This is my first Fan fiction so all kind of criticism is appreciated if you think its a load of math then say it, if you love it still tell me anything you have a problem with and please if you like it follow much more to come with this.
"Location the candy kingdom, I've been called to talk with the ruler of this land for a top secret mission, so secret if the details were leaked i would be hunted for my failure and spend the rest of my life in the dungeon" says Finn,
Bubblegum emerges from the hall "Finn stop messing around and hurry up we don't have time to waste",
Finn smiles flipping towards the door and rolls into the room "what's the haps peebles" she smiles at him gesturing to a envelope on the table "all i can tell you is your destination, the rest of the information is in the envelope, only to be opened when you arrive",
Finn smiles again and lunges into the air landing on the table next to the envelope "so this is a secret mission",
She looks back at him shaking her head "no Finn its just protocol, if it was i wouldn't know the contents of the envelope, you will understand when you arrive alright" she looks to Peppermint butler and points to the other envelope " Peppermint will head to his destination and you can assume your jobs are the same but for different ends"
She looks back at Finn "well hurry up, go" Finn hurries out after Peppermint butler.
Finn walks to the edge of the Candy kingdom, Peppermint butler walking away as they exit the walls and waves to Finn, "Peppermint wait, i cant ask what this is about but is it really that important" Peppermint butler smiles before turning to Finn "yes master Finn this is of the upmost importance, but you are right when you say i cannot tell you the details because i my self do not know, it seems only royals know as of now but if you hurry you can find out sooner" Finn smiles a tooth grin then slaps his knee "guess i better get going" Peppermint smiles wider " mystery moves him even faster than a kiss from a princess, he truly is an adventurer".
Finn begins to slow down looking around him and at the envelope, "i totally forgot to read where i was going, if i had jake here this would be a lot faster, but it cant be helped he was busy with dog stuff" he reads the envelope which has the location written on the back, "Hmm looks like i almost went in the right direction but I'm closer to the flame kingdom, then i just have to go north west and ill be there" Finn begins to walk stopping to think, "i haven't seen Flame P in a while, i wonder how she is" Finn continues on his way.
Finn finally arrives in an open field looking curiously at his map, "this is where I'm supposed to go, maybe there are more instructions inside the envelope" opening the envelope Finn finds two pictures and a small note, 'Dear Finn you mission is to escort to important people back to the candy kingdom where they will begin preparations for a royal event, you will find them 100 meters to the north of this location' Finn scratches his chin " 100 meter why didn't they just meet me here" again looking 'remember Finn its protocol honestly this is old fashioned and pointless but it cant be helped' he smiles and nods "Pb gets it".
Finn arrives noticing two sitting talking in the distance, one is a tall male humanoid wearing shining gold armour with wavy blonde hair, his skin is a similar cream colour but shining like his armour, the other is a girl, shorter than him with similar colour hair but it is straight down to her shoulders, she is wearing a long white dress.
Finn runs to them waving them down, the male looks Finn down then smirks, "this is our escort, he's but a boy" Finn frowns looking at the male "please prince be civil, he went on this mission far from his home to aid us, i am Gabriella and this is the Cloud prince, its a pleasure to make your acquaintance" Finn smiles again and nods "I'm Finn the human and i was sent to be your escort i guess, I'm sure we should go now" Finn points towards the candy kingdom, Cp looks at him squinting "if that is all your here to do what do we need you for again, you don't look like you could lift the sword on your back" Finn smiles bigger,
"I'm the hero of Ooo, my job is to protect your royal butt from bad guys that might attack you and the lady"
Cp looks at Gabriella and sighs "lets go then".
Half way there and there hasn't been any activity with the group, Finn looks at them stopping "we should rest, we've made great time" Cp frowns looking down at Finn scrounging through his backpack "tired are we human, i could walk the distance of Ooo 5 times and still have the energy to kill a Basilisk" Finn doesn't lift his head from his bag simply pointing to Gabriella "i could keep going as well but I'm just watching out for the lady's health, and its just about lunch time, my brother always tells me to never miss lunch" Finn smiles.
