NBC horse story

by rita624

The NBC chariters are horses in this story so horse lovers and NBC lovers come here and read this.Jack has just became a father and his son Kyle will soon be leader of the herd,but Oogie hears about the new prince and comes back for revage.

I decide to take a break from NBC Bambi sytle for awhile and now I am working on a story where the NBC chariters are horses.Set many years after the moive(because I don't feel like tpying the whole thing)Jack and Sally are married and Sally is with foal and will soon give birth,but Oogie is back and hears about the news and wants to seak revage.Can Jack save his herd,his wife and their foal from death?

Chapter 1 The birth of Kyle

It was a sunny spring day in the meadow,Jack and Sally were taking their morning walk together."So Sally,you think the foal will come tonight?"Jack asked looking at his wife."I think so Jack.We just have to hope for the best,"Sally said.That night,Jack had to go talk to the mayer(who was a black horse)for a moment.Sally was left sleeping in the tall grass.Then she felt a sharp pain in her tummy."Oh no!No,not now!Not here!"She let out a loud winning and Jack heard it and thought Sally was in trouble."Mayer!Thats Sally crying!I must go!She could be in trouble!"

Jack and the mayer went running to the voice of Sally and found her lying in pain."Sally,whats wrong?"Sally lifted her head."Jack!Your here to see are foal be born,"

Around midnight,Sally was still in pain.Jack and the mayer stand with her the whole night until 2:00 in the morning.Sally let out a grut and the foal was born."Sally,it's here!Look!"Jack started rearing and neighing with joy.Sally heard a soft neigh and looked behind her and saw the most betaful sight in her life,her foal.The foal was a paint,but had its fathers eyes and spots color,which was brown because Sally's are black,and it opened its eyes and looked at Sally,Jack,and the mayer.The whole herd came running and formed a circle around the new parnets and their foal and stood there looking at the little prince."What are you two going to name it?"the mayer asked."Well,we are going to name him Kyle,"Sally said licking her new prince clean.Jack knew this was going to be the start of something new.

I just LOVE horses,so I thought this up.So people,PLEASEEEEEEEEEE REVIEW!ASAP!To all horse lovers like me.