A revised chapter one :D

This was my first fanfic and when I reread it I relised how badly I wrote it so I revised it and here is the new and improved version of it I added more detail. And corrected mistakes so review and let me know what you think

Summary: this is the story of Rose and Mason getting hot and heavy in frostbite will they go all the way or will they even get that far.

P.s: there's a lemon but im marking it soo if you don't want to read it then you can just skip over it.

Diclaimer: Richelle mead Owns the characters I just own the plot

RPOV

Uhhhh! What does he see her really I mean I know that Tasha can probably give him everything he ever wanted but still she wasn't that pretty and uhh what am I saying she's perfect for him. I frowned at the thought of her in his arms

I was off in my own world when I suddenly I bumped into someone. I looked up and saw Mason remembering what I told him yesterday I quickly grabbed his arm and started leading to my room.

"Well hello to you too," Mason said with an amused expression on his face

I quickly replied by saying " come on wasn't the deal that we would go somewhere tonight for some privacy," I told him emphasizing the word "privacy"

"I figured that it was off considering that you were drunk yesterday," Mason said with a smirk.

I ignored his comment and led him to my room all I just kept saying to myself "if Dimitri can move on and have fun then I can too." This is good mason is safe he cares about me.

We finally made it to my room and as soon as I closed the door I wrapped my arms around Mason and pulled him down closer to my face. He smiled and wrapped his arms around my waste. Then his face got serious and looked straight in my eyes and asked "you sure about this?"

I smiled Mason always the gentleman his mother raised him right. I looked up at him and nodded. And with that there was no holding back Mason smashed his lips to mine and I kissed back he then slid his hands down from the small of my back to my butt wear he picked me up and I wrapped my legs around his waist. And he led us to my bed not breaking the kiss he laid us down on my bed. He was on top of me being careful not to put all of his weight on me.

This was good I needed this I needed to be touched again I needed to forget about all my worries.

By this time Mason had moved his hands. One was behind my neck supporting me and the other had gone under my shirt to hold my breast gently then brought his hand back down my stomach to pull my shirt off I let him thinking I might as well show him a little something he threw my shirt wear it hit the door and fell down to the floor

He then proceeded to send kisses down my neck then up again to my mouth.

I felt masons hand move down my back and stomach to my jeans then I broke the kiss grabbing his hands I didn't want to go that far using Mason like this was bad enough but doing that was just a whole new level he looked up at me and asked "too much?"

I looked at him and nodded. He was so nice he didn't even try to push he just nodded and went back to kissing me I was okay with it I mean after all mason was one of my best friends and I did promise him.

Mason and I got back into our hot make out session but he didn't try to push past kissing. I had to admit mason was a great kisser. And his hands were making magic on my breast. I moaned loudly. when suddenly the door burst open and scared the shit out of Mason and me.

Mason jumped back and pushed himself far away to the foot board of my as I sat up and laid back against the head board when I turned my head I saw a very pissed off Russian. CRAP!

DPOV

I was going to talk to Rose. Her attitude was way out of line no matter what feelings I have for her she has to understand that she can't just talk to people like that it was rude and disrespectful.

I was looking for her everywhere. where the hell could she be. I haven't seen that Mason kid around so I assume there together. I growled at the thought I want her to be with someone her own age, but just the thought of her being in the arms of another man made my blood boil I have know idea how im going to watch her date other guys. It was hard enough when other guys flirted with her. "STOP DIMITRI" I yelled at myself I can do this ahh! Why is that she is the only one that can test myself control. I took a deep breath and tried to think of anything else but mine and Roses relationship God but how I longed for her lips to be on mine again her soft beautiful lips.

After searching everywhere for her I gave up and just decided to go to her room.

I was about to knock on her door when I heard a very loud moan. WHAT THE HELL! My blood boiled I grabbed the knob and started pushing the door open when something got caught in the door I look down to see MY Roza's shirt. In a rage I threw open the door to see Mason on top of MY! Roza! They sprang apart quickly looking shocked and terrified.

I walked across the room to where they were and looked directly at Mason who was now at the foot board of Roza's bed he looked up at me in complete and utter terror. I smiled inside at that. I kept my face level and told him sternly "boys are not allowed to be in the girls dorm rooms, " then I turned to face rose who looked shock " didn't I just tell you that not but one hour ago Miss Hathaway," she didn't say anything I suspect she was still shocked.

