something that just won't get out of my head until I at least write it down...please creative criticism is appreciated
Hi I'm son goku and I am ready for today. kami is given me an assignment to further improve my abilities. It's been some month's since king piccolo's defeat and me learning he left an hair...air...heir... Someone to take his evil ways when I defeated him
I've been training at kami's lookout with him and , who showed me lots of stuff! Mostly energy sensing and strength boosting; It is for when I face off with piccolo again, err.. His...um...son...I Guess. I jump into my usual outfit: my kame house uniform which fixed great! I walk outside to see them both: kami, the guardian who kinda looks like piccolo and Mr.. popo, who looks like a genie but can't grant wishes( 'oh well, we still got the dragon')
"goku-San, thank you for coming, are you ready?" "umm.. What's my training again?" kami sighs "I have a request from an alternative world, that will help with your training." I nod "A boy like yourself is beginning his own journey but it will be perilous and danger will be shown at every corner." "Like me?" does he have a tail too? kami got rid of mine so he could rebuild the moon, he and Mr.. popo won't tell me though "Unlike you, who trains in the martial arts, he trains in a different form of combat: magic." magic?.. "Like baba's?" "No, their magic is more versatile, and I knew his father." really? "his father assisted in the 1st capturing of king piccolo." I jump back surprised "REALLY!? Is he strong?!" man, I hope he can spar with me, maybe he got stronger since then, too! "Sadly, he disappeared and hasn't been seen in years and is presumed dead." "aww man" I said, sadly
Goku, I ask you to assist in his training so you can get stronger, too. Do you understand?" you had me at getting stronger "of course, kami! this will be fun!" I say proudly. Kami and Mr. popo both smiled and Mr. Gave a backpack "here is extra clothing and other items that can prove useful." he said , handing it to me "Also we though you might like these back." he sidesteps to the right and reveals..."NIMBUS!" I said at the familiar sight at the magic yellow flying cloud and something else resting on top of it..." AND MY POWER POLE, TOO!" I say as putting it holder thing on again, we have been reunited "Thanks Mr. popo!" kami stepped forward "Goku it is time to go, are you prepared?" I was going to say yes until.. "Wait! Can I see korin for a bit?" "packing some senzu's as well?" I nod "YEP!" jumping on nimbus, I fly down see master korin holding a bag "goku! I heard kami sending away so I was about to give these." he said tossing the bag, full of senzu beans "Thanks korin! See you when I get back!"
we return to the lookout to the lookout to see them waiting, I ask a question "kami?..." " yes?" I jump off nimbus "This boy I have to look over, what's his name?" kami lets out a laugh "his name is...
Negi Springfield."
one shot for now... unless I can think of stuff this... sorry I tried to proofread but... I think I might have missed something
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