They begin to travel again this time Finn making small talk "i understand that he is the Cloud prince, but why are you also coming Gabriella are you his maid" Gabriella smiles and goes to answer but Cp grabs his collar roughly "watch your tongue, obvious you do not know your place to ask such questions" Gabriella places her hand on his shoulder "he meant no harm prince we cannot expect other races to be understand of our customs" Cp releases Finn and walks away "royalty in the cloud kingdom is paired with a commoner child from birth to give them understanding of all their peoples, as you can understand we are close that is why he reacted in that way, he was just concerned for my feelings" Finn nods then looks at the prince "speaking of which i though cloud people were small cute puffy party animals" she laughs well just like the candy kingdom and the flame kingdom there are many forms of cloud people but these are not genetic but instead indicate the power of the person the humanoid form shows the most powerful type of cloud citizen, then of course the royals are higher than a normal type like me" she smiles "shall we continue".
Finn and his company arrive at the candy kingdom which has changed slightly since Finn left, Streamers line the streets with balloons and banners and horns sound as they enter, "what in globs name is all this",
Finn and the other enter and see Peppermint butler who proceeds to greet them "Welcome Cloud prince and his conscience" he laughs as do they, "and welcome back Finn, slower than i expected" Finn frowns and Cp laughs again "yes he was disappointing" Finn shrugs off the words and looks at Peppermint butler "since we had similar jobs who were you meant to escort" Peppermint butler smiles at him and looks behind him, "that would be me Finn" Finn turns to see Flame princess standing behind him smiling, Finn is shocked and almost hugs her stopping before then laughing "wait if Flame P was coming why was i sent to escort Cp and Gabriella" Bubblegum walks down the stairs wearing a singed lab coat "that's simple Finn, you wouldn't of made it here if you were the one escorting her" she smiles at Cp "i trust my knight kept you safe" he smiles looking at her "i would have preferred the candy butler".
Finn sitting outside the main hall swinging his legs when Bubblegum emerges with Cp, Gabriella and Flame princess, they all exchange nods and head to their own rooms, Fp stops with Finn smiling at him "I've missed you Finn i was beginning to worry you were bored with me" Finn blushes jumping up "what no way Flame P its just i..., I mean jake said its better to be mysterious and this book..., Sorry i haven't visited recently" Finn frowns then looks at Fp "escort me to my room knight" she giggles spinning towards the stairs "with pleasure your highness" Finn replies laughing after her.
Flame princess and Finn sit on the window-cill staring at the stars "Flame P can you tell me what all the fuss is about, why is the cloud kingdom the candy kingdom and the flame kingdom sending their royalty to talk",
She giggled then looks at Finn "first the candy kingdom only offered their hall for the meeting and secondly its nothing really big just royal so a fuss has to be made, there is going to be a wedding between the Cloud princess, Cp's older sister, and Dialb a royal of the Flame kingdom, actually the son of the late duke so my cousin, sort of, we are here to plan the wedding and festivities, but i don't know much about weddings" Finn falls back onto the floor looking at the roof "i don't get most of that bizz but does that mean Dialb or what ever will be the Flame king or Cloud king" Fp spins around looking down at Finn " no he wont be the king he isn't the next heir, and she may be the oldest but in the Cloud kingdom only men can be Heirs to the throne so Cp is next in line" Finn smiles then adjusts his hat "so you are in line to be the next Flame ruler, like the queen" she smiles "i guess so".
The sun rises and Finn wakes in his bed, Finn heads downstairs and see's his brother cooking eggs on the stove, "hey jake when did you get home" jake looks at Finn then returns to his cooking "Umm I'm not sure some time late you were asleep, the stress is really getting to me, wanna go fight some monsters i need to wind down" Finn looks at a stain on the floor " sorry jake important business in the candy kingdom, your welcome to come" jake looks at him " i might skip that, don't feel like messin with royal bizz, if you come home tonight we can play beemo" Finn nods getting changed "sound good but i better hurry are the eggs done".
