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Chapter 1
Kakashi leaned against the rail as he waited for the three academy student. He mentally noticed the five minute mark was approaching before three academy students walked out from the stairwell door and sat on the steps in front of him.
"I think that some introductions are in order" said Kakashi, mostly uninterested in the group.
"Can you demonstrate sensei?" asked Sakura.
Kakashi sighed 'Smartest in the academy my ass' "My name is Kakashi Hatake, I have many like and dislikes. I also have some hobbies, and my dreams do not concern you. You're next short stuff."
Naruto leaned his head on his right hand and looked the other way "My name is Naruto Uzumaki. I like Hitome, ramen, pocky on occasions, training and learning new things when I can. I dislike ignorant people and those who commit sins against other humans like rape, assault and other such things. My hobbies are training and reading and relaxing when I have the time. My dream is free a good friend of mine and turn the as much of the world into a better place as I can."
"Who are you and what have you done with Naruto?" yelled Sakura.
"What?" said Naruto incredulous.
"Naruto doesn't read or train and you haven't asked me out on a date in the last hour."
"That's none of your concern, now I believe it's someone else's turn Hatake" said Naruto as he turned his head to look at the forest behind Kakashi.
'He is nothing like what the academy profile has on him, I need to look into this further. Just great, more work for me, whoo' thought Kakashi.
"Now I believe we need to finish the introductions as I have a life to live" said Sasuke.
"Want to train sometime, maybe trade some secrets?" asked Naruto and Sasuke shrugged.
Kakashi nodded his head "Yes of course. Pinkie your next" said Kakashi pointing to Sakura.
"My name is Sakura Haruno. My likes are " looks and Sakura and giggles. "My dislikes are Ino-pig and Naruto-Baka. My hobbies are" looks at Sasuke and giggles again. "And my dream is to" looks at Sasuke and giggles again making him scoot farther away.
"Now you gloom and doom" said Kakashi as he waved his book to Sasuke who flips him off.
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha. I have few likes and many dislikes. My hobbies are training to get stronger and my dream is to kill a certain man to avenge my clan."
'Great I have a fan girl, an avenger, and an unknown blonde. Just my luck' thought Kakashi.
"Well now that's over let's talk for a bit. We will have your real genin test will be at Training ground 7. Be there at 7:00 am sharp and don't eat or you'll just throw it up." As soon as he finished talking Kakashi disappeared in a swirl of leaves.
Naruto sighed and disappeared in a swirl of leaves as well, surprising Sakura and Sasuke he could use what Kakashi did.
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Naruto appeared at his horrible apartment in the run down part of Konoha and walked in to see it in the same condition he had left it in. He had placed security seals around the house and they kept vandals from getting in which worked wonders since he knew how to make them. Once they stopped coming he started having clones under a henge buy nice furniture and fix up his apartment as he trained.
Right now his apartment was in such good condition it could pass off as a luxury apartment if he didn't live in this part of Konoha. The young Uzumaki summoned a female clone version of himself to start his dinner and he sat in his living room that had a small mat in the middle for him to meditate on. He sat down in the lotus position and slowly let his conscious drift away to his mindscape.
Mindscape
Naruto opened his eyes and saw himself in the middle of a forest with large trees surrounding him before he sensed a presence and took off after it. He arrived in an open clearing with a small water fall that emptied into a medium sized lake. In the middle of the lake was a small two story Japanese style house that had a wooden bridge that led to it.
Naruto walked across the small bridge and slid open the door to the house and walked inside. He looked around to see everything in order and the house relatively clean like usual before he walked up the stairs to his right. Once the blonde got to the top he walked to the end of the hallway on his left and opened the last door on his right to see a large bedroom.
It had door leading to a small bathroom in the left corner and a king size bed with two black metal knight stand next to it that held scrolls and one had a green cup. The bed had crimson sheets with gold accents on it and he noticed a lump in the middle of the bed move ever so slightly.
He moved closer to see a girl no older that sixteen sleeping soundly in it. She had crimson colored hair that matched the bed sheets perfectly and her pale, unblemished skin contrasted perfectly with her dark colored hair. Even with the covers he could tell that she had a figure most people would kill for, then he saw her open her eyes and turn to him. Her eyes are what he liked the most about her, bright red with black cat like slits that seems to almost glow.
The girl stat up and the covers on her fell down to show what she wore. She had on a red kimono with gold foxes that matched the bed spread perfectly and seemed to accentuate her soft white skin.
"How was your sleep Hitome-chan?" asked Naruto as he sat down next to her.
"Fine Naru-kun" said the girl while rubbing the sleep out of her eye.
"Well I just wanted to see you for a bit before my genin test tomorrow against my new sensei."
"Oh well good luck, don't do anything stupid" said Hitome.
Naruto nodded his head "I won't, don't worry."
"You know you will" said Hitome making Naruto laugh a bit.
Hitome giggled "Well it was nice seeing you Naruto-kun."
