First off, I actually have the story done. It's just a matter of typing it up. And I based my OC off of myself, though I may not be quite so extreme XD Enjoy! I have no idea what I'm doing XD and since I'm a newb (there, i admitted it), whats a beta? -_-"
"Ah, what a wonderful morning," Lavi sighs. "I should get some breakfast."
"Intruder alert! Intruder alert! All exorcists report to the center of the building."
"Or not," Lavi says, disappointed. "Wonder what's going on…" Lavi opens the door to find out, and hears a thunk as she door vibrates. A panicked Reever is on the floor, having just been attacked by the door. "Sorry, didn't mean to—"
"Run Lavi! Komui made another Sir Comlin!
"Is it gonna help fight?"
"Yeah, but you remember what happened the last time it tried to 'help'." Lavi has a flashback of Sir Comlin the Second shooting missiles at Allen. "All too well." It was fun to watch the shortstack run around! They both start running towards the heart of the building, followed by a destructive Sir Comlin and a crazy Komui riding on top of said Sir Comlin saying how he was so proud of his 'son'.
They make it to the center without any major problems from Sir Comlin. There are about five exorcists on each level of the circular hallway. All of the sudden a black portal opens up in the middle of everyone. All the exorcists tense up and activate their innocence, and Komui gets his precious Sir Comlin ready. A shadow emerges from the portal, solidifying into a human shape. The shape of a girl around seventeen, dressed in a jet black trench coat, black pants, and a red shirt. The trench coat in relatively plain and has four pockets. Her pants are somewhat baggy with six pockets. Her shirt is a plain red T-shirt. She stays in the air by using feathery wings that match her trench coat. She has dark black hair with a few red stripes throughout it. Allen stands in awe, while across the room Lavi was thinking that if she doesn't kill everyone he liked her, sensing that she easily could annihilate the entire order if she wanted. Along with, of course, STRIKE! Kanda, who's up a level, just wants to slice her to bits, along with almost anything else that moves. Her color changes from the shadowy color to relatively normal human colors, albeit a bit pale. Her eyes have been closed until now, but when they open they are a startling deep blue-purple color. The portal closes behind the powerful girl, who takes a midair bow.
"I am called Kagehi. I wish to speak with the one in charge," she asks, seeming unfamiliar with talking to other people.
"That would be me," says a curious Komui, perched atop his Sir Comlin. "You don't seem to want to attack us, so how about we talk in the hospital wing. You seem to have pretty serious wounds." Lavi looks closer, and sure enough she's dripping blood.
"Very well," replies Kagehi, somewhat disappointed.
"I'm going to need someone to come with in case of an emergency," announces Komui. "Let's see… Lavi! You can come. This way, Kagehi." She flies over and attempts to land, stumbling a little because of an injury to her left leg. Lavi catches and steadies her before she can fall over, shocked by how frail she seems to be. "False alarm everyone. Sorry about my slave- I mean coworkers. You can leave now."
"You're the one who pulled the alarm!" yelled the rest of the scientists in the science division.
"Don't blame your mistakes on me, that's not very nice."
"Now's not the time guys. She's getting worse," interrupts Lavi. While Komui was arguing with the science division Lavi noticed how many serious, if not lethal, wounds Kagehi has. Her breath is going shallow, and she's having troubles staying conscious, much less standing. "Looking at her wounds and the amount of blood she's lost, she shouldn't be alive."
"Oh, I guess you're right," says Komui, turning his attention from his annoyed comrades to his Sir Comlin with a glint in his eyes.
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