when you review this be critical as you like but be nice about it here is chapter one. it may or may not be really long. enjoy!
"Fernstep, you're having kits?" her sister, Silverlake, gasped.
Fernstep swung around and glared at her sister.
"Keep your voice down! I don't want anyone to know."
Silverlake nodded, understanding.
"I'm expecting kits with Longwhisker. What about you?" She meowed.
"Emberstone. He already knows about us. I told him a little while ago." She meowed.
"Longwhisker knows to. I'm so happy for you!"
"I'm happy for you to. It's too bad our parents are from different clans, otherwise this would be so much easier." Fernstep meowed sadly.
"Time to go ThunderClan!" the leader, Willowstar called.
"See you next moon." Silverlake meowed.
Fernstep nodded, and they departed after their own clans.
The next day, Fernstep padded over to her mother, Appleleaf.
"Can I talk to you in private?" She asked.
Appleleaf nodded and they left camp. Fernstep took her to her favorite sunny patch of clovers in the woods. Sitting down, she took a deep breath.
"I'm expecting kits."
Appleleaf's eyes widened.
review! And I am always really busy, so I may not update right away. Now I understand everyone else's probs. Oh well.