Finn walks into the Candy kingdom fixing his hat with food in his mouth, Finn ran up the stairs to the castle where he saw Fp and Cp talking and laughing, He went to run up to them until he saw Cp hug Fp after which Finn hid watching them, Cp let go and smiled at her then heading into the palace, Finn sat down trying to gather his thoughts 'Flame P knows him, they may have known each other for a long time, their kingdom is trying to spur relations between each other and both are Heirs to their throne' Finn is lost in thought until Pb sits next to him "good morning Finn, whats up" Finn screams jumping away "oh Peebles its you, nothings up why" she smiles standing up "if nothing up then come with me i need some help" Finn looks back at Fp standing in looking towards the sky, Pb looks back "coming Finn?" He runs after silently.
Finn enters and sees Peppermint butler standing next to a cabinet "please princess i can move this by my self, there is no need to bother Finn" she looks at him the frowns "you wont allow me to help so I'm getting the Finn to take my place, please Finn if you will, follow where Peppermint leads you" Finn nods and moves to the cabinet bending down and lifting, surprisingly its light Finn notices Peppermint Struggling intensely and realises he is carrying the entire weight on his own, Finn smiles and looks at Pb "this sure is heavy princess, Can we move it quickly" he winks at Peppermint who frowns, Pb points to the left side of the hall and walks out giggling "are you getting lazy Finn" Finn scowls and looks at Peppermint "now even Peebles thinks I'm not good enough" Finn proceeds to drop the cabinet in its place landing on Peppermint butlers foot who screams in pain.
Finn enters the garden finding Fp sitting on a stone amongst flowers "you are the prettiest" Fp looks at Finn and blushes "wha.. What" Finn smiles and walks towards her placing his hand on a flower, these flowers are no where near as pretty as you are" he smiles again at her as he pulls his hat down over his eyes "good morning Finn" her face reddens, the flowers at her feet singe, she jumps from the rock and walks towards the castle, she turns to him "say it again, please" Finn's face becomes blank as he walks to her, he stops his face just before hers, "you are more beautiful than any flower, that's why they burn, they cant stand up to your beauty" Fp turns around burning up then walks off "thanks you" she whispers.
The sun sets and the four finally leave the hall, after speaking a little they notice Finn asleep across from the door, Cp laughs "to think this human spoke of being the hero of Ooo and yet here he sleeps while monsters attack innocent people all the time" Pb steps forward " be nice Finn sat outside the hall for the entire six hours we worked, quietly i might add, that's a feat i never thought he would manage, if he's asleep then we know it took a lot to do so" Fp frowned then walked over and sat next to him "your to mean to Finn he tries his best, he may be stupid and quick to act but he never thinks of him self its always for others, he's my hero" Pb frowns and looks at her " yes well we are all tired so shall we call it a night i can have dinner sent to your rooms" Cp nods then heads off with Gabriella, Pb follows and signals Peppermint to begin cooking dinner, Fp sits with Finn smiling at him sleeping.
Finn wakes up and is in his bed "huh where am i, home but how" Jake walks up and laughs "oh Peppermint butler brought you home, said something about you being fast asleep and keeping Fp up all night watching you, so he offered to take you home, smooth bro" Finn looks at him and frowns, getting up and walking to the window "i wanted to be there when she came out to help her wind down but i guess i blew it" Finn sighed and walked down stairs Followed by jake "nah bro she stayed up all night to watch over you, if anything that's proof your in, or at least she is worried about you" Finn smiles then looks at jake " are you coming today less royal mess and more preparing, might need your skills to help set up everything, and i wouldn't mind some live action pointers" Jake laughs and grabs some milk "my tips wont help much now but if you have worries I'm there for ya, hope not to much lifting don't wanna hurt my back" jake giggles then gestures to the milk "breakfast?".
So this is the first chapter id like to hear if you enjoy the characters of Gabriella and Cloud prince, i was going to give him and actual name like Dialb or Gabriella but i thought the nameless fitted well and it gives more room for change if others like the character, i like the idea of him Thanks :)