Naruto gave her a hug and kissed her on the cheek "You to Benihime-chan. I will contact you through the link before I start the test so you can watch." Hitome nodded her head and Naruto slowly disappeared from her view and she lie back down and fell asleep once more.
Real world
Naruto opened his eyes and as soon as he sniffed the air his nose was assaulted by the wonderful smell of ramen and other food. He walked over and sat down at the table as the clone he made was setting it with an assortment of food. Some fruits, meats, vegetables, dango, and ramen were placed on different plates and sat on the table in front of him.
Naruto almost drooled at the wonderful sight in front of him until he sensed his clone next to him. He turned his head to see his blood clone, the one who took on the girl form of him and cook his food for him while keeping the house clean. He had asked it why it took the form and just said it preferred this form over the other one.
"Yes?"
"I was wondering if I am aloud to stay instead of going to sleep like I always do. I will keep the house clean and make sure your food is ready when you get here."
Naruto thought it over "Sure why not? Just don't make a mess. I will have another clone henge and go get you some other clothes so you can leave the house if you need to grab anything. When I finish with this seal we should be able to make you a real person, not just a blood clone.
The clone smiled and nodded her head "Thank you and can you call me Naruko?"
Naruto nodded his head "Hm…. Sure if you like that." The clone nodded her head and left him to eat his food. Once Naruto had finished his food he walked into his room and lay on his queen size bed that had the same bed spread as Hitome's had. He felt his eye lids get heavy and let them fall and sleep over come him.
Next day
Naruto woke up and felt someone's arms wrapped around his midsection. He wriggled free from the person's grasp and fell on the floor eliciting a dull thud that woke up the other occupant in his bed. He lifted his head up and saw Naruko yawning and stretching.
She stopped and opened her eyes "Oh hello Naru-kun."
'Naru-kun' thought Naruto in confusion.
"Um, hello Naruko. Why were you in my bed and hugging me in my sleep?"
Naruko's face turned a dark shade of red "I had nowhere to sleep so I slept in your bed. I was hugging you because it was dark and scary when I heard all these noises outside."
Naruto's features softened once she said that "Sorry Naruko-chan. I forgot you had nowhere to sleep and I didn't know you were afraid of the dark." He got up and wrapped her in a hug as an apology.
Naruto let go of her and noticed the light blush on her face "I will have a clone go and get you clothes while I'm out. I will be back soon ok?" Naruko nodded her head and Naruto walked out of the room and changed his clothes. He wore a simple mesh shirt, dark grey top, black long sleeved and unzipped cloak with black combat boots. (I say black flash as he wears mainly black clothes and it comes into play a bit later but isn't much of anything in later chapters. I will go into detail about how he can use this later on.)
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Not a second later did he appear on top of a roof a few feet away from a clothes store. He made a seal less clone that appeared next to him and henged into a regular woman chunin and jumped down to the streets below.
"Don't make a scene" said Naruto and he disappeared again in a black flash. He appeared on top of one of the trees at the training ground Kakashi had told them to meet. The blond shinobi pulled out a familiar orange book that the one eyed jonin always had on him and began to read. He stood there for more than an hour until he sensed Kakashi appear on the ground. Naruto jumped down and looked up from his book for a minute to see Kakashi's single eye widen that Naruto was using chakra to stay on top of the tree.
"So are we going to get started?" asked Naruto as his book disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
Kakashi regained his composure and set a clock on one of the three training post "You have until noon to get the two bells on my waist so come at me with intent to kill."
Kakashi waited to let the information sink in "Ready…..Set…..GO!" As soon as he said it Sasuke and Sakura jumped off into the tree line to the right of them but Naruto stayed put.
"I said go" said Kakashi tensing slightly as he knew what Naruto was going to do.
"I know" said Naruto. Then in a cloud of smoke a tri bladed kunai that Kakashi knew all too well appeared in his hand. Naruto threw it at Kakashi who deflected it with his own kunai and saw Naruto disappear in a black flash. He knew that would happen so he turned to where the kunai went only to see it sticking out of the ground. Then he felt cold steal press against his neck and knew that he was already beaten.
"How did you get over there?" asked Kakashi, he knew that was exactly like his sensei's kunai but Naruto didn't appear over there.
"I have upgraded it to a degree so I can appear around the kunai instead of right next to it. The fourth never had time to practice with because he was in the middle of a war but I've had plenty of time since I was given my inheritance by the hokage. I always sent a blood clone to the academy and made him act like an idiot to lessen any attention on me" said Naruto. Naruto removed the kunai from Kakashi's neck and disappeared again and reappeared next to the kunai on the ground and picked it up.
"Well, I don't want to push my luck anymore than I already have. You're an experienced jonin, I'm just a genin with a shiny kunai that has dulled slightly in your eyes." Kakashi stayed silent, not sure of what to say but silently agreeing on what Naruto said. He knew much about the Hiraishin and knowing how it worked meant Naruto couldn't fight him for long.
