I know I should be updating my Harry Potter stories but I had to put this up here. I am in love with Bree and her character. The first part was in the book and I did not write myself.

Chapter One

A Deal

"Felix?" Jane said Lazily.

"Wait," the mind reader said loudly. He turned to Carlisle and spoke quickly "We could explain the rules to the young one. She doesn't seem unwilling to learn. She didn't know what she was doing"

"Of course" Carlise said eagerly, looking at Jane. "We would certainly be prepared to take responsibility for Bree"

The human pet's heart beat twice before Jane answered, her eyes cold.

"The rules can not be changed for one little newborn, she must be punished. You know this Carlise, all your doing is wasting our time. I would like to get home before the sun goes down"

Carlise looked at me for one fourth of a second before he turned back to look at Jane, his expression grave as he realised that there was nothing he could do to help me. He knew as well as I did that I was going to die.

"Wait!"

A voice I had only heard twice but would never forget ran through the field and as I turned to look at Fred I was momentarily taken back, even thought I knew his talent the feeling of not sensing that someone else had approached us had me feeling uneasy. He looked at me, on the ground and defeated and seemed to understand what had happened.

"Let her go" he snarled, but no one seemed to be listening. I had never heard Fred mad before, in fact it was hard to remember a time when he had shown any emotion other then smiling a few times and boredom.

Part of me wanted to tell him to leave because like me he would be killed. I suddenly wished that I had told him about the clocked figures when I had had the chance. And now it was too late.

Jane looked at Fred before taking a step back, she wanted to be away from him, just as the others did. I almost smiled in satisfaction of how powerful my unlikely friend was.

"Another newborn I see" Jane said without looking at him, she turned to Carlise "I thought you said you had taken care of them all. It seems your coven is not as talent as I had heard"

"He was not in the fight" Jasper said. As soon as Fred had appeared he had moved to stand in front of the small black haired vampire, all most protectively. "I would of remembered seeing him. No one got out alive apart from Bree"

Jane thought about this before she nodded lightly, almost as though she was thinking.

"I could see how you would of missed this one…he's talented"

"Jane…"

"Hush, Felix. I know what I am doing" she smiled slightly at the yellow eyed vampires and their pet but I could see no kindness there "I shall make you a deal. They must be punished for what they did, however you may look after Bree and keep her with you, if we take this one. You know how Aro likes talent. He shall come with us and if he likes what he see's then they shall live, if not…" Her smile widened and I wondered if I looked like that when I hunted "then I think you know what will be done. Do you agree to this?"

"Yes" Carlise said, he walked behind me and placed a hand on my shoulder, I had to stop myself from flinching, something told me he would not attack me. I looked at Fred to try and think of something other then the burning of thirst I was feeling. He had yet to say anything and I wondered if he would agree to this, there had been no need for him to come back for me.

All he had done was put both of our lives at risk rather then just mind. Would he do that again in order to save us both? Every house we had been in had been the same, him using his powers to keep himself hidden and now he would have to be known and be seen.

"And you?" Jane asked Fred "Will you come with us to safe your self and Bree?"

Carlise squeezed my shoulder in comfort as Fred nodded.

This is only the first chapter and there is doing to be more and I promise they will be longer, I just wanted to get this out there.

Haraldzidla