Hiya ppl im kimicutie i hope you like my story pleasereview you no like tips and stuff um stuff you like and dont like im new to this so well u no lol :)

She was in her garden all alone thinking to her self , suddenly her sister appeard out of no where facing away from her .Her sister started to walk towards the egde of the garden only facing forward she tried to speak to her sister but the words got stuck in her throut she had a feeling something bad was about to happen. Her sister stoped and slowly turned around she looked at her sisters face and screamed

Oohhhh cliffhanger lol

Haruno woke up she felt sick with fear sweat trickled down her forehead she tried to get out of bed, her bones ached in protest 'oh come on dont fail me now' she mumbled but it was no use she fell out of bed 'oouucchh , oh for goodness sake not now i dont want to be late starting a new school' sigh she though it was not use. 'KARRRIINNAAA'
(BY THE WAY ITS KARINA NOT KARIN THERE DIFFRENT CHARACTERS)
'WHHHATTTT DO YOU WANNNT' karina cames stomoing in '
oh im so sorry here let me get you up" she quickley added carefully karina took haruno to the kitchen ' ok now lets see ill make you some breakfast then ill make your lunchhh thennnn'
'you will rest karina" interupted haruno 'oh im sorry haruno i do go on abit dont it well i just cant help me self after well you no wot after that i felt like i was the next in charge' karina smiled and went to cook some breakfast after ten minutes she came over haruno was deep in thought thinkin about her dream 'HHEEREEE YYYOOOUUU AAARRREEE" shouted karina excitedly she always did " GGIIIYYYYAAAAAAA' haruno tumbled out of her seat

ok i have skipped breakfast its a bit boring now if you want to read the rest ill be generous and wait for 3 reveiws good or bad lol