Hi everyone! Pease send reviews telling me what you think and what you'd like to see in the story. My first chapter is on the smaller side so I can see if you guys are interested. The following chapters will be longer. The text in italics are peoples thoughts.

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Disclaimer: I'm not Veronica Roth and I do not own Divergent.


Once they jump from the train and are safely on the rooftop Max and Eric walk to the other end of the roof and wait for the initiates.

Max: "Did you see? We got a girl from Amity and one from Abnegation. You and Four have your work cut out for you."

Eric: "Yeah. Let's hope they fall off the roof."

Eric eyes up the new initiates as they jump from the train trying to figure out which ones might just stand a chance here and which ones he'll have fun playing with. One Dauntless born teeters on the ledge ready to fall. Eric smiles inside hoping she does then he turns to watch as the Amity girl jumps from the train. She's had a smile on her face since her blood dripped over the coals. He's looking foward to ripping that smile from her face.

Calissa's feet leave the train floor and she feels free as she flies through the air. There's a surge of energy and excitement. Her feet hit the roof and she intentionally rolls forward before hopping back up .

Eric: Impressive. Amity's one of the few to stick the landing. She might actually stand a chance... if she jumps.

Once standing, Callissa's eyes find Eric's.

Callissa: Wow. I wonder who that is. He's hot.

Callissa smiles at Eric. His expression remains the same. Uninterested.

...

After the Abnegation girl jumps off the building and into the dark hole below everyone looks at each other wondering who's going to be brave enough to go next. Callissa eyes up the Candor boy who was picking on Abnegation and decides to lighten the mood.

"Hey Candor! I bet I can beat you down that hole. Loser shaves their head!"

Candor looks over at her. There's no way I'm losing to an Amity.

Callissa makes a run for the ledge but Candor grabs her and pushes her to the ground. She quickly reaches up and grabs his foot tripping him. She jumps to her feet and runs for it. Candor grabs her as she reaches the ledge and they both tumble over.

Eric: Holy shit. Initiation might actually be interesting this year.

Both hit the net at the same time side by side. Candor lands on Callissa's left hand and he gets a knee to the stomach. Both grunt in pain.

Four: What the hell were they thinking? Not even in Dauntless for an hour and they're already trying to kill themselves.

Callissa busts out laughing. "That was awesome!"

Four pulls Callissa off the net while someone else pulls off Candor. Callissa wraps her arms around him. "Hi! I'm Callie. What's your name?'

Four pushes Callie back. "Second jumpers Callie and Peter!... Welcome to Dauntless. Go stand over to the side."

Callie and Peter are greeted by a crowd of enthusiastic people on their way to the side.

Four: First an Abnegation and now an Amity. Great.

Callie smiles and elbows Peter. "Guess it was a tie. I'll have to try harder next time!"

Peter: Damn Amity. It won't be a tie next time.