As I walked towards the haunted house I check to make sure Zach and Bex are still with me. I'm scared, and it takes a lot to scare me. I was dared to take two people with me into the abandoned house in the middle of town. This house was said to be around when the plague hit about a hundred years ago. It's known that a family of four died in this house and was buried on all sides of it. I don't know how the house is still standing, but they say the spirits hold the house up, straight from beneath the ground. I take a deep breath when I realize we are at the front door and grab the handle turning it. Squeaking in protest the hinges are hard to turn, but with help we all rush in and have the door slam shut powerfully. I was really freaked out now; I had little hope for us making it the whole night. I grab a flashlight from my bag and lead us into what looks like it would be a family room. We all sit down and for a while it seems like everything is going to be ok. When we go to sleep I feel hopeful again. Then my dreams hit, I can't even call them dreams there nightmares. Nightmares about hands coming out of the side walls grabbing my neck and pulling me underground, fighting to stay up but the hands are strong, inhumanly strong. Like a force no living thing possesses. That's when it hits; it's the hands of the family that died here. There trying to pull me down so they can go up, up where they can live and breathe again. Right before I'm pulled all the way down I feel something on my face and wake up. I'm so happy to be alive I almost don't notice the spiders crawling on my face. But I do and I scream loudly while scratching at my face to get them off, until finally they are all gone. I grab my bags with Zach and Bex who are awake now to and run out. When we get out they look at they look at me and I can see from the street lights identical looks of horror spread onto their faces. Bex screams and runs, Peter looks at me and whispers "Your eyes are yellow." His voice is low with shock spilling from it. Then I realize what he said and am scared, I have the plague now too.
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