Kakashi watched him disappear and a note took his place. He picked it up and it read "The meaning of the test is teamwork. I can work with them if they cooperate but my blood clone already said that they don't want to work as a team. No one saw what happened here so I can keep my jutsu a secret for a little while longer so we don't have Mr. Avenger go up and leave to find power."
Kakashi sighed and let the note fly away in the wind, he knew that something like this would happen. Someone of Naruto's caliber would be fine with working with almost anybody but a fan girl and an avenger who's been treated like a god think they don't need help.
'Guess he's going to have to change that' and Kakashi pulled out his favorite book and jumped off into the forest. He first caught Sakura in a small Genjutsu and she passed out. After that he fought Sasuke for a while then buried him in the dirt up to his head. A few minutes later Sakura was now tied to a tree with the Sasuke sitting next to her with a box of food.
Then Sasuke held out his food to her "Here you need to eat so you have energy to fight later on." Sakura was about to reply but the sky turned to gray and Kakashi appeared in a lightning bolt.
"What did I say?!" he yelled.
"Enough already Kakashi, just get it over with" said Naruto as he kept eating his food completely ignoring the storm clouds and the KI Kakashi was emitting.
Kakashi sighed "I gave you this chance to see if you would act like a team and it seems you got it. So you all pass!"
"Really?!" said Sakura.
Kakashi nodded his head and Sakura screamed "Yay!" Sasuke simply smirked and walked back to his clan compound. Kakashi walked up and cut Sakura her lose and disappeared in a cloud of smoke while Sakura went after Sasuke. Naruto just stayed where he was and finished his food before setting the box down and standing up. Before he could walk off he heard a faint noise behind him and turned to see his blood clone he sent to get clothes with cuts everywhere on his body.
"What happened?" asked Naruto slightly shocked that someone actually injured it this much
"I came back to the apartment and found Naruko tied up to a chair. I went to help her and got blind sighted by a few shinobi. I didn't want to reveal myself so I fought back a little with a kunai then took off. All I know is they took Naruko and that they are in the forest outside of Konoha. I believe they are part of Iwa so they will use mainly earth jutsu."
Naruto nodded his head "Ok, you go inform the Hokage of what happened." The clone nodded his head and took off towards the tower while Naruto locked onto Naruko's chakra signature and took off.
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He stopped a few yards away from where he could sense Naruko and her captors. He raised his hand to his forehead and channeled chakra then brought it down making a mask form together. (Just like Ichigo does and it looks the same)
'This genjutsu should be enough to scare them a bit, get them off their game' thought Naruto.
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A man with an Iwa headband stood next to his two comrades surrounding a young blonde girl. They were told to kidnap a young blonde kid and then wait for Iwa anbu to show up and take them back to their village. As they stood there they felt killer intent fill the area making them a bit nervous before a kid came out of the tree line and to their surprise he looked no older than the girl. The strange thing about him was the mask he wore. It seemed so demonic and it radiated KI that matched the one he currently felt.
"I wonder why Iwa shinobi are in Konoha territory?" said the boy in a demonic voice.
"You have two choices here, you can leave without the girl or die. Chose wisely and you have about ten seconds to decide" said the child.
One of the men shook his head and drew a kunai "C'mon guys! Your letting a child with some mask scare you? Let's take him down before the others get here" said the man. His words shook the other two out of their stupor and they drew kunai and charged the boy.
Naruto smirked behind his mask when he saw the three men charge him. The closest got within five feet of Naruto before the Uzumaki used them underestimated him to grabbed the man's face and pushed it with enough chakra to send him flying deep into the forest, breaking his neck at the power he applied to push him. Before the second man could even register what happened he received a kick to the chin causing his neck to snap and send him flying into a tree limb above them. The third man was a bit luckier as he had time to react and as Naruto attacked the second man he prepared a jutsu.
"Doton: Jigoku no Supaiku(Earth Release: Spikes of Hell)" said the man as spikes erupted from the ground and charged at Naruto. The young Uzumaki threw a kunai at the man who moved his head to the side to avoid the kunai as it passed harmlessly by him before Naruto appeared behind him in a black flash. Faster than the man could react he thrust his kunai into the man's back making the Iwa ninja slam into the ground kicking up debris and dust.
Naruto stood up and walked over to and let his mask disappear the same way it appeared but he put his hand on the bottom and made a motion like he was going to take it off and it disappeared. He kneeled next to her and cut the ropes binding her wrist and ankles together. As soon as he did she hugged him while saying "Thank you" over and over again. He set her down after he pried her off and looked her over.
"You're ok, right?"
Naruko nodded her head "Yes I am. They just tied me up and set me out here nothing else." Naruto sighed then placed a hand on her shoulder and they disappeared in a black flash before reappearing in his bedroom.
"Ok well you can go to sleep and I will meet you in here later." Naruko nodded her head and lay down on the bed and covered herself up.
As Naruto left he heard her say "Goodnight, Naruto-kun."
"Goodnight, Naruko-chan" said Naruto before he closed the door behind him.
I will hopefully have the second one out very soon. Thanks for reading!
