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BPOV

"Alright Edward, I've decided, I WILL marry you!" I said, throwing my arms around his neck, passionately connecting my lips with his.

His eyes, filled with severe shock he replied, "Really?!?"

"Of course, silly!"

EPOV

"Alright Edward, I've decided, I WILL marry you!" Bella exclaimed, ending with a kiss.

I'd give anything to be able to read her mind right now! Was she serious? I had to ask. "Really?!?"

Apparently, she was, since her reply was, "Of course, silly!"

Think, Edward, think! What am I supposed to do now? Do I ask when she wanted to get married? Yes! That's what I'll do!

"So, Bella, if that's your final decision, then, when would you like to?"

She obviously hadn't given much thought to this. I could see it all over her face as she searched for an answer. Then, finally, she answered, "AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!"

I laughed at her urgency. She really DOES want to do this after all!

"Okay, how about next week?"

"Perfect" She said trying to hide the huge grin that was starting to spread across her face.

"It's settled then," I smirked. "Oh, by the way, you'll need to arrange something with Alice."

"Why?" She questioned, bewildered.

I laughed. "Why, so you can pick out a dress with her, of course!"

She groaned, "Aw, Edward do I have to?"

"Absolutely!" I said, with a sinister edge in my voice.

As I drove to my house, we both talked about how great it will be when we are married. Well, up until Bella said, "You do remember your promise, don't you?"

Instantly, that made me scowl. Yes, yes I do remember that dreadfully regretful promise I'd made that if she'd marry me I'd change her. All I could manage to say was, "Yes,"

She seemed pleased that I had remembered. It's no wonder that SHE would be! Because, for some INSANE reason she longed to be a vampire! Yes, her intentions for that are only to be with me forever, but I just can't help regretting that promise now.

We pulled up to my house. I practically had to DRAG Bella to the front door! Not that it was a challenge for me what-so-ever, but by her resistance to my pulling I was afraid that I might hurt her. Thinking about hurting her brought up the immortality issue. On the one hand I can change her and never have to worry about hurting her, but leave her with an eternity of damnation. On the other hand, I can leave her be and run the risk of killing her myself, but never be able to be with her forever. How could I live with myself doing either? Either way, I can never win.

Thankfully, when we got inside, Alice had seen us coming and was already waiting for us with a huge grin drawn across her face.