Hello! So this is my first story and I'd LOVE some constructive criticism to improve my writing. Looking for OC's so if you have some the basic things I need you to tell me are at the end of the chapter . The story idea is based on Pinkittwice54's fanfiction, but the story and plot will be completely different. The only thing I have borrowed from the story is the idea of adoption. Also, I do know that Adam (skydoesminecraft) , Ty (Deadlox), and Quinton (Huskymudkipz) have quit Team Crafted along with Bluemonkey. In this story, they shall not quit as they are mine to manipulate as I please :D OKAY I' MAD NOW. My story was deleted because someone reported it for directly copying. Again, this story is COMPLETELY DIFFERENT From pinkittwice54's story. I'm only using the idea of adoption, NOT THE ACTUAL STORY. I am actually mad, and that takes a lot.

DISCLAMER! Despite what I said, I do not in fact own any of Team Crafted or anyone else mentioned in this story, except for my OC. My OC, by the way is Beth Dahlberg, long wavy black hair with dyed red tips, 16 years old, almost 17, pale, nerdy, shy yet crazy, loves watching all of Team crafted and loves reading. Without further ado, let us begin! (I decided to put this in the disclaimer, I did not copy pinkittwice54's story directly!)

Beth's POV

2014. Two thousand and fourteen. Any person my age would be spending time with their families, maybe going out with their friends, boyfriends, on New Year's Eve. What am I doing?

I'm stuck here in this adoption centre cleaning the kitchens, bored out of my mind.

Once I finished, I ran upstairs to the dormitories, jumped on my bed and opened up my laptop.

I signed into youtube and saw that one of my favourite minecraft youtubers, Skydoesminecraft had uploaded a new video.

Suddenly, the door burst open and the owner of the place, or Joy, as I like to call her,(Ahh the irony) burst in.

She stormed over to me, swung me around and gave me a sharp slap on the cheek. "Turn that stupid thing off and be normal for once!" She yelled.

Tears started to build in my eyes and I quickly shut the laptop and nodded.

When she left, my best friend Elisabeth, or Liz, quickly jumped onto my bed. "You okay?" She said, concern obvious in her voice.

I nodded and gently pushed her off the bed.

"I know you're lying." She said sadly and walked back to her bed.

I put the laptop under the bed with the rest of my possessions, which included $2000 dollars I may or may not have stolen before I was put in here, my purse, clothes, and a few other things.

I curled up under the pillows and dreamt of a time before my father went insane and my mother died.

Adam's POV

"Back in a minute guys, my phone is ringing. " I yelled and went to my phone.

"Hello?" I said.

"Is this Adam Dahlberg?" The deep male voice said, he sounded Australian.

"Yes…." I said hesitantly and took a sip of water.

"Well, it turns out you have a sister, in an adoption centre in Australia. You may adopt her or you can leave her at the centre."

I spat out my water and it went EVERYWHERE. "What!? I mean, I'd love to adopt her, but I need a little more information." After all, this could be a prank call.

"Well, her name is Beth and she's around sixteen.

"Okay, you said Australia, right?" I said, groaning. The plane ticket would probably be expensive, but I could afford it.

"Yes, can you afford a one-way ticket to…."

"Washington, yes I can." If this girl was real, I wanted to get her out of there ASAP. "How long will it be until I can adopt her?"

"She can leave as soon tomorrow, so she can be here in two days."

"Okay." I said simply, and hung up. I went back to the minecraft mini game we were playing to find they had already finished and were waiting on the skype call for me.

"Whaddup" I said as I sat back down.

I was greeted with a series of "Hey"s.

"Look guys, I need a few of you to come here tomorrow, it's important, anyone in?"

"Sure." Jerome and Mitch said, since Mitch was on holiday here for the week.

"Okay!" Ashley said.

"Thanks guys, anyways I have to sleep because I'm tiered."

"NIIIIIIGHT!" Everyone yelled, and I burst into laughter.

I hung up the Skype call and grinned like an idiot. I have a sister.

Well that's all for my first chapter, hope you guys liked it and I will see you guys later, please drop a review, I love hearing from you guys! Sorry for the ultimate horribleness of this chapter . See ya!