this is a revision of a story I made a while ago that looking back was absolutely crappy. so, I did a Dragon Ball Z Kai on it, and edited it completely, so much that I had to give it a T rating. the original is still up, just so you know. if you want to check it out, go on my profile and it should be there. So think of this as the uncut version, and the other one as a 4Kidz edit.
well, enough with this boring crap that no one cares about, and let's get on with it!
It was a very boring day. Max Steel is patrolling the city in flight mode, looking for something to do. They were hoping to find something like exstroyer trying to get more DNA, dread having some sort of take over the world scheme, or a woman getting mugged or something like that. So far nothing has come up, and the duo was bored out of their minds.
"How about that criminal?" Steel asked.
"Nope. The cops have it handled" Max said as he saw the cop slam the thief into their car.
"What about that jewel heist?"
"No, some guy with a gun stopped it"
"What about that scinance lab robbery?"
"Someone stopped it, but I don't know who" Max said. If you are familiar with some of my other fan fics, then you know that this is my OC Ann. But she won't appear in this story.
"Man, this is so boring. I would like to see the ultra-link mother ship more than this" said Steel.
"Hey I'm sure something will turn up." Max said.
They waited for something to happen but not that much happened. They saw some guy forgetting where he parked, a dude waiting for the bus for 40 minutes before calling a cab, and a drug deal that got foiled because the man butt-dialed 911, and someone shooting part of a movie, so it was a day full of boredom.
"I give up, let's just head back to N-Tek" Max said.
"Yeah, I bet ALF's on" Steel said. They turned around ready to leave when they heard a shriek from two blocks away.
"What was that?!"
"I don't know, but I'm about to find out!" Max said. They go to the source and see what caused the ruckus. Next thing they know they see an innocent teenage girl getting attacked by Toxzon, and they rush to help her. She was very pretty, and had blue eyes and had long blonde strait hair.
"Finally some action!" Max said as he flew towards Toxzon.
"Let's kick some toxic butt!" Steel said.
"My my my, what a lovely vision of beauty we have here, such a shame it won't be around for much longer!" Toxzon said, ready to kill the girl.
"Hey Toxzon" Max Steel said. Toxzon turned around and saw Max standing right there, much to his delight.
"Max Steel! How nice of you to show up! Maybe now I can destroy you once and for all!"
"Keep dreaming Toxzon!" Max Steel said as he landed. "Now be a good boy and give up nicely"
"I don't think so" Toxzon said as he made some toxoids come out of the man holes nearby, much to the disgust of Max and steel.
"So are they ninja turtles now?" steel asked.
"Destroy them, my toxziods!" Toxzon yelled, while sounding like every power rangers monster ever. They all attack Max Steel, and Max fights back, and kills a few. They started swarming and making their giant monster like from (If that's not cannon in the cartoon, this is a fanfic, so screw off) and roared at Max.
"Well, he's the giant monster on power rangers" Steel said.
"Then let's be the megazord!" Max shouted. "GO TURBO! STRENGTH!" Max yelled. They turn into strength mode and pound the toxoids into dust. Max thought this would get Toxzon's attention, but he was still trying to get the girl, who dodged all of his attacks.
"Wow Toxzon, you're willing to kill teenage girls now? That's low even for you"
"You have no idea what I want from her Max steel" Toxzon said as he sent more toxoids after him. Max was trying to fight them off as Toxzon walked towards the girl.
"Now, where were we?" Toxzon said.
"Who are you, and what do you want from me?"
"My name is Toxzon. And I just want to nip something in the bud" he said as he gets ready to strike. He attempts to kill the girl with his toxic claws, but the girl somehow blasts him into the next ten buildings.
"The heck just happened?" Toxzon asked as he got up. The girl came up to him, and saw him slowly getting up.
"The heck did I just do?" she asked.
"I have no idea what that was, but your still going down" Toxzon said as he walked closer. "You may be hot, but there's no way I'm not going to-"
"SHUT UP!" she said as she kicked him-uh-there.
Elsewhere, Max steel finishes taking out the toxzoids, and processes as planned.
"Okay, now to take on tox-" However, Toxzon was gone, and Max had no idea what happened. He saw the damage from the girl's attack, but had no idea where toxzon was.
"Where's Toxzon?" Max said.
"Maybe he thought he could run when we were fighting the toxoids" Steel said.
"You think so?" Max asked.
"I think so, mainly because the girl is gone" steel said.
"So Toxzon got away with the girl, just because we were fight something like the putties from power rangers?" Max asked.
"Yep"
"We're dead" Max said.
"Well we better call n-tek and tell them the bad news." Steel said.
"What bad news?" Ferris said. Max turned to him and saw Toxzon in hand cuffs on the ship, and he looked like he was beaten up. Max wondered just what the heck happened.