Then Mason spoke up "sorry guardian Belivok we were just... just looking for privacy," he all but stuttered

I turned to look at him and said "nonetheless you are not allowed in the girls dorms now I suggest you leave now! Before I report this little incident," he got up quick and left in a flash. Leaving me and rose alone. I took a deep breath. Control Dimitri control I chanted in my head

RPOV

After Mason left Dimitri walked to the door that mason left open and closed and locked it. Then he threw me my shirt and told me to put it on after I pulled my shirt on he grabbed a chair and sat it in front of me. He stared at me and his guardian mask was off and he looked Pissed but then I looked into his eyes and saw hurt and anger written all over his face.

I thought maybe he just might be jealous then he finally spoke and asked "what was that?" he practically growled

I thought it was obvious I making out with Mason no matter what I just saw in Dimitri's eyes I was still pissed from before. So in true rose Hathaway style I answered with attitude and said "nothing,"

He raised an eyebrow. "Really, because it didn't seem like nothing how could you do that especially after..." he stopped himself and just looked away

"After what?" I asked anxiously

"Nothing its nothing," he said

That pissed me off even more! Damn it! Why couldn't he just admit it? Why does he have to be so difficult? WHY! I really mad now I stood up from the bed and yelled "that's why I'm tired of waiting for you. I'm tired of this you say one thing but you do something that is the opposite, your hot and then your cold Dimitri you say you care about me you say you love me. But when it comes down to it you won't even own up to it. Now I want to know why!" I yelled looking down at him. Why couldn't he understand?

He stood up too "Because this cant happen rose I love you! I do but this cant happen we'll be guarding Lissa in less the a year and we cant get caught up with each other we just cant." He said the last part in a whisper that was barely audible.

It was then that I realized just how close we were. His face was so close mine. I found myself tiptoeing to his face and him leaning down his dark brown eyes looking into my soul. and with that we kissed I wrapped my arms around his neck to hold him close and he did the same to my waist he kissed me a sweet love filled kiss. Then he threw me down on my bed not forcefully but enough to get me on my back. He pulled back and looked in to my eyes I looked back and I saw love nothing but love. He was giving in he was admitting to our love even if it was for this one moment I needed to at least know that he cared. He leaned down abit asking for permission I nodded.

*LEMON STARTS HERE*

He crushed his lips to mine and this time the kiss was filled to passion and lust he grabbed my shirt and pulled it off I did the same with his. One by one items of clothing came off until I was completely naked and all he had was on was his boxers he started squeezing my breast and I moaned in pleasure he sent kisses down my jaw then I rolled us over so that I was onto of him I straddled him while his hand held my hips then up to squeeze my breast I moaned in pleasure I then felt his something hard under me I smiled and bent down to kiss his chest while moving around my hip in a circle teasing him. I heard him moan a loud and long moan. I went down and pulled his boxers of to reveal a BIG surprise waiting for me Whoa! Umm how is this thing going to fit in me? Dimitri saw my shock and said "don't worry Roza we don't..." I cut him off by crushing my lips to him he flipped us over him on top of me he pulled back and looked in my eyes while asking " are you sure," I nodded I wanted this I wanted dimitri to be the guy I gave my everything to I needed to.

Then I felt him enter me slowly I closed my eyes as I felt the sharp pain I gasped wow I had heard that it hurt at first but this was a little un expected. He immediately stopped "Roza I think we should stop" he said

I opened my eyes and looked at him shaking my head and said " no I want this keep going," with that he started to go into me deeper I dug my nails against the pain but then I felt it the pleasure I think he sensed my change in mood because then he pulled back and slowly start to rock us together I moaned in pleasure and then he started to thrust deeper and harder into me I yelped each and every time we quickened our pace and changed our position so that I was sitting him and his arms held me up as I reached my peak and I exploded in to ecstasy and soon after he did too

We collapsed me onto of him. With him still inside of me.

*LEMON ENDS*

I didn't want to be apart from him this felt so right this closeness I kissed my head and whispered " I love you Roza," I looked up and gave him a kiss

Then I rested my head on his forehead and said " I love you too Comrade."

So what do you think review please let me know :D