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Laura

Laura Mathews wanted nothing to do with her mother's world and it was pretty clear it wanted nothing to do with her. Born from an affair with the gardener Laura learned the hard way that the rich didn't want to mingle with the poor. Brought up by her father, Laura studied hard and made it to Yale without the help of her mother, but with the help of a student loan. Now it was her first day of Yale and Laura was going to have to do it alone, without her father. Well not exactly alone she was sharing a dorm with three other girls.

"I'm Rory Gilmore. Nice to meet you this is my Mom Lorelai" said one of girls Laura was sharing with.

"Gilmore, I know that name I have met your grandparent's." Lorelai and Rory frowned; Laura guessed that they thought she was one of the rich kids. Laura quickly explained her situation.

"Well it's nice to meet someone who hates there world as much as I do. I'm sorry Rory but I've got to get going. It was nice to meet you though Laura" Lorelai said before leaving.

"Hey you're mom is cool. I'm really thirsty and could do with my daily dose of coffee. Care to join?" Laura asked Rory.

"Sound's great I love coffee. Also this place is giving me a headache" Rory said referring to Paris and Kerry, Laura's other room mates who really weren't getting along. Laura could see why ;Paris was a crazy control freak and Kerry was an air head. Normally Laura wouldn't jump to conclusions but her first opinions on this two seemed correct.

On the way to the coffee cart, and the way back, and even at the coffee cart; Rory and Laura talked about what they loved and what they hated the most. After those twenty minutes she didn't feel so bad about leaving her father. Leaving her dad was the worse thing Laura had ever done, even though he had only been gone two hours she missed him like hell. On the up side Rory was missing her mother so she had someone to about it.

"Don't you have any other family?" Rory asked just before they got to our room.

"Well I live with my dad. But I do have a half brother on my mum's side called Collin" Laura opened her door to find her brother standing there with his friends.

"Speak of the devil."

"Oh sis are you not happy to see me?" Colin asked his sister.

"Three things...One, why are you here? Two, how did you know where my room was? And three, why on earth did you bring the chuckle brother's" Laura was referring to her brothers oldest friends Logan and Finn.

"I wanted to see my little sister; your dad gave me the room number. And also Logan and Finn just wanted to tag along". Laura knew the real reason why they came.

"If tag along means have a reason to hang around the girls dorm then I see why they came" not that they needed a reason.

Logan stepped forward and looked at Laura "Laura still as charming as ever."

"Logan still shagging anything that moves" she replied, Logan looked liked he was going to insult her back but Kerry caught his eye.

"Why don't you introduce us to you new friend's Laura" by friends Laura guessed Logan was mainly referring to Kerry.

"Logan, Finn, Colin, this is Rory, Paris, and Kerry. Rory, Paris, Kerry this is my idiot brother Colin and his idiot friend's Logan and Finn. I'm going to my room to finish unpacking. Oh and Logan try to not hit on any of my room mates."

"I can't promise anything kid" Logan said knowing how much being called kid annoyed her. Laura just tried to forget about it and hid until they were gone. She didn't want to have to deal with her brother and his friends. After she was sure they were gone she came out of hiding.

"Sorry to leave you alone with those idiot's I just could not bear to be in a room with them" she told Rory.

"Really because I think that Logan likes you" Rory said, at first she thought Rory was joking but when Laura saw the look on Rory's face she knew Rory was being serious.

"No me and Logan that could never happen. There is a bigger chance of Finn getting together with you" both the girls laughed and started to watch TV. As Laura thought more about it she realized that maybe Logan really did like her, however that thought was shattered when Kerry came in boasting about her date tomorrow night with Logan. At that minute she knew that Logan would never ever like her. But the thing that worried her the most was that she felt sad because of it.

Rory

Rory didn't know what to do. This time it wasn't her mom, Yale, or even Jess that she was confused about. No, this time she was confused about a certain Australian named Finn. Rory knew it was stupid but Finn really did catch her eye.

It was made worse by the comment Laura made that there was a bigger chance that she and Finn would get together that her and Logan getting together and Laura hated Logan.

Maybe just maybe Rory could talk to Finn and find out if he fancied her. All Rory could think about was him and it was annoying her, she hadn't felt like this with either Dean or Jess. So why was it so different with Finn? She had only known him a few hours and already she was a pile a mush. This just wasn't her.

All the stress from of moving to Yale was making her head hurt so Rory came up with a grand plan which involved sleep...and that was basically it.

The next day went fast and soon it was their first college party. Rory was dearly hoping that Finn would be there not that she wanted to admit this. She still couldn't stop thinking about him, she was being silly. The daydream Rory was having about Finn was soon interrupted by Paris being crazy. This time she was going on about inventing a new her, Rory knew that would never happen however Paris was in denial.

"All through my life people have feared me" Paris pacing up and down their living room being as manic a ever.

"But tonight no one knows who I am, I can become a new me. I will be a fun loving Paris. A care free paris. Okay who left my jacket on the floor because I am going to kill whoever did it. I swear I am going to-"

"Paris what happened to the new you."

"Sorry. Paris, calm down, deep breaths. In... out, In ...out. Calm "Paris said to herself. Soon the party had started and mass of people they didn't know filled their living room. There was no sign of Finn until he walked in with three girls on each arm.

"Excuse me ladies I've just got to go and talk to this lovely lady. Hello Rory Gilmore what are you doing here tonight?" Finn smiled at Rory making her heart melt a little more

"Yes what am I doing in my dorm? I don't know, I think I must have stumbled in here by mistake. I am doing that all the time wandering into my own room. I don't know why" Finn laughed.

"I didn't mean it like that; I meant why are you not out exploring. Hey why don't you let me take you?"

"Erm I don't know. Maybe I'll just stay here"

"Come on Gilmore live life to the full" before Rory could answer Finn grabbed her hand and pulled her along whilst they ran.

"Where are we going?" Rory asked Finn.

"It's a secret" he replied with a grin on his face.

"Why should I come? I hardly know you."

"Why not? Now come on." They ran together until they reached a group of big fancy houses.

"What are we doing here Finn?"

"Pool jumping Gilmore."

"What in September are you crazy?" Finn nodded and started to climb the fence.

"Are you coming?" Rory agreed to go with him then they both climbed the fence.

"Finn how are we going to go swimming? I don't have a costume" Finn gave her a look.

"Not in just my underwear?" Finn nodded and started to strip Rory could do nothing but stare. And then for some insane reason Rory did the same and jumped in the water.

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