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Every year the circus rolls into the city. With it a multitude of sparkling cloths, Painted faces, Fantastic variations of animals and there Trapeze artists. The most famouse trapeze artist was Jocelyn Fairchild and soon her child, Clarissa Fairchild, would follow in her mothers foot steps. But the one thing people outside of the circus didn't know was their secrets. The secrets of the circus folk.

What the leader Valentine Morgenstern did not count on, however, was a boy of eight would see him abuse one of the circus females. His mother. He ran and never saw the circus again until until eleven years later.

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