Hey everyone! This is my first Fan Fic... I really love writing but I know I can't exactly write so well! So I would really appreciate some comments to help improve my story! :) Thanks!
Fae took a step back. She was covered in bright light. Suddenly, something, just something of some sort, rushed at her and on her wrist. It disappeared and Fae was filled with a fuzzy warmth. What…?
Fae pulled on her school uniform tiredly. Sigh. It had been a weird dream. She yawned and rubbed her blue eyes. Pulling the blue ribbon on her table, she worked on her brown hair. She thought fuzzily, "what's this? The ribbon feels-" Fae screamed. She had been trying to use her TIE as a ribbon! "Oh that was stupid haha…" Fae laughed at herself. She looked at her clock after finishing her final touches to her side ponytail. Fae got the next wake-up for her morning. Late. Again. Sigh.
Running down the stairs hastily, she tripped and her heart pounded. Fae's eyes widened. Suddenly, everything went slow motion. She did a full flip over and landed steadily on her feet. "Wha-? " She remembered being late and got to her feet again. Suddenly, she pushed with all her might on her left foot, and amazingly, her right foot pushed against the ground and her body left the ground, into the SKY. Fae was dumbfounded. Her body was thrown into high speed and she could feel the wind pushing against her body. Feeling immense power, Fae screamed instinctively,
"MEW MEW FAE! METAMOPHORSIS!" Bright light enveloped her.
Opening her eyes, she almost did not believe what she saw. She wore pale yellow gloves and boots up to her knees. She felt the soft fabric of the yellow dress against her body. Her body was so light. Sparkly wings sprouted from her back. A rush of adrenaline rushed through her. "I…can…fly? That's impossible…" Fae shut her eyes. A heavy feeling struck her and her wings disappeared. She hit the ground hard…