--Hello everyone! Please try not to be so harsh with me and this fic, it's
my first one so please please review and tell me if i need to correct
anything! I'll try to update every day or every few days. Oh, one more
thing, sorry if my English isn't that good, I'm Canadian yes but I've lived
almost all my life in south America... it's really not that bad but with
slight imperfections at some points--
By the way: '........' for thinking
"......." for talking
-Chapter 1-
It was a beautiful day outside but Sharlene wasn't the lovely day type of girl, she loved storms. She always wanted to experience one, standing on a ship full of panicking people, desperate to find out if they were going to live or die within 30 minutes from then... in other words, she craved for adventure.
She had a completely normal life, she was 16 years old, went to school, had some friends, never actually hang out with them but oh well, that was her life and she hated it.
So, as it was Saturday she stayed in bed, staring at the ceiling when a hard knock on her door startled her. She never expected anyone to come wake her up as she would usually throw the unlucky person a bunch of anything she could find so that she could be alone again.
The door handle turned to reveal her mother, Irene, pale faced and breathing fast.
"Quick girl! Get dressed!, your grandfather has had a heart attack, we have to take him to the hospital... NOW!" she yelled.
"Alright alright I'm coming!" Sharlene yelled back. She didn't actually find it devastating to hear this, after all, she never got to see her grandparents and they usually treated her as if she were a stranger, an intruder, a bug that had to be squashed soon before it made some sort of disaster.
She changed as fast as she could (some jeans, a tight T-shirt, and a pair of sandals she had found somewhere on the floor), raced down the stairs, past the living room, inside the garage and into her mom's car.
Her mom was panicking fast and drove at an extremely high speed, Sharlene tried to calm her down (she was a calm and steady person after all, she didn't use to lose control easily thank god) but it was all in vain.
It was early in the morning so there were few cars on the street, that lessened the possibility to have a car crash at this speed.
Irene then diverted her attention to her purse to grab her cell phone and call her mom to see if everything was alright over there... but it definitely wasn't alright over here. Irene wasn't looking at the other cars or at the street, so in no time, they missed the red light and crashed the only car in front of them, the high speed created a hard impulse so the front car went forwards making another car crash with it (which hit front with side) and was thrown practically on top of Sharlene's and Irene's car.
It all went blank, Sharlene was spinning in mid air, surrounded by nothing at all when she hit hard on something and passed out.
--Well, it's the end of this chap, hope u liked it, hope u didn't get bored or anything, hope u review! It will get a bit more interesting as it goes. Someone I'm rather fond of will appear soon, so be patient savvy?--
By the way: '........' for thinking
"......." for talking
-Chapter 1-
It was a beautiful day outside but Sharlene wasn't the lovely day type of girl, she loved storms. She always wanted to experience one, standing on a ship full of panicking people, desperate to find out if they were going to live or die within 30 minutes from then... in other words, she craved for adventure.
She had a completely normal life, she was 16 years old, went to school, had some friends, never actually hang out with them but oh well, that was her life and she hated it.
So, as it was Saturday she stayed in bed, staring at the ceiling when a hard knock on her door startled her. She never expected anyone to come wake her up as she would usually throw the unlucky person a bunch of anything she could find so that she could be alone again.
The door handle turned to reveal her mother, Irene, pale faced and breathing fast.
"Quick girl! Get dressed!, your grandfather has had a heart attack, we have to take him to the hospital... NOW!" she yelled.
"Alright alright I'm coming!" Sharlene yelled back. She didn't actually find it devastating to hear this, after all, she never got to see her grandparents and they usually treated her as if she were a stranger, an intruder, a bug that had to be squashed soon before it made some sort of disaster.
She changed as fast as she could (some jeans, a tight T-shirt, and a pair of sandals she had found somewhere on the floor), raced down the stairs, past the living room, inside the garage and into her mom's car.
Her mom was panicking fast and drove at an extremely high speed, Sharlene tried to calm her down (she was a calm and steady person after all, she didn't use to lose control easily thank god) but it was all in vain.
It was early in the morning so there were few cars on the street, that lessened the possibility to have a car crash at this speed.
Irene then diverted her attention to her purse to grab her cell phone and call her mom to see if everything was alright over there... but it definitely wasn't alright over here. Irene wasn't looking at the other cars or at the street, so in no time, they missed the red light and crashed the only car in front of them, the high speed created a hard impulse so the front car went forwards making another car crash with it (which hit front with side) and was thrown practically on top of Sharlene's and Irene's car.
It all went blank, Sharlene was spinning in mid air, surrounded by nothing at all when she hit hard on something and passed out.
--Well, it's the end of this chap, hope u liked it, hope u didn't get bored or anything, hope u review! It will get a bit more interesting as it goes. Someone I'm rather fond of will appear soon, so be patient savvy?--