tris
I roll over in bed, hearing someone come into my room I croak out "Go away!"
"Beatrice up now, you don't want to be late for your first day of high school do you?" I look at my mother. I got none of her looks, except for my blond hair which she always pins up for me. She walks out of my room and I huff, standing slouchy.
When I walk over to the dresser I grab a tight shirt (might as well show off what I have) and black ripped jeans. I never had been one for wearing stuff like this but, I haven't ever like the regular t-shirt and blue jeans either.
My breakfast is the same everyday eggs and bacon. It gets boring once in a while. Different school, different friends. Moving over the summer took away my friends. I lost my phone so I don't even have their numbers anymore.
Before I go to the bus stop, I run up the stairs to grab some shorts and a t-shirt. I need something to wear for track, I would rather not show up my first day in these clothes. I run out the door saying goodbye to my mom. My brother follows me out.
"Hi" I almost jump outta of my skin when someone says something. I turn around and see another pale looking girl. "My name is Susan" she speaks again but, this time she doesn't look so nervous. My brother also has turned around is staring at her.
"Hi," Caleb speaks first "I am Caleb and this is my sister Tris!" He looks excited. I smile at her.
She walks up beside me and starts to tell me about the school I am going to.
"What about the track team," I wondered this question for a while "are they good?" She nods and smiles some more.
"I'm on it," She looks at her feet "I run in the 100 and 800!" she is very proud of it as far as I can tell.
"Cool I can't wait to see who our coach is!" I let a sigh when I see the bus come. When I get on the bus driver places me at a seat with Susan. We sit at our seat I get the window I like it better.
"Can I do your hair?" Susan asks me with a grin. I look at her and nod placing my backpack on the bus floor. She unwinds my bun and pulls out a brush from her purse. When she brushes it out I say ouch a few times but I never brush my own hair.
When she is done she hands me a mirror. When I look into it, I notice that my eyes are bluer than they have ever been. I like my hair down. It's a nice look for me.
"Thank you, it looks so much better now!" I say giving her a hug. "You're welcome!" She replies back with a pleasant tone.
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I walk into the administrative office. "Hi I am Beatrice Prior." The lady at the front desk pulls out a piece of paper and hands it to me. "Thanks" I say stepping into the hall so I can check out my schedule.
Beatrice Prior
1st period: Algebra 2
2nd period: World History
3rd period: Chemistry
4th period: Athletics
Lunch/Free period
5th period: Art II
6th period: Languages Art
7th period: Drama
Oh, great I have math at the first half of the day. Just then Susan walks up beside me. "Aw we only have Athletics together" there goes my plan for a friend. "That's okay I will see you then!" I yell already rushing down the hall for my first class.
It took a couple minutes to find my first class. When I get there most everyone is seated already. I spot a seat next to a girl and rush for that spot. I sit my things down and pull out a piece of paper. The bell rings and the teacher steps into the room shutting and locking the door.
"No sneaking into class, ever, is my first and foremost rule." He speaks like someone stole his coffee. He hands us a worksheet to 'see what we know'. I have a problem with one or two questions but sail through the rest. Someone walks up to me while the teacher is busy in the front of the class, "Out of my chair!" I hear them whisper but, I don't say anything back.
"Did you not hear me the first time little girl. I shoot my head up at those last two words. I shake my head and continue my work. He pushes me out of my chair and kicks my stuff to me. At this point I am a little upset. I stand from the floor and notice everyone is watching me except the teacher who hasn't noticed yet.
I glare at the boy and see his name on his paper, Peter. I'll get him back. For now I am forced to sit elsewhere before the teacher sees. When I sit down a girl about a foot taller than me with dark skin speaks up "Don't worry no one likes him but, his girlfriend Molly." She whispers. I look at her "Hi I'm Christina, call me Chris though I like it more!"
I give her a smile "I am Beatrice but, call me Tris suits me better." She nods "Cool, talk with you after class Tris!"
Author's Note
So what do you think of the first chapter good or not I want to know leaving me a review would help me out so much you wouldn't even begin to know how it feels for someone like me to read a review about how good my writing is. So bon voyage. Or until next time Thanks for reading ~